Azeroth's Second Empire

Is this brother here to dissuade readers?

Is this brother dead? If I'm not dead, I'll dodge

Reading the introduction, I feel like it was written by a studio.

It was written by your younger brother. Although you know that your younger brother can give the protagonist an excuse to participate in some events, you can write that your younger brother is a fool. To put it simply, if there is no system, the protagonist will die 800 times, and without the author's bonus, the protagonist will die 10,000 times 😅.

Because of that John, I had no intention of reading anymore. A time traveler is not an original aborigine. What is the relationship between an aboriginal brother and a time traveler? Do you have to take him with you for everything? It doesn't feel like a time-traveler, but rather like the natives devouring the soul of the time-traveler.

The second chapter of this awesome movie poisoned me to death. In what age does someone still write a protagonist who is a cheater?

This author has written about his younger brother, and now he is writing about his son. Generally speaking, novels with daughters and sons are very easy to collapse, because you simply cannot write the relationship between father and son or between father and daughter well. Maybe it will be like your author who wrote this younger brother, and it will collapse unless it dies.

You deserve to be scolded! You can take care of such a little brother! How many people can't survive the first three chapters!

The whole brother is too mentally retarded to stand it.

This brother is sick, is he really trying to persuade him to quit?