A Clan of Immortals on Peach Blossom Mountain
桃源山上有仙族
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 563k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 4y ago
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This is supposed to be a centuries-old cultivation family, but after they grow up, they all go out to work. All the family has is a spiritual vein; they have nothing else? Hahhh!
This is just my personal opinion. The destruction of such a family is inevitable. Everyone only thinks of their own children, disregarding the overall interests of the family. Who can guarantee that every generation of their children will have good spiritual roots? If not, they sacrifice the family to satisfy themselves.
The Yin Yang Qian Kun Scripture is a wood-attribute cultivation technique. Seeing this, and considering the protagonist's erratic and monkey-like behavior, I'm not going to read any further.
If the protagonist were a transmigrator, he'd be mercilessly criticized. With his chuunibyou (delusional) mentality, he wouldn't last three seconds without the protagonist's halo.
It's well-written, but the protagonist is a bit too saintly towards his clan. Providing large quantities of pills free of charge is one thing, but knowing the elders are parasites yet still acting so selflessly. The clan is rife with infighting and shows no sign of improvement. Is the protagonist trying to single-handedly save the entire clan?
The clan is almost extinct, and the members are not united; everyone is selfish and self-serving. What kind of future can this clan have?
A 20-year-old's personality is written as that of a teenager.
Around age 40, the protagonist is portrayed as a naive and innocent girl who is mistreated by her family but still seems to be devoted to them. My father died too early, and even if my mother wasn't completely naive, she was still somewhat innocent. She was a collateral branch of the Chen family, and even though she was married, she still trusted the Chen family so much, knowing full well that the family was like that.
Comments alone can deter a lot of people, and I was one of them.
I said some parts of your book were a bit toxic, but overall I praised you, and then you deleted my review. My book reviews are generally fair; my goal is to help the author succeed. I don't even review or read books that are bad. Everyone has their own ambitions. Bye.