The Azure Origin Immortal Path

How should I put it? It is obviously a family, but the protagonist took the family's spiritual peaches and cultivated the best spiritual peaches, causing hundreds of peach trees to fail to bear fruit for a year or two. Then he bought the spiritual peaches in exchange for money, and then sold the second-level top-level kung fu to other sects. Although the author has explained before, it is said that it is given to the family. It is unclear where it comes from, and it may not get the benefits it deserves. It will be handed over after the foundation is established.

What do we look at in family history? What we look at is the family affection, the blood of the family, the warmth of the family, and the unity of the family The author writes family stories without understanding, and describes the protagonist as selfish and like a white-eyed wolf. It is not at all like a family monk who is like a casual cultivator, so it is not good for you to write about casual cultivators. If you have a book of cultivation and don't hand it over to the family, what's the use of others raising you? Isn't this some powerful magical power? It can lead to the destruction of the family. I haven't read much, but according to the book review, you sell the skills to others and don't give them to your own family. You are a pure white-eyed wolf Then you sell the top-quality peaches cultivated by the family. This tree cannot bear fruit for hundreds of years The protagonist is also afraid of society. If there is no social interaction, then what kind of family do you write about? You write about casual cultivation. Isn't it delicious?

I feel that the character of the protagonist is better alone. If you don't write a family story, I might order it all 😅 From the beginning of Chiyang Pantao, I felt that something was wrong. Until I returned to the family, the family was gathering, so you ran away to practice. I knew I should run away. I attended the company's annual meeting, so you ran back halfway. You are also a human being. If you don't want to build a good relationship, you can go alone. Don't write about a family clan.

It's better to write about the sect. There's no point in running a family.

I can't stand watching it anymore. Wherever you sell peaches🍑, you should know that what the system provides is different from this world. Curious items to live in. He also sold his exercises. It's clear you have a problem. It also has an effect on transforming gods! Then you will die. Collect the soul directly. .

The protagonist is too double-standard. If he doesn't get married, how can he have a family? If the protagonist's parents don't get married, how can he be a protagonist? How can he cultivate immortality and pursue immortality in a middle plane? How can he have an iron heart? If he is so afraid of death, why doesn't the protagonist stay in his mother's womb to practice for thousands of years and win at the starting line?

Generally speaking, I don't see the concept of family cultivating immortality. I don't know if it's the author's problem or something else. The protagonist is not like a family cultivator at all. Instead, he has a selfish and ignorant mentality of a casual cultivator. He has no family concept at all. There is no problem in saying that he is a casual cultivator.

The setting of this book is okay, but the data is not good with this daily update?

The setting of being easily possessed is also addictive. The protagonist's own qualifications are not good, and the skills are not very high. The fear of being possessed will hinder the progress of cultivation. There is indeed a reason why this book is not popular. There are too few interesting points, the pace is not tight, and the updates are slow!

This division into two is not worthy of the name. I originally thought it was the establishment of a sect, with the direct line being merged into a family, and the branch lines being merged into the sect's disciples. The result is this, and a new Yunzhou Li family must be re-established. At least one elder will be the family, so that the initial talents will be enough. As a result, the protagonist becomes the leader of the clan for a period of Qi training. Apart from his wife and those children who have no sense of existence, it is almost as if the protagonist has joined other sects alone. If you divide it into two, the protagonist will be separated.