Eastern Myths Come to Another World

Suggestions for the author (please ignore it if it is wrong!). The early plot is too slow, and the plot of the alien invasion was written after 70 chapters. It is better to intersperse the plot in the early stage, so as to retain people. I don't know if the author knows about Sanbanaxe. In the early stage, he quickly explained the plot background, cheats, and characters. Many popular books follow this routine. Writing this way can help readers understand early whether this is what they want to read. It would be bad if you, the author, are secretive in the early stage. If the author thinks it is feasible, you can change the previous plot and make it as streamlined as possible.

It's quite beautiful, why are there so few people?

The story is very good and exciting. I have read dozens of chapters and I probably understand what the story is about. Pig's Foot traveled through time and became a prince of a powerful country. He was betrayed by his younger brother because he was fighting for the throne. He was defeated and died. Pig's Foot traveled through time and became the prince. After his resurrection, he was captured by a soldier from the enemy country and wanted to tie him back and exchange him for six acres of fertile land. After that, the main story unfolded. The soldier tied up the male protagonist on his way back. Various accidents happened on the road, including the pursuit of his brother, robbers, drugging of women, tigers, sinkholes, and various twists and turns of the story. The male protagonist escaped from the hands of the soldiers again and again. Finally, by chance, he returned to the hands of the soldiers again and again and was tied up. After countless repetitions, the male protagonist fell in love with the soldier who had been tying him up. He returned to the countryside with the soldier, lived in seclusion, and lived a pastoral life of husband and wife! Come on, author!

I stood in front of my parents' bed and saw them sleeping in each other's arms, smiling and speechless. He left without seeing the broken dishes in the kitchen, the overflowing ashes in the ashtray on the coffee table, or the hurt and tears in his parents' hearts. I lay next to my girlfriend and saw the delicate makeup and beautiful smile I hadn't seen in a long time. She turned around and left, but she didn't see the sadness, desolation, and falling beads in her eyes, as well as the flower cotton she picked up and put down just now. I hung in front of my friends and saw them changing glasses, laughing and cursing. I looked back into the distance but did not see the empty space at the table, clenched teeth, or clenched fists. Now, I am lying on my body, my thoughts are about to stop, and in a trance, I seem to see a touch of white snow, hear the blessings of my parents and friends, and the tenderness on their lips. At this moment, I saw a lot that I ignored. What a blessing I have encountered in my life

Traveling without memory Being kidnapped by little people over and over again Poisonous points can't hold on

When I read Chapter 31, I saw the plot of the protagonist being caught, then escaping, and then being caught and escaping again. Maybe you have a lot of excitement behind it, but I'm sorry, I don't have the patience to read it.

The protagonist was very aggrieved. He was kidnapped four times by the same person and several times by other people over and over again. . . Readers are very frustrated. . . Full of poison. .

There is a feeling behind the altar that will appear "Huangtian Emperor has been arbitrary for eternity." "I, Hong Yi, wish everyone to be like a dragon." "Eat my Fang Han, and use the uncanny craftsmanship to achieve great immortal skills." "My Wang Chao will not be weaker than others in this life." "As Emperor Ye Tian, ​​I should suppress all enemies in the world." It feels like. =͟͟͞͞ʕ•̫͡•ʔ

Why do pigs' feet in online novels generally have thick skin, but in reality they are disgusting and despised, even scum! !

What's wrong with the beginning? It has to copy the plot of Jackie Chan's Private Soldier. It's terrible.

This cover, will all future books have this cover? It's okay to express your feelings simply and clearly 🤫

Nondescript. Slipping away.

Just finished reading it, please write down your thoughts. The author estimates that the world view set is very large. Unfortunately, the 70+ chapters of the book up to now give people the feeling that the protagonist is doing a lot of shit (repeatedly being caught by soldiers and women). The early soldiers and soldiers were okay if the plot was adjusted, but the repeated use made people feel frustrated. And the power system is very confusing, especially the latest elf who appeared in the same realm (temporarily understood) actually defeated two top warriors in seconds. Even if you become a top character without understanding the other party's system, you will have many life-saving skills. It would be okay if this article were placed in alternate history, but this is fantasy. There are more than 70 chapters and we haven't even gotten to the topic yet. For the most fast-paced section in online literature, the probability of being thrown out is really high.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that there was no main line and I was very confused.

If there were no protagonist in this book, the tone would be that the West abuses the East. I don't understand that a powerful country, Wei, was destroyed so easily. I don't understand. The other side has an awesome guy here, and even a few attacks here can beat the opponent to death.

After reading about thirty pictures, I only saw the protagonist being kidnapped dozens of times. The soldiers kidnapped him several times without any warning. The woman was kidnapped several times without any sense of vigilance. I have never seen such a mentally retarded protagonist.

Change the author's profile! Only when you sit on the throne can you discover the truth of the world. How deeply hidden is this world? What is the hidden purpose? Looking at the introduction, you can feel that aliens are stronger than humans. The pig's feet open the golden finger to save the world. Why is the power hidden?

You can change the cover 😅

Please forgive me if you can still see it. I have finished reading this novel. It is very well written. Although I borrowed the plot from The Little Soldier and the Little General at the beginning, it does not affect anything. Writing a book is to write the story you want to write. There is nothing wrong with borrowing from movies or other ways to introduce the plot. Next, I would like to express my personal views or opinions on you, the author, as I am a little late. Judging from this book, the author values ​​​​love more, so it is inevitable to be discouraged by the double blow of career and love in the end. It is human nature. I personally think that writing a book is a hobby, so naturally you can write if you want to, and you can't write if you don't want to. Readers are viewers. If you like it, you can find another book if you don't like it. But according to the author, you write books full-time, so this book is both a hobby and a career. You need to have a beginning and an end, a clear conscience, and be worthy of yourself and the supporters behind you. Giving up halfway is disrespectful to your career and will leave you with regrets in the future. I personally hope that you can retell this story one day in the future. People say that beauty is only when there are flaws, but if there are no regrets, it is not a kind of beauty. If we start from reality, writing a good book can bring more benefits than writing many reluctant books. If you can't support yourself, you can consider part-time work, and the time of writing a book can be slowed down. Wouldn't it be wonderful to write a book full-time after becoming a god with one book? Only by making achievements can you be recognized by others. The process is very arduous. Without wind and rain, there will be no rainbow. Before the bottom, there will be no peak. Come on, author

Is this protagonist possessed by the Virgin Mary? Someone kidnapped him and offered him as a prisoner, but they didn't kill him when they had the chance..., Giant Poison

Not to mention the writing level of this book, the book review of the first chapter really made me see how disgusting people are. I used to think that authors mostly wrote short stories because their level was just that, but now I know it's because the readers' level is that way.

I saw the protagonist being tied up for more than 20 chapters, sometimes tied up this way and then that way~~~

Doesn't anyone think that the beginning of the movie looks a bit like the plot of "Big Soldiers and Young Generals"?

The immortals of the Zhetian system are equivalent to quasi-sages. The immortal king is a saint, and the quasi-emperor is not a saint.

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It was a failure from the beginning. Memory Problem: The author thought the writing was very good, but still buried such a trap in writing the script?

It's really annoying to keep playing the same routine before.

I read more than fifty chapters and didn't see the plot? ? ? Too much nonsense ahead

As a foreigner, I thought aliens were coming

It's really hard to persevere, it's all about using love to generate electricity, but if you look at the book review section, it's very uncomfortable, ugh