The Only Mage in a World of History

It is indeed Jiumei's book, which is the most embarrassing, the most wronged, and the time traveler's face is humiliated.

The overall plot rhythm is excellent, it can easily arouse readers' emotions, and the writing style is also good. I ordered it all myself. Not to criticize, but let's talk about something that looks uncomfortable: First of all, the golden finger is opened too high, and it is set to be a holy grail that accepts all the inheritance of civilization. In fact, the plot of the magician makes people feel more and more low. He clearly controls the clay tablet of fate. My sister was almost exhausted and killed. Later, his sister was almost poisoned. He was still manipulated by others with his fate. Zilian's army was sent away in a wave, 30,000 weapons, armor, food and grass, and the body of the woman who saved her life were stolen in a wave. The reason was that it was unnecessary to release some bats. The protective effect was not effective and attracted a large number of people. He really didn't expect that the bats would change? He knew that the world was constantly changing. The author's narration is still secretly bragging about the grandmaster's farts. How powerful the inheritance in the magic world is, and how many realms are behind it. He keeps saying that the local inheritance is far behind. This contrast between high and low can easily make people jump. Add a little more restrictive settings for Goldfinger at the beginning. Don't keep bragging about how powerful magicians are. Grandmasters are not as good as low-level fighters. This will only increase the actual gap.

Yes, a newly conceived little devil is so strong. He is already invincible in such a big fetal world, but he still crushes the protagonist. His combat power is always like this. Even though he is very strong, he is just playing, and I am just playing. Jiumei's combat power is ruined. Yuan Tiangang and others are said to be so awesome that even a kid can't take them down. Do you think the protagonist's golden finger is worse than a kid? You still want to let the protagonist drift with the crowd and not fight for the country by himself. His various methods have no rivals here, don't you know how much trouble you put on the protagonist? Is it fun to suppress the protagonist's combat power?

The author has strong writing skills, but he is always limited to history. It is obviously a novel, but the author always follows the real history, but because the existence of the protagonist will inevitably change, the author can only sacrifice the protagonist in order to return to the real history (abuse the protagonist). ? Does Li Shimin have to win the Xuanwumen Incident? ? ? Li Jiancheng was able to suppress Li Shimin and could only rebel, so he was a waste? … I hope the author will consider my personal suggestions, I wish the author will get better and better in his writing

I tip 100 just for one comment. The introduction is very good, but after reading the text, the protagonist is a coward. He can't do this, he can't do that, he is afraid of death, and he keeps talking about his immortality. Anyone who is an official will look at you. I was so frightened at the first glance that I lowered my head and said in my heart that you can't offend him, you can't afford to offend him, what if you kill me, I'm also drunk, others are chasing you for thousands of miles, but you don't dare to kill him, you let him go for various reasons, I keep saying it's a pity, it's a pity, I'm really helpless.

I just read 5 chapters, and then ordered 500 fan points just to say this: Are you sick for blowing Yang Guang? There is absolutely no problem with his merits. Objectively speaking, he did make contributions, but at most he is a not-so-foolish king, but to be praised as an eternal sage? Bah. Are diodes reincarnated? Do you think people are either extreme good or bad?

I think Jiumei should jump out of the historical framework and don't impose a mission. You have the final say when historical celebrities die! Not when history tells him to die! It's so tiring to write like this! And the entry into the game was hasty! The last two chapters of Jiumei's inner drama have been so full! The causal relationship is too white! Hope there is a twist in the plot! Think outside the box! There must be a parallel history. The orcs have it. We can let him seek death, but we cannot let him force us to death! Isn't it? The plot is so cruel! All abilities are not free! Even if you have the perspective of captive history, you must also have the pattern of captive history! There are Zhang Bairen and Yu Qi in front of you! Later, there was Zhu Liming. I believe that there is no need to look up historical materials and write well! Do you have to write a book? We don't act in the dark, and at least we don't abuse ourselves. After reading this book, all that remains is true love! Hope something changes! I hope you can step out of the box, write new ideas, and share your humble opinions! Don't spray! Ri

It's the same routine every time, every time it's about how awesome you are, and then how you feel aggrieved, and then in a small explosion, if you directly kill one of the five surnames, see if these aristocratic families will be so arrogant!

This book is a bit uncomfortable to read. He said he was so powerful and thought he was so invincible, but in the end he just seemed to feel aggrieved!

Is the administrator targeting me? I also spent money to subscribe, so why can't I post something about this book being abusive? If I post a post, delete my post! Why would you write a book if you don't have the mental capacity to endure it? 😡😡😡