Book of the Old Days

Hello everyone

To be honest, I felt a little tired. The growth period in the North was too long and boring. Fortunately at first, it felt like it was a call to daily life. It is true that writing a book must have its own rhythm, but I think this main line is really enough. I think I can return to the city branch line to talk about what happened on the other side, so as to enhance the sense of continuity of the plot. You really can't stand watching these few pictures, and the time spent by the protagonist in the North is actually quite a lot of time. If you go back and tell the story at the end of the first volume after a year and a half, the ghost will still remember who is who.

Come on, the book Alien World is really great. I hope the great sniper can rise up.

If you don't want to complain, what's the cool thing about Book of Other Worlds? First of all, I would like to state that I am a fan of Da Ai. I have always felt that Da Ai is one of the few writers who succeeds with bold imagination. The new book is also in good progress, and the writing is very sophisticated. Monthly votes have been offered to support it. So! What is the most interesting thing about reading the Book of Other Worlds and reading the current Book of the Old Days? First of all, I think The Book of Other Worlds is an adventure novel. I personally think that the most enjoyable part of this book is not the carefully arranged scene copies (for example, I have a copy in the living room at home, and YY scenes such as the dream world, or the protagonist who kills everyone (the later Book of Other Worlds), but how the protagonist carefully designs various summoning spells, but Every time, all kinds of messy things are opened like opening a blind box, using various wrong opening methods to solve the original problem, and wandering on the edge of various suicide attempts, especially when the summoner is so stupid that he kills himself. For example, Ning Wenrui from the Book of Alien Worlds always feels that he can control the whole scene. In the end, he was killed by his own stupidity or cheated by his pig teammates. But in the recent chapters, it seems that the protagonist is basically a one-man show. Some good foreshadowings, such as the police detective, were directly killed. I feel that at the beginning of the game, I can lay out more foreshadowing and develop more supporting characters. The description (otherwise, who will be tricked later), it would be better to give the protagonist a sense of urgency that needs more summons! In any case, I am still looking forward to the follow-up adventure of the great writer. In addition, in order to match the identity of the great writer, is it necessary for him to do some literary adventures on his journey of seeking death?

When I read this novel, I felt it was very similar to a book I read before, but the setting was modern. When I opened the author's introduction page, I realized it was the same author. That's okay.

Ah, I remember when I first read The Book of Other Worlds, the sense of immersion was really amazing. The mentality of ordinary people who are panicked, overwhelmed, greedy for money and want to gamble is vividly described. The duel with the Sphinx is also very exciting, and the final world structure. I hope this big sniper can fill in the holes. Just be steady and take your time. It's okay to be unfinished. Don't be an eunuch anymore.

Help the author draw a summoning technique

I am a newbie who has just read this book, and I have the biggest question. A person who knows the knowledge of Cthulhu does not know what the Book of the Old Ones means? Aware of whispers but unaware of what trouble you've gotten yourself into?

Being able to write a good beginning depends on talent, being able to write a good process is persistence, and being able to write a good ending is ability. I hope that Da Siao can turn talent into ability in this book and stick to it to the end. If I can do it, I will make up for it.

You trash eunuch who keeps publishing new books to cheat money, please die.

Md, I'm convinced, the protagonist is betrayed every time, why can't he learn to keep secrets? Is it that lonely? I feel so stupid to have to reveal my secret to others.

Dragon head, snake body, dog tail Every book is like this

I've read so many discussions about the protagonist's character, but my idea is just the opposite. This is what an ordinary person is like. He feels good about himself and feels that he has nothing to lose, but from God's perspective, he is just an ordinary person.

How about selling the rights to the Book of Otherworlds and the Book of the Old Days to someone else to write it? It's really head-scratching that this kind of subject has been discontinued.

The protagonist written by the author is really arrogant and stupid, and he portrayed it so well.

This book is so well written that I regard it as a masterpiece. Why did it end so quickly? It was obvious that he had just reached the climax. I'm really numb

I was so disappointed with this chapter of The Third Wish 1. When did the protagonist and Ragnar's group of people have the trust to put their lives in each other's hands? 2. It can be said that the wolves took action (using witchcraft) out of self-protection. This has indirectly exposed their identities. Although they barely made it through, they risked their own lives to kill the people in the opposite camp? ? ? And also in a completely uncontrollable way, devilish and devilish? ? ? There is no blood feud between the camp opposite and the protagonist, right? ? The protagonist is not a local either! ! 3-The difference between the second wish (for small money) and the third wish (for power) makes me feel that Ragnar is mentally retarded. He is obviously the village chief, but his behavior is completely different from the previous one? At this point, I'm quite curious about how the author came around. The feeling these chapters gave me. Is the protagonist's IQ frozen? The summoned dog can only be controlled by scaring it. If the protagonist cannot defeat it, he can only send it back. Haha, add another devil, haha Does the protagonist feel that he has summoned a "gun" that he fully understands? This "gun" is obviously very likely to kill him, and the mysterious operation that started from killing the opposite camp... Is really... I hope the author will work hard, I really like this kind of book where I slowly become stronger first, and then go out to take risks, mainly because it has the feeling that "the protagonist will also die".

