The Only Immortal in the Martial Arts World

The author's understanding of feudal society is too taken for granted, and the sense of immersion is extremely poor. Although the setting is good, this poisonous point can drive away a large number of potential readers. If you can stand the servants in a feudal family who care about their masters and point out this and that, you can watch it. If you can't bear it, I suggest you just leave.

Since he is a cultivator, why are there so many emotional chapters? It is said that there is no time in the mountains, and there are thousands of years in the world. Writing about emotions seems a bit weird in cultivating immortals, and besides, the protagonist is cultivating immortality alone, shouldn't he be more calm?

This book is really tiring to read, and the main character really has no brains!

The biggest poisonous point in the book is the old man. The feeling of the whole book is ruined by this old man. He is said to be a servant, but he feels like he is doing the job of being a master.

I don't know what's going on with this plot, it's not very attractive, the plot is a bit scattered, and the coherence is not strong.

What can I say, it's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, just average, very average

What bothered me was, who is the master?

They have all entered the palace, and the poison is still being pushed. .

I'm going to break your legs, but it's awesome that you don't care.

I didn't have any temper and didn't look aggrieved. I left.

Good guy, both immortality and martial arts have 7 levels. Hundred-day foundation building is the first level and is divided into two levels by the protagonist: the tenth level of Qi training and the foundation building level. I really don't know how to calculate this combat power. The combat power of the first level of Qi training is probably not the fifth scum! As a result, ordinary martial arts at the second level cannot defeat the protagonist. After a hundred days of foundation building, is the protagonist on the same level as a land god in martial arts? Otherwise, the first level of the Hundred Days Foundation-Building Immortal Way is divided into more than ten or twenty small levels, and each level only increases the combat effectiveness. However, the protagonist's combat effectiveness at the first level of Qi training is very good. In order to slow down the progress of the protagonist, he divided himself into a hundred days of foundation building. As a result, his combat effectiveness almost collapsed.

It goes without saying that it is the clear stream among today's garbage online novels. The setting is novel, the content is plain, and the depth is deep. The combat power does not seem to collapse easily. The author's writing style is also very good. I look forward to the release of this new giant book in the online literature world. I think it is the most anticipated novel in 2022. It is highly recommended. Readers who like brainless pretentious flow, the combat power collapses seriously, and readers who are scratching their heads in the later period should not read it.

Don't be misled by the comments. The protagonist is not believed by the people around him at first, but they are all his servants. They all fulfilled the protagonist's instructions with all their heart. After two incidents, the protagonist gained the absolute trust of his subordinates. Although the protagonist's subordinates may think that the protagonist's actions are wrong at first (not questioning the protagonist, the questioning is about equal status or inferior versus superior, and the protagonist's subordinates are the protagonist's servants), they will still try their best to complete the protagonist's instructions. This book is one of the few good ones.

This kind of book is very difficult to write, because it requires a very strong writing style. It is difficult to write about the immortal's mood of having no desires, no demands, free and easy, asking the heart and seeking the truth. If it is not written well, it will only make people feel bad. And it's not easy to become popular if you write it well. After all, invincible writing is very niche.

After reading this book, I personally feel that the advantages are relatively new. The disadvantages are: typos, occasionally; secondly, some chapters are not closely connected and fragmented. Overall, it's okay, but there are some problems

It's well written, I've been reading it, keep up the good work!