The Shameless Body Cultivator

Seeing the ancestor of Jindan seizing the dog from the house, and the protagonist also making a contract with him, it is extremely poisonous.

The author's writing is okay, but it's too poisonous. Is it so difficult to find a novel that's not poisonous?

It was so poisonous that a golden elixir monk took the dog away

If the rhubarb is left, the book will be gone. Books like Get Out will be destroyed directly. The author's writing style is good, but he didn't pay attention to the poisonous points.

It was ok at first, but when the dog was taken away from the house, I didn't want to see it anymore. It was unpleasant and poisonous. . . . There is no point in this book.

It seemed fine at first, but the enemy already knew you had a golden finger, so why not kill him? It's a bullshit contract.

Why did he immediately think of selling the spirit beads and get himself into trouble? Shouldn't you think about practicing cultivation at the first time? Improve your own strength to the point where nothing can be mentioned. At least find a reasonable, not so far-fetched reason. For example, after practicing for a period of time, the effect of the spirit beads becomes smaller, and there is not much improvement in a short period of time. Need to purchase other elixir breakthroughs. Or you may be seriously injured and urgently need money to buy medicine and treat your injuries. The far-fetched plot puts the protagonist's IQ into the ground.

Seventeen years of bookworm, book shortage, food and fodder can be pursued.

It feels like there are many loopholes. For example, if you can't take away a monk who has strengthened his spiritual consciousness, you can cultivate a novice by yourself. Another example is that the longevity has reached the limit of 500 years, and you can continue to survive after taking away the body. Theoretically, if you cultivate a novice with high cultivation, you can live forever.

You gave up your biggest secret to someone who wanted to kill you a moment ago. Are you sure you are writing about the world of immortality that eats meat and drinks blood? I could still read it at first, but at this point the book's performance is gone! It's really better that you keep him instead and get some things you want to know from his storage bag! Alas, good books are hard to find. It was hard to find one that was still readable, but one poisonous point ruined the book!