Azeroth's Second Empire

Update quickly, I kept it for a week, and then watched A Loneliness 😅😅😅

Is this brother here to dissuade readers?

Is this brother dead? If I'm not dead, I'll dodge

Reading the introduction, I feel like it was written by a studio.

It was written by your younger brother. Although you know that your younger brother can give the protagonist an excuse to participate in some events, you can write that your younger brother is a fool. To put it simply, if there is no system, the protagonist will die 800 times, and without the author's bonus, the protagonist will die 10,000 times 😅.

The second chapter of this awesome movie poisoned me to death. In what age does someone still write a protagonist who is a cheater?

Because of that John, I had no intention of reading anymore. A time traveler is not an original aborigine. What is the relationship between an aboriginal brother and a time traveler? Do you have to take him with you for everything? It doesn't feel like a time-traveler, but rather like the natives devouring the soul of the time-traveler.

This author has written about his younger brother, and now he is writing about his son. Generally speaking, novels with daughters and sons are very easy to collapse, because you simply cannot write the relationship between father and son or between father and daughter well. Maybe it will be like your author who wrote this younger brother, and it will collapse unless it dies.

The whole brother is too mentally retarded to stand it.

You deserve to be scolded! You can take care of such a little brother! How many people can't survive the first three chapters!

The halo is too big, so it is understandable that a younger brother would seek death, but when will the younger brother die?

This brother is sick, is he really trying to persuade him to quit?

No, what the hell is Aegwynn? Isn't she Medivh's mother? How did he become the king's archmage?

It is difficult to rely on humans alone. How many soldiers you have, it is impossible to push the dungeon in the squad format and the game every time. For example, jackals, fishmen, ogres, etc. Are more suitable for cannon fodder, kobolds are suitable for mining, human dwarves are suitable for construction, and goblins are suitable for technology and business. The title of your book is Empire, so it must be to the point. If you want to build an empire by yourself as a single human, you will not be able to pass the aristocrat level. Also, the role of the younger brother is very unpleasant. Don't write about it as much as possible. It's better to marginalize it.

Chapter 1: Persuading to Quit

The game map is only over a thousand square kilometers based on the scale, but if it is to be used as the background map of the novel, the area must be enlarged according to the scale of the earth. Otherwise, the progression of the plot will be like playing house. The content of a world is wonderful, and a plot line is enough to contain a million words of content.

Having read the novels in the Trails of Azeroth series, what do you feel are lacking when reading other Azeroth novels?

Will Alsace go dark?

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