I Have a Divine Immortal Scroll

Why is a time traveler so naive in so many of his thoughts and actions? One moment he acts incredibly smart, the next he acts utterly stupid; it's really hard to understand. The protagonist is poorly developed.

The author of *Nine Destiny* has written several books already, yet the protagonist remains remarkably naive, or perhaps the author himself is simply that naive, or rather, extremely self-centered and foolish. The setting is the Zhou Dynasty, where nobles could kill commoners and slaves without consequence.

I'm not reading anymore. Any normal person would use their brain to think about why someone would be so desperate to prevent their child from becoming a Grandmaster, especially the youngest one. I think it's ridiculous. If anyone carefully asked the protagonist why he was so eager to become a painter, they would notice the problem. And knowing that someone was trying to assassinate his son, why didn't he ask why? Is this some kind of idiotic story?

You should consider changing the protagonist's personality. Future books should focus on characters with ordinary or selfish personalities. Avoid writing about a character who strives for justice and equality in ancient times. This kind of righteous character is difficult to write.

Shouldn't things be changed? Some might disagree if I say the author's writing is bad, but judging from reader discussion, each book is declining. Starting with the success of Shen Gongbao, the author has fallen to the point where they don't even have the title of a top author anymore. Shouldn't they reflect on this? Should they continue with the immersive writing style?

I've noticed that all the books in "Destiny" share a similar style: they boast impressive legacy but aren't particularly strong in the early game. They're filled with pride and a strong sense of self-importance, but if trouble arises, they can't win, and their strategies are limited. They're not truly invincible, making for a frustrating read.

Damn, they even deleted my comment. What's the point of reading this now? I'm a lifelong hater. Bye. You think you can go back to Shen Gongbao's peak? You're dreaming. Unrepentant.

They added an official title based on the imperial examination system to the mutated Zhou Dynasty, and gave the protagonist a so-called grandmaster father who was constantly being schemed against... The key point is that it drastically lowers IQ.

This book is bad. The protagonist is awkward; it feels like a primary school student who has transmigrated and grown up, and his concepts, thinking, and logic are all flawed.

The following represents only my personal opinion; please refrain from criticism if you disagree. If you disagree, feel free to disagree. To be fair, Yi Jiu Mei's books have excellent themes and ideas, but why are they not well-received? It feels like the main plot has a problem; it's unclear and doesn't seem to be focused on anything specific. Several books by Ninth Sister