I Can Become Stronger by Picking Up

There is something wrong with your novel. Of course it may not be in line with my ideas. First of all, what does 100 points of energy mean? Dozens and nearly one million kilograms of force is still 100 points like this? Even if you refine your body to an incredible level, it's impossible, right? If it's longevity, the only thing that hasn't changed, but can it be restored after it's been consumed? Secondly, just after breaking through the muscles and bones (five times the strength? Fifty thousand kilograms? If it is more, the law of conservation of energy will completely collapse), he defeated a retreating grandmaster. Although it was a clever use, his strength later increased to more than 200,000 kilograms. He was knocked away by the master with one move and had to explode to win (a special method). It is not clear what the strength is in different realms? In the first realm, the protagonist has ten thousand kilograms, and in the second realm, a meridian has been opened and ten thousand kilograms? Is it a protagonist or a co-owner? A total of 290,000 kilograms, this is still the middle stage, is it the peak bone training in the later stage? At the peak of the third level, you should write at least one million pounds, right? The law of conservation of energy? ? ? That was not an era of spiritual energy recovery. As I said at the beginning, there was even no spiritual energy in reality. Let's talk about the pills that the protagonist took, qualitative change, and sublimation, but we also need to talk about the conservation of energy, right? The effect is so good. The most important thing is that in the first level and the second level, I took a medium pill (2 points of sublimation). One pill only improved the first level. I wonder if it has the power of a thousand pounds. Does it not stop in the second level? Even if it's almost the same, that's not how practice is calculated, right? Although it is said that the second level increases strength, your exercises also nourish your qi and blood! Also, there are some technologies in science fiction that can make a drop of seawater burst out with incredible power, but do you know the principle? Is it really the power contained in water? There is a huge gap between 1.2.3 Points of sublimation medicine. How do people in real life grow into people with a million pounds of strength? It's equivalent to the energy of a thousand people, and that's not how practice is calculated. Even if it's 10,000 kilograms, his body probably won't be afraid of anything other than a large-caliber pistol, right? Not to mention the improvement ten to a hundred times, and with their speed, if they can escape from the center of the explosion, non-strategic missiles can't do anything about it, right? Not to mention that there is a stronger one. You can still talk about the Cave Heaven Paradise, but how can a grandmaster who is not powerful enough become a grandmaster? Resource! ! ! Where did it come from? Furthermore, the character of the protagonist is a bit strange. It can be said that he wants to eradicate the roots for himself, but sometimes it is not necessary. He is fighting with his life. If we talk about justice, some actions are not like it. Or is this a bottom line issue? Also, it's too naughty. You use anger to explode your power. Do you think it's a little too fake? Does the smallest thing stir up anger? I was originally passionate, but I was teased by you, and I was forced to do it. The country's satellite cameras are all fake. Some things the protagonist and criminal warriors did were too blatant, so no one tuned the satellite cameras to see? It's cool, but it's too brainless. A relatively dangerous person will be nothing more than that later. He killed dozens of people at the beginning. Although it was a vendetta, would the country not register it? At least you need to know who you are? After all, your strength is not low, and you have killed so many people. To a certain extent, it is like a time bomb, and the power of the Grandmaster explodes later. Even if you are not from a foreign country, even if you may be KO, it is impossible not to investigate. At the beginning, it was said that there were only 40 Grandmasters, but suddenly an unknown young Grandmaster with unknown combat power appeared and killed a Grandmaster. Aren't you curious? Although he didn't show up, he could tell by the voices. Every old fox, especially, so many warriors killing people indiscriminately? You were still unprepared, and you said the country was very strict in repressing it, and there were cameras on it? 😅😅😅

This book finally inspired 🔪

How to refresh the client and repeat the order?

Let's put it this way, as long as the protagonist has extraordinary power in reality, I guarantee that this novel cannot be recommended for more than 50,000. Because it's not the 2000s, it's not about your urban super powers or your super soldier king. Nowadays, readers have very picky tastes. Why do people now like to read novels about the resurrection of spiritual energy or the ultimate demon or some immortals? Because people don't have the patience to watch the old clichés of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. People don't follow that routine anymore, do you understand? Nowadays, everyone prefers to watch punches and blood. If you are better than the protagonist, the protagonist will directly add points and kill you directly. This is the most correct way to write a cool novel at the moment. Don't be the same as the urban superpowers of the past! ! ! I will give the author a clear path. Reality only allows the protagonist to have extraordinary powers. The home field is in another world. Reality is the base for the protagonist to lick his wounds. If the characters in the plot are more delicate and there are fewer chapters that are just to show off and slap people in the face, I dare say that your novel will become twice as popular.

Oh, the book in front is so beautiful. I also want to see the protagonist's expression when the world knows that what he said is true.

After reading Chapter 20, the protagonist looks like a minor who has not been exposed to society, and he is also a brain-deficient person whose IQ is disconnected from time to time. He is completely unlike an independent and sensible person who grew up in an orphanage! Maybe he was rejected by his parents because of a brain defect? The setting of the book is very creative and good. The details and the behavior of the protagonist are too poisonous.

