The Proficiency Panel Appears at the Beginning

The quality dropped in the later period, and the plot timeline was often inconsistent. It may have been forgotten by the author himself. It was very uncomfortable to watch. The setting was repeated over and over again, which was not good. To sum up, the early stage was okay and the later stage was poor.

Come on, author, your novel is very interesting

Since being attacked increases physical experience, why not get a stick and hit yourself? Just control the intensity

The latest two chapters are interesting. In the first few chapters, I thought I was going to fall into a cliche. These two chapters made me look at it with admiration, but I hope there will be no brainless plots. I can understand someone targeting the protagonist. The sudden rise of a person will inevitably touch the interests of some people. There are extreme, domineering and selfish people everywhere. I can understand if they want to kill the protagonist. But I hope not all of them are targeted at the protagonist. After all, they are relevant departments and work for Guo Jia. If they were all targeted at the protagonist, I would feel too disgusting. This kind of department and Guo Jia should grow mushrooms and should not exist. Reading the latest chapter gave me the amazing feeling I had when I first read it. I hope that the level can be continued. The author is about to put it on the shelves. I am just an ordinary reader, so I can only subscribe to support it. A few monthly passes can be regarded as a reward for writing a good story. There are really not many good books on this kind of martial arts, and there are very few that can be read. I hope that when you turn to martial arts later, it will be more natural. I will see you finish writing or your level will suddenly drop sharply (I hope not) 🤤

Can there be another boxing technique

Breathing can be improved, why can't it be improved when running, such as correcting running posture and reducing consumption?

The rest is easy to explain, why does the protagonist have to pay his own money to be hospitalized, it is obviously just a minor injury, and why can JC forcefully detain the protagonist in the hospital for a month, there is obviously no evidence that the protagonist committed murder, why should he restrict the protagonist's movements and require the protagonist to report to PCS every month? Is this legal?

The dark character that entered the different space at the beginning disappeared. Since joining the government, the whole style has gradually gone off the track. There are martial arts competitions, the spirit of national martial arts, and a bunch of respected opponents🙄 (Thumbs up if there are readers who understand what I mean) What I see is the dark and witty character in the different space at the beginning, not the one who wants to leave the sect. The style of the Chinese martial arts novel 😡 has completely changed. It is not at all the same as the initial excitement. The more you read, the more boring it becomes. It is like following the routine of other people's novels... In fact, at the beginning, the system will also make some jokes to fill up the too dark character, which is a good spice. But later on, the system gradually gave no prompts at all... Do some readers not like it? I find it very interesting. But the author changed it...

I had this idea before. Could it be that his repeated chapter on anti-theft has not been written yet, and he used the pretense of anti-theft to confuse Quanqin, and then replaced it after writing it?

Yo yo yo, I will also control reviews. I don't dare to admit that I plagiarized other people's data.

When I read this kind of novels, I always feel a little nauseous. They are suppressing human beings. In the beginning, if the country can not issue guns, they are talking about guns that can no longer be used and the laws of physics can no longer be used. I feel sick when I look at those things. China has banned guns for no more than 40 years.

Or let me put it another way, if I were a police officer, could I detain an innocent person in the hospital for a month because I suspected someone of murder, and then make him pay for the hospitalization fee, make him lose his job, and record it on his file, ruining the rest of his life?

I have more than 20 books on my bookshelf and you are the only one who protects me from theft every day.

It takes a few hours to protect against theft, but you have to protect against theft for two days? Don't you think it's too outrageous? The anti-theft on the 19th and the 17th has not been posted yet. It seems that you really didn't write it down.

Therefore, all encryption is just to deceive readers. In fact, it is encryption because it has not been updated. If the login is better, change it, and if it is not good enough, postpone it. Worse than breaking the news

Many readers have reacted to a major problem, which is the problem of adding attribute points and skill points. Originally, it only took a month or two to improve attributes, but as a result, the protagonist directly added points, and it would take several years to improve those attributes through exercise. The same goes for skills. I personally don't think there is a problem with the protagonist's IQ. After all, the protagonist's identity is set as a college student with basic logical abilities. Then, this must be the author's problem. Either the author has not thought about the setting of the protagonist and thinks that the protagonist is still a primary school student; or the author himself does not have this kind of logical calculation ability. Maybe this calculation method is too complicated for the author to calculate; or the author has limited writing power and can only force the protagonist's IQ to be reduced to the level of a child to limit the protagonist's rapid development. This is a bit fooling the readers.

