Azeroth Begins with an Arms Dealer

Let me tell you! ! As someone who has read several of Lao Lu's books and is also a player of World of Warcraft, it has been 8.9 Years since I entered Azeroth. The author can take a look at how Lao Lu writes about World of Warcraft. I am not criticizing here, just a few suggestions. I usually don't write posts. The core of World of Warcraft is the balance of the six forces. In other words, no matter how bad you are, whether you are a Titan, a king, or the ultimate embodiment of the force of a certain order, you will not be able to turn things around and unify the six forces. Tao eliminates demons and rises is always the theme. The ending of Azeroth cannot be that Ai-chan dominates the world The appearance of the bronze dragon is enough to show that the result is imperfect, because Ai-chan becomes the embodiment of the ultimate order and will definitely prove to be similar to the great Luo god in our mythology. From the invasion of the shadows, to Mr. Sa's jumping ship, to the transformation of the jigsaw puzzle, Elune's backstab. It all shows that force will not work. No matter how powerful the Shadow is, I, Elune, jump directly from death to life naturally, and the Shadow is directly terminated by death. Life and death, shadow and light, arcane and evil. In World of Warcraft, all characters exist in ebb and flow with the six forces. After the two eredar giants fell into the embrace of evil, the influence of the Holy Light in Azeroth immediately increased crazily. After being scarred by the war between the insect empire and the trolls, Elune immediately jumped into the life camp. Never underestimate trolls, the people they win over are all demigods at the level of "Thunder God". Elune jumped back, and the troll threw death into the abyss. The shadow of the void has the king, the arcane and life have the titan, the evil has the shaman, the death also has the death monarch, and the holy light has the jigsaw puzzle. All the characters in World of Warcraft follow the rise and fall of the Force to confirm their positions. No one cares about "justice and evil". The course of heaven is constant, and it will neither survive for Yao nor perish for Jie. The orcs invaded for survival. As for the elves fighting the trolls, it is completely untenable. They occupy the holy land and home of the trolls and still look like I represent justice. The Indians have something to say here. Not to mention human beings, the flesh and blood degenerate body of the Iron Vrykul, the Terminator, Skynet said why I have never encountered such a thing. I bring the author's elf into the American perspective, which is called silky smoothness. The high elves are the United States, the night elves are the entire Europe, Azshara is the pinnacle Queen of England, the major court nobles are the members of the royal family, and the common people are the people of the old France. Don't say it anymore, I won't be able to say it anymore.

The high-end route is not at all down-to-earth, and there is no sense of immersion. It's hard to find a book like Warcraft. Even if you defeat monsters and upgrade a little bit, there will be a lot of readers to read it. Did you write Yunshan Mist Cover to filter readers? It's completely self-indulgent.

I don't understand what the author wants to express, and I feel that the writing process is okay. But I don't see what the protagonist wants to do, just expand the territory? I didn't feel prepared for Sargeras' coming, like I didn't know anything. Maybe I missed it

You must be sick. The protagonist is prepared to be shot down by someone from the front for hundreds of years. The loyal brother may not be directly written to death just to fit in with the 101 death song. With the protagonist being dragged down, the Well of Eternity will have to be blown up, right?

Generally speaking, it is good. As a blacksmith, the protagonist creates a hodgepodge of legendary items from many worlds. But the disadvantages: 1. The progress is too slow. The protagonist is a night elf, an immortal species! ! But the author has been writing in a short period of time: for example, making artifacts for Azshara, learning energy conversion and other knowledge + developing materials + manufacturing? Just one magical tool in just one year (including the cost of learning)? ? As a human, one year is about 60-70 years old, but as an immortal species, the protagonist can make an artifact in one year, not to mention wearing it so early. . How to write a timeline? Do you know how many years ago the War of the Ancients was from the main line of the game? ? Illidan: I have been imprisoned for ten thousand years! 10,000 Years does not mean thousands of artifacts, but a few hundred is not a trivial matter? ? Excessive quantity leads to depreciation! ! There is no way to change it, but I suggest you study the 20-30-year runes, then collect the 1-10-year materials, and finally after 5 years of crafting, you can create the artifact. . The protagonist's current production speed is too fast and the timeline is too slow, which is very worrying! 2. There are already too many. Chapter 160, there are 10+ legendary items from another world. . It's almost 1-2 chapters to make an item and 1-2 chapters to use the item. Chapter 1-2 is overdone, and then new ones are created. The items are made too cheaply and do not reflect the true value of the items. What a pity! It feels like a waste of resources. 3. I know that the later stage is more exciting, but I feel like it will be a eunuch. The later stage is exciting when someone introduces the protagonist: This is xxxx, the greatest forger in the world, and then he becomes xxxx. . Then be respected! Can the author really write until that day? 4. The name is not right, no one is interested in the arms dealer, more interested in the master of artifact forging What is an arms dealer? Wholesale arms, any item bound to "wholesale" seems very cheap. And what is the artifact? It is unique and powerful. Make artifacts and then give them to different people to play a huge role in their hands and promote the protagonist in disguise! Find out more about "Hokage: Teigu User"!

To be honest, the book is not bad. In the future, we can take the path of separatist territory and export arms to the world.

The title of the book is not Azeroth. I can't find it. Please change the name.

The writing is not very satisfying, and there are still 10,000 years to go before the plot. During this time, if you don't add dnd factors, you can directly create a dnd version of the magic network, invent the core of Mythra to rise in the floating city, build a real magic empire, create your own spell slots, and invent various dnd spells to increase the number of spellcasters. After all, it is easier to get started as a mage than a blue bar mage, and you can also use the magic mage priesthood to become a god.

Odin and Thorim died too hastily. These are guardians, the top beings in Azeroth, on the same level as the elemental lords and ancient gods. Those animal demigods like Cenarius can be resurrected after death. There is no reason to be higher than a demigod. Guardians at this level do not have the attribute of immortality; secondly, the guardians fought against the Dark Empire in ancient times and won. How can they die in a random battle if they are old enough to fight, let alone lose energy after fighting for a few hours?

I can only say that it's okay, but it seems a bit pointless and difficult to spend money on him 🤫