The protagonist appears to be cautious, but is actually a reckless man. He has one idea: He wants to cure his illness and read the Book of Strangeness. However, he sees a fairy in the lake and goes directly to the son of the Duke. He ignores other possible methods in the back of the book, and he is still not sure whether it is true or false.

The early life plot is very well written, especially the chapters about living in seclusion in the valley and writing a diary. It feels like Robinson Crusoe. It makes people feel like they have really seen a microcosm of an era. The summons is the main line and the details of life are embellishments. It is a pity that it was cut.

In order to advance the plot, it is better to forcibly reduce the intelligence of the protagonist. You can say that the protagonist stumbled and fell and happened to be sitting on the chair. It is better than the protagonist taking the initiative to sit on the chair without knowing its function.

The protagonist in these chapters seems to have lowered his brain to the level of a goblin. He is truly a god that goblins believe in.

The following opinions are personal and without any ambiguity. If you don't like it, don't spray it. Thank you To be honest, I will read every book written by Da Siao. The early and middle stages of many novels are indeed very well written. Take the full-time boss as an example. An early version of World of Warcraft. The subject matter is very novel. It reads very smoothly. But the character of the protagonist. But it has very shortcomings. Like grass on the wall. Switch back and forth between the two camps. To be honest, this feels very bad. A little stiff, but the flaws don't hide the beauty. The heroine is also not very well written. Just when I thought he didn't have a heroine, he got a heroine again. When I thought I was going to write a follow-up story with this female protagonist, I put this character in the cold storage. Later on, another female protagonist was inserted, which seemed very blunt. Let's talk about the later issues. First: When the male protagonist moved to another game, his strength dropped from its peak to the floor. This is very inappropriate in the long run. I think that in the later period of this book, another book should be written. It can be written as "Full-time Boss 2" instead of the continuation of "Full-time Boss". Second: There is a problem with the ending. The final outcome is that the villains win and many people are trapped in the game. I feel like this is anti-human. Even writing a happy ending is better than writing a bad ending. Ps (It may also be a foreshadowing left by the author who wants to write a second part.) But despite so many shortcomings, I still think this is a good book. The early and middle stages are very distinctive. It is precisely because of this that it attracts many readers. Although the later stage sucks, it is still good enough. It is recommended that the author 1 correctly shape the image of the protagonist, preferably with labels. 2 Determine the heroine problem. When thinking about the outline, you must think about whether there will be no heroine, a single heroine, or a harem. What will happen to each heroine? The conflicting plot developments will leave readers wanting more. This is important. 3. The problem of villains. When being a villain, you also need to label it, and the bad one must be very bad. Try to make the villain look like a madman. To do something by any means necessary. Of course, this is a personal opinion. 4 Chapter Questions. Try to categorize 70 to 90 photos into one roll. Highlight a short flat fast. Try to solve what can be solved in one volume. Can't be solved. To serve as a foreshadowing. Resolve in other volumes as soon as possible. Try to prevent the male protagonist of the second volume from thinking about the first volume. Make writing each volume feel like writing a new book. This will give you a lot of inspiration. I am also a fan of Da Sniper because I like the books he wrote. So I will express my opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you are angry, I sincerely apologize to you

I saw the contradiction in this book. As a rational management society that controls the direction of the world, it is a shrewd behemoth, but the protagonist must have written them stupidly. The dwarf summoned by the protagonist is simply a myna (asexual reproduction, geometric multiplication, and super ability to grow crops). It is impossible for the country not to notice. Such a magical race, as well as the summoned fish that slipped through the net and the obvious victory in front of others, the protagonist has never worried about the consequences that may occur if the organization knows about it. The protagonist's character is not likable at all, he is both arrogant and upright, little smart but big stupid. I feel that the author has deviated from the main line, and many details are poorly handled.

The subject matter is still fun and fresh. The most important thing is to keep the main character from having too high combat power and to keep it fresh every time.

I really like this book. It's such a shame that it's such a scam.

It's really good to watch. I hope Dasniper can create a third part 😍

To be honest, I quite like hunting bears in the north. As a southerner, do you have any recommendations for novels with northern characteristics?

A beautiful adventure story. The description is impressive. It's really painful. Keep writing. It's too painful. I can't forget it. Big sniper. Big sniper. Big sniper.

[2.0 Power Enhanced Version] Is this a label that normal novels should have? Hey!

It's quite good-looking. I feel that if I write out all the places mentioned by the author, it will definitely reach the expected 2 million words. The first 300,000 words are very good and there are many places worth exploring. Maybe it's because the ability to acquire is too fast and too strong, and the sense of mystery and fear in the middle is not enough. Maybe the author also stopped because of poor design and didn't want to completely write fantasy.