While writing about the extraordinary world, the protagonist constantly emphasizes that he is materialistic. It is really nonsense. According to what you wrote, the protagonist cannot be successful in boxing. He himself says that these boxing and Taoist methods are idealistic. If you don't believe it, then there is none. So what does it mean for the protagonist? I don't believe it in my heart, but I'm using it in my hand, saying one thing and doing another. If you can deceive others, can you also deceive your own heart? I don't believe it in my heart, but I can actually practice to hit several tons of force. No one really thinks that practicing boxing can reach such a point. It's obvious that there are extraordinary forces involved, and it has reached this point, and it is still claiming that it is materialism. This is equivalent to Sadako crawling on her face and still saying that there are no ghosts in the world. You can either crush materialism directly, or you can directly say that you are dreaming and everything is false.

This book is okay, but it feels like the author keeps suppressing the protagonist to become stronger. For example, if the protagonist often fights against enemies, he will be injured frequently, so why not practice horizontal training? ? Also, you don't practice Qinggong, Shenfa or anything like that? ? Don't talk nonsense about the protagonist's limited energy. The proficiency of Heng Lian and Qing Kung Kung Fu is basically good. The protagonist is not invincible. If you are injured, the proficiency of Heng Lian Kung Fu will increase, right? You're not fighting from a standing position, so your body skill proficiency is for nothing. If you're chasing the enemy or escaping, you will have body skill proficiency, right? Backed by a large organization, not to mention that only the sect has the skills but not the large organization 😒

I read it again and again, but still couldn't figure out why I couldn't learn martial arts in another world. The structure of the human body is the same, and regardless of genes, it is just reproductive isolation as described by artificial intelligence, and I feel bad here. This setting is too jarring. If you traveled through the past and couldn't learn the essence or martial arts, then what were you doing in the past? Travel?

With all the speculations about this snake, is the protagonist taking it too much for granted? A snake that can grow to more than 600 meters long and more than 100 meters high cannot be explained by science, and the protagonist also makes various scientific speculations seriously, expressing disbelief. Logically speaking, it can grow to such a size, and its body can already withstand such ultra-high-speed movements. If his body It can't bear it. With this size alone, it will perish without anyone else doing anything. Therefore, its body must be able to withstand various risks. The more obvious manifestation should be that the power to drive this huge body has been very fast.

Some people say that your invincibility starts from the mastery of boxing skills. Is this true?

The first two are okay The logic behind it is getting worse and worse It's disgusting to see a Chinese martial arts writing using a certain style to write about sects and sects I thought it would happen occasionally but it turns out that it's all a certain style, it's really disgusting! For example, if a certain sect is of a certain sect, he is of a certain sect It's too Japanese! What's even more disgusting is that there are more and more Buddhist content! ! ! I'm particularly annoyed by this kind of purely idealistic thing But there are all these things in the back! It's really not as good as a simple panel, I want to make sense and idealism at the same time Everywhere I go in the world, the modern Mandarin text is finished, and the electronic equipment here is useless again! It's really hard to talk and apply, trying to make theory but also using rules~~~ Thinking too much Thought it was food The result was half-cooked Hard to swallow after eating a little bit

The first few hundred chapters are okay, but the more you write, the more rubbish you get It's still unfinished Be careful before entering.

I said why are they so familiar? Those few pictures before they were put on the shelves were really poisonous. After they were put on the shelves, I couldn't stop reading them. I didn't expect that I would come across them again after so many years, and they really poisoned me again.

Dozens of dungeons have been upgraded, and hanging is wasted. Before I read it, I wanted the protagonist to directly use a machine to gain proficiency. Just add a few machines with a stick or a whip to spin, adjust the strength and speed, and calculate a little at a time. The proficiency level can reach 100,000 or more per day. By experimenting with how to swing a sword and using a machine to assist you, you can become invincible in two months at most.

Where did chapters 18 to 39 go? And when you asked Doubao to copy and paste, didn't you check it yourself?

That woman named Xiang Yang is really a poisonous character. The protagonist said he wanted to kill her six or seven times, but he refused to kill her and was dragged into the water in the end.

The front is okay, the back is terrible

Damn it, I wrote it like "Journey to the West"

Overall, this book is quite good. It reads smoothly, the plot is reasonable, and the protagonist's character is likeable. But there are also some small poisonous points such as adding points and the reaction of official personnel. There is also Xiang Yang. The decisiveness of the protagonist's killing is really well received. However, I still don't understand how the protagonist is determined and what Xiang Yang wants to do. There is no way to explain it, so it is very confusing. The plot is reasonable, but it is not friendly to readers.