The Road to Immortality Begins with Mortals

What's wrong with taking in a few concubines? Did the person who traveled back in time bring his fear of his hen with him? ? ?

To complain, I feel that the main character either time travels or is an aboriginal who knows the plot. I don't see any scientific literacy in modern society. Take the section about creating a martial arts method for example. I said it can't be done. Don't even think about it. It's impossible. Without those wonderful people, I got angry when I saw this. , Why can't it work? Those aborigines have more brains than you. If others can do it, you can't. The creation method is nothing more than a few elements. At most, a dozen people can figure it out and figure it out. This is one point. Another thing is that there is no sense of picture. For example, what kind of mountain is this mountain? What kind of water is water? What kind of sea is the sea? What are the customs and customs of this city like? What is the scale of this city? What these authors write is very general. It gives our readers the feeling that the protagonist just does this and that, and goes there and does this and that. What is in between seems to be nothing, and there is no sense of picture at all. Moreover, it is a fan zone. The old bookworm gave the author a suggestion, don't have too much interaction with the protagonist group. The plot can be interspersed, but it is best not to extend it, because you will find that the more contact you have with the protagonist group, the harder it will be to write your book. Because you have more contact with the protagonist group, you must make some changes to the characters and characters of the protagonist group. Change, but a character like Han Li cannot be changed, because this character is not created by you. Once you make changes to him, everyone will feel uncomfortable, drama will happen, and you will be scolded. This also applies to more important supporting roles. Do you find it difficult to write? This is where it's difficult to write a fanfic. What's easy about writing a fanfic is that it has a complete worldview structure. My suggestion is that the plot should be original. You can intersperse and interact with the plot of the protagonist group, but don't extend it. He follows his plot, and you write your story. 👍👍

I know that studying cheat codes is very good, but sometimes I wonder why many protagonists don't study cheat codes carefully even if they have cheat codes.

I hope the author will stick with it. It's hard to write a mortal fanfic and it's hard to sign a contract. Many of the previous ones are eunuchs. Come on.

I feel like the writing is a bit ink-stained. When I saw Tang San, you were in the Foundation Establishment period, it was so tedious, and in the mortal world, you pretended to be a cultivator and showed off your wealth. There were a lot of people trying to mess with it, and as a result, you took on an evil cultivator mission to test the golden finger function for so long. I think your writing was not concise enough.

Mortal Beauty Pictures

I saw a fellow who had become an immortal through a hundred refinements and came here specially.

Do you have any good mortal fan recommendations?

Farewell to Chen Qiaoqian's happy ending, just like Old Devil Han, he has been waiting for Han Li all his life.

Write a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. If your realm rises so quickly, will anyone read it?

More than 70 chapters are about Nascent Soul... What do you write next?

Isn't there a real novel about cultivating immortals now? Why are they all cultivating demons~ There is no bottom line at all

It is recommended that the author write more biographies of mortals cultivating immortals. The popularity of Bailian is incomparable to that of mortals.

The section about Tang San is too disturbing to watch. Don't write just for the sake of word count. You're putting the cart before the horse.

Traveling through the world of Han Li's timeline where mortals are cultivating immortals, otherwise you would take your left foot and your right foot in the original time today and you would be obliterated and corrected. . . Otherwise, if you travel through time, an unknown timeline will be created. In the unknown future, maybe you are the master of time, instead of jumping around like you are shouting about Han Li's timeline.

You can go to Xianni Xianni Xianni and find a good reason to pass the level of Mumo. Xianni's transformation into gods is very strong, and there are ancient gods and so on.

Mortals, as long as the writing of these two books by Bai Lian is not too bad, I can read it. Let's read it first. I hope it's not ridiculous.

I have almost forgotten how to become an immortal through a hundred refinements.

Just raise me as a weakling to the ancestor to end the black hand🤓

It is recommended that the story of a mortal cultivating immortality and passing it on to the world should be abbreviated a bit. Look at the popularity of Mortals nowadays. It's really not comparable to the outdated Hundred Refiners. Some of them probably came here because of the Mortal animation. Maybe they haven't watched Hundred Refiners to become an Immortal.

I have a weak question. I'm going to review the manuscript after I've written it. My friend, there are too many typos. I've read more than a dozen chapters so far. This 🙂

What have you written in the last few chapters?

The author can post a mortal fanfic on SouShu. Com