Martial Arts Longevity: Starting with the Spirit Beast Atlas

There are a lot of people in the comment section who are bragging about this book. Are they getting paid? In the first chapter of the game, the poison was released. When he was at his weakest, it was clear that the pig's spirit refused to be accepted and he wanted to absorb the dog's spirit to improve his sense of smell. Isn't the pig's sense of smell much stronger than that of a dog? I have the spirit of a beast and am picky and picky. I write this stuff in the first chapter. Is this a good book?

There are too many mistakes and omissions in killing strange beasts and touching beards. How can you still reason with Jie Dao, who chopped off his beard after just one more word? Knowing that it was a hunter who did it, he captured all the hunters within a ten-mile radius. He would rather kill the wrong one than let go, so he is a bandit in troubled times. Can a family without food help the eldest brother to be released from the labor force? What's going on in the county, don't the leopard bandits know? The protagonist signed up to learn martial arts and went home in martial arts uniform on the first day. Where did the money come from? There are too many loopholes. The author wants the bandits to discover it whenever they want. Even if there are loopholes, they will treat it as if they didn't see it and provide "alibi". You think that modern laws are sound, but even if the laws are sound, they will give you a first and second suspect spot.

Every time I see this kind of chapter, I feel that Nao Shen has opened the door for Nao Shen, and Nao Shen has come home. No, you are in a modern civilized society. Do I need a reason to kill you? What else is an alibi? What's more, they are bandits, who are you? You are not even a warrior, you are at the bottom of society. Where do you get the confidence to prove it to others? How hilarious.

When I saw Chapter 44😂😂, I was really puzzled as to how this bandit could be so awesome. After killing several of his minions, he tracked them down for more than three months, and then he was still found and assassinated. He even dared to openly kill disciples of the Liuhe Sect. Moreover, the bandit was only in the Qi realm, and the sect leader was a higher realm than the bandit leader. The rest of the plot is fairly understandable, but I'm really speechless after seeing this. I feel like it's much better than a regular organization. This is just a bandit around a small county. As for the future plot where the protagonist becomes a headhunter, I haven't watched it yet, so I won't comment.

If you see that you are going to be a catcher just to avoid trouble, you shouldn't continue to do it. Shouldn't the top priority be to practice martial arts non-stop? I just killed Cruel Heart Pillar and I have money, but the bandits don't dare to enter the city, so I have to be a catcher. The master is at the third level of Blood Realm. Isn't it easier to kill a Qi Realm than to kill an ant? You still want to send your apprentice to the Yamen to hide from trouble, because you are afraid of offending the bandits and hurting your relatives and friends, so why do you practice martial arts? Even your own apprentice can't protect you from accepting a stupid apprentice? The most important thing is that Senior Brother Yuan said that one person at the third level of Qi Realm can kill one hundred and eighty people below the third level without armor! There are only so many bandits in total, and even the masters and third-level blood realms are not enough for him to kill by himself!

After reading more than forty chapters, the encounters of the bandits were forcibly added to the drama, and then continued endlessly. I don't know how long they will be entangled. After the bandits were eliminated in the city, they almost acted openly outside the city, and then they said that the government could never catch them. What kind of logic is this? The writing and characters are okay, but the plot needs to be more rigorous.

Awesome, awesome, no brain in writing. Bandits can be so awesome that they block the door. He dared to kill people in the city.

I was short of books. I wanted to read it to pass the time, but it got worse and worse. I gave up. This is a personal view of traveling through the Golden Finger Martial Arts School in troubled times, all the old routines. It took a long time to describe the character's psychology, but the actual situation couldn't do it. The protagonist looked like a fool. Especially when writing about a man who goes up a mountain to kill bandits, the author should want to set the protagonist as a smart person who thinks things through and knows everything like a god, but the writing feels like he is out of his mind, and too much is illogical.

The writing is good, but the previous plot arrangement is too rigid. I still don't understand why a group of bandits are so persistent in chasing a few people to death. Moreover, you also made the bandits have the same ability as the yamen to investigate cases. It is not that a bandit has such great ability. What does the government do for such an awesome bandit? If there is an explanation later, just ignore it.

The bandits in a small county are well organized and strict in ordering and banning cattle. They are better than the army.