The Cultivation Clan That Began on Yutan Mountain

What the author wrote is okay. But the protagonist's behavior and words are too out of the ordinary. Rather dramatic. Change it more. It should be said that he was still a cultivator in two lifetimes. The character should be relatively stable. The kind that is based on planning and then deciding. Or maybe the author's writing style is not good.

I'm a little disappointed with the main character, he's like a supporting character, much worse than that Yao Yao

The protagonist's behavior is a bit vicious. A person who has experienced severe beatings on earth has traveled across time and his behavior is still so childish.

The Zhou family is so useless, they feel like the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. They have to endure it all the time. They have to endure it when others snatch their marriage. Why does this family keep it?

I feel like the author has written a bit too much. There seems to be no limit to the family's purchase of golden elixirs. You can buy them if you save enough. Are you kidding me? Not to mention that the Zhou family buys golden elixirs too frequently now, right? This was after the family was able to support five Golden Core cultivators without having third-level spiritual veins, and the clan leader's cultivation was promoted to the eighth level of the Golden Core, and was now impacting the ninth level of the Golden Core. Is there no bottleneck in cultivation? What's more, the Zhao family has just emerged. Isn't there anyone targeting the Zhou family to prevent the Zhou family from becoming the second Zhao family? If the royal family can still suppress the whole country, it can also be explained by the fact that under the rules set by the royal family, they cannot blatantly attack the Zhou family. Now that the royal family has become a Jindan force, I don't understand why several Nascent Soul forces let the Zhou family grow. What's more, why can such materials as Jinjie Dan be purchased in large quantities at auctions? With the strength of the Zhou family, they can buy one every few decades, so there are so many established Jindan forces and Nascent Soul forces who should be able to buy more. What's more, why do these Nascent Soul forces sell Jiejin elixirs so aggressively? Shouldn't this kind of resources be completely controlled and used to allow the affiliated forces to work hard for themselves in exchange for it? Now as long as you save enough, you can buy it at the auction. Doesn't that allow the affiliated forces to accumulate strength?

The beginning of the writing is inexplicable and a bit involved.

It's good, but isn't the family affection too cold-blooded? Without any warmth of family affection, it feels colder than the sect. Family affection is very important. How can a family be full of all kinds of conflicts and suspicions and stay in this world of immortality for a long time?

The main character is really poisonous. There are cheats, so you always have to fight hard and take risks. She is also very desperate for death, and her life is too satisfying, so she has to do something about it. Endure one, endure two. To tell the truth is a good book. But the protagonist has lived two lives and behaves more foolishly than an 18-year-old. I really can't stand it

I still hope for a novel with a family + sect structure. Novels based solely on family lack color. Without the protection of the sect, it is difficult for a family to grow and develop.

Practice your writing a little more, or rewrite urban cool articles. You don't have high requirements for writing.