Speechless, a psychotic protagonist, let's take the beginning as an example. In the Earth Temple, on the one hand, they said they should respect the corpses and not take clothes, but on the other hand, they sawed open their corpses and wanted to take the treasure. Split personality? ? On the one hand, he said that he should keep a low profile, but on the other hand, he went directly to the mountain gate and killed everyone. Is the protagonist killing indiscriminately? There must not be a good person among them?

The protagonist is really good, he wiped out two gangs and didn't get a penny! Not a single piece of equipment! Gold belt for murder and arson! You are nothing like shit here! Even one day I was angry about missing a few pieces of meat in a meal! Make your grandma angry. . . What kind of job did you do in school for some money? . . The brain was kicked by a donkey

Isn't it bad to forcefully change the painting style? It's too blunt. From the moment he kills the White Monkey Gate, the protagonist is forcibly reduced to a witty character and forced into an off-line funny style. You would rather have a better protagonist with this setting at the beginning. It's too off-putting.

I'm so fucking convinced. What are the recently updated chapters about? Li Qin, Xiao Qiang, what the hell are these people? It's completely different from the previous content. What the fuck is it?

The anti-theft chapter is really disgusting. I've had it for a week and it's still a bunch of anti-thefts.

I was very interested in it when I first read it. Although the protagonist was a little brainless, he was very happy. I thought it was okay. But after reading Chapter 10, I suddenly felt that there were a lot of flaws. I couldn't complain about it. As a result, the author also set a fan value? To be honest, this is a bit disgusting to me. Of course, some authors do this, which is understandable, but after reading chapter 30! I really vomited, what does that count? If you become a prostitute, do you still need to build an archway? And the setting is inconsistent. I'm really convinced. Let's continue reading. I feel that the more and more the writing becomes more and more outrageous, it may be a bit unfriendly to old bookworms, so I spent 100 points just to complain. I recommend you to read Mystery. Although the back part of Full Time is average, the writing in the front is also very nice. I have seen a lot of such content that has not been released yet, but it also has a fan value. This is really the first time I have seen it. I advise all newbies who are ready to get into the game, don't read it, it will make you sick. Abandon the trap, abandon the trap

After reading more than 100 chapters, I felt that the following chapters were getting more and more confusing, so I decided to give up.

If you want to write, just write the protagonist. Don't pop up another person. It seems boring. If you stop talking about it, author, you will really lose popularity if you continue to talk about it.

Everything was fine before, but why did it suddenly change to Baili style starting from Baiyuanmen? That's not how imitation works, right? I was so embarrassed watching it

This is a weird world. In Chapter 226, the protagonist easily gave his blood to a stranger he just met! I decided to give up the book!

The intelligence of Pig's Feet is really touching. He was so poor that he could only hang out in the cafeteria and tried his best to destroy a White Ape Sect, but he used the secret book as tissue paper and uploaded it to others for free. You can at least sell some money to subsidize your own practice. Pig's Feet deserves to die in poverty. Even if you give him a golden finger, he is useless!

As I look at it, it seems like it is becoming mentally retarded. The first 10 chapters are very good, the first 20 chapters are okay, but by the 30th chapter, it is becoming more and more mentally retarded. Look again, the 100 chapters I ordered first were sloppy. Did I not write an outline or something?

Can I ask you to change the data? Three hundred thousand kilograms is actually an entry-level strength, and it can weigh several million kilograms at a time. With such a small body, a few million kilograms will almost leave the atmosphere if you jump casually (if the ground can withstand it, ignore the air resistance). If you can fall to death with a hundred meters, wouldn't it be suicide if you just move casually? Your legs will be broken after jumping, and your hands will be broken after punching. If you roar and your neck explodes, you can see from the example that a cat can hardly be injured when it falls from a high altitude. It is not that easy to fall to death. Even ordinary people are not that easy to fall to death. Have you ever heard of someone who jumped from the second or third floor and fell to death? Unless you are unlucky and land on your head, you are ten thousand times stronger than ordinary people, and you can actually fall to death from 180 meters. . .

The plot is a little bit toxic, but the most unbearable thing is that the paragraphs and punctuation marks have no beginning and no end. The author is not good at details, let alone the content. I have read more than a hundred chapters and I don't know what I have read. Goodbye.

Is this a eunuch? I haven't updated it for so many days, and I haven't finished the anti-theft chapter yet. I'll just tell you if I'm not going to write it. It's a waste of my starting coins.

I can't understand it after 632 😅 Why does it feel like it has become another book?

Your anti-theft skills are really good! Farewell!

What the hell is the post-629 generation? ? ? ?

I watched the first two movies very well, no matter whether the later ones are fun or not, but this discovery of the secret world is exciting and fascinating to explore.

Author, please write well and write if you can. It's really boring to update from time to time like this.

Is the author from Beilun, Ningbo, Zhejiang? Reading between the lines, I feel like a local!

The anti-theft people are always puzzled. I have been waiting for several months. If I don't update it, I will finish it hastily 🔪