The Death System in My Brain

It's pretty good, but the combat power falls apart later on.

It's so embarrassing to see that I have cancer. It's extremely poisonous, at least for me.

Every book should have a solitaire, let me start it next Take the lead

I'm also going to build a building with 100 floors per floor and end with 100 floors.

I don't know why, but the more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist is a dog in the system. The dog will do whatever the owner tells it to do. If it does well, it will reward it depending on its mood. If it fails, it will punish the dog. The dog barked at its owner and slapped him. The system is like a God. When God is bored, he finds a dog to watch him play. What a dog does when it is bored is just a joke in the eyes of God. From a normal person's point of view, being terminally ill without a father or a mother and without a trace of concern can be said to have given up the hope of living. Then a system comes to give you hope of living and adds shit to the hope, and then the protagonist picks it up without any dignity at all. The protagonist is made to do such an embarrassing thing and makes a fool of himself. The protagonist immediately goes away. I didn't care at all, but I still want to live like a clown. You said he didn't want to die, but you gave up your dignity just to live. What's the difference between you and a beggar? Even beggars have more dignity than you. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is a bitch. It is very common to give up dignity in order to survive. But you have nothing to worry about and have nothing. You have to use up your remaining dignity to survive. A beggar has no worries at all and will do anything to survive. Wait, is there a difference between the two? Okay, I just had some impressions after reading half of it. The author is still good, but he still wrote a bit of a cliché and some poison. I write this article from God's perspective without thinking from someone else's perspective. It may be unreasonable, which is to put it nicely. If I really face the same choice as the protagonist one day, I don't know if I will choose to live like a dog. If you don't like it, please don't comment. If you have any thoughts, you can write it down below. I may reply. Don't read if you are a jerk.

His roommate ruined his reputation and that Xu Shengnan, why didn't he confront them? ? ? If I heard such rumors, I would be slapped away

This protagonist is too ds. He has a lot of kung fu, system blessings, a millionaire, and even a gangster. He actually has low self-esteem towards the so-called school beauty and acts like a child. He really doesn't look like a prince even if he wears a dragon robe. And Liu Meng, who is more powerful than Hu Yifei, is actually the heroine. Can someone like this also become the heroine? Which one is not more fragrant than her?

For this kind of protagonist who is a system dog, I really want to know, if there is a system that issues a task for the protagonist to give away the heroine, or for the protagonist to dig his parents' graves, or to do other things, will the protagonist do it then?

Chapter 11 was poisoned, Chapter 16 died, and the 132nd generation disciple of the great Shennong Hall remained.

How should I put it? If you want to say this is a light novel, it has all kinds of outrageous and shocking plots. If you want to say it is a mindless Internet novel, it doesn't look very enjoyable. Moreover, the way I wrote it a few years ago to persuade people to quit at the beginning is still shown now.

This kind of system is the most disgusting. It gives you a choice between two options. If you don't choose, you will die. If you have any resentment, you will be punished!

Isn't this the love option in your mind? It's a pity that I can't control the situation just like Nao Lian. It's okay to watch as a unit drama.

Chapter 268 I suggest the author revise it. It's too toxic. Originally, the copy of the plane didn't quite match the rhythm of the whole book. As a result, the protagonist's brain was completely lost in this chapter. First, he let the black boss run away willfully, then turned around and stopped chasing him. Do you really believe that he will send you back to your country? Not to take revenge on you? And then there's the phone call. The phone has gone through, but we won't tell you the result? Can you just say your name if you don't have time? Forcibly adding drama? It would be better to just write that you don't have money to make a phone call. Wouldn't the logic be more logical? Do you have to write something about senior brothers and sisters playing mahjong, do you want to force it to be funny? Furthermore, the plane crashed, and foreign newspapers had news about it, but there was no news about the protagonist's sect in China? How many senior brothers are still playing mahjong? From the moment the flight was lost until now, are the entire country and the martial arts blind? Is this the level of the modern world? I really can't understand the purpose of this plot. The previous chapters have been steady and steady, with occasional small outbursts. All the supporting characters are very distinct. After beating the Li family, they disappear? Personal opinion, I don't like you to comment casually.

, Using the creative ideas in the animation brain, it is not bad, but the bad thing is that it is all the bad routines used before, 🤫

Why does it feel like a third-rate internet novel written in the 2000s when I read it?

In Chapter 7, when I saw the protagonist saving a woman and being beaten by cannon fodder gangsters, with no ability to fight back, I immediately stopped reading. What the hell is this? It's embarrassing to have a system and be beaten by such a low-level cannon fodder villain.

The more you look at the back, the more boring it becomes, and it loses the flimsy flavor of the beginning.

I thought the writing was pretty good and the reading was smooth. But, but, I just can't stand it. It feels like it's forcibly giving everyone except the pig's feet an aura of mental retardation. Take Liu Tong, for example. She comes from a martial arts family and has a chivalrous and righteous character. How can she like a pig's trotter? Or what did the pig's feet do that made people's eyes shine? The whole process is mindless and annoying. The emotional drama is really well written... And the intellectual school belle, with her childish way of picking up conversations, forced her to think, "Wow, the pig's feet are so powerful, she actually dares to look at me." Wow, the poetry is terrible, but the writing is so good, I can't help but feel like it at a glance (personal opinion)

The author... Doesn't have a book club! There are so few words in this chapter... I don't even have the motivation to receive a thousand rewards... However, since the author is so happy... Let's give it a try. 🙂

My hands are shaking. Is this what monthly ticket financiers feel like?

Alas, it is true that anyone can write a book.

I finally found the book I read before entering the starting point.

Hmm~~ I would probably like to read it more if it were a light novel about a death-seeking system without martial arts settings and more comedy and romance.

The protagonist of the system seeks death but does not seek death. What's the point of the author suppressing the protagonist all the time? People are going to die, so they still care about face? Why do you need to lose face in order to survive? As long as you can live, it doesn't matter if you don't have a face.

Everyone is a free prostitute, just for fun and entertainment. It would be too much to say that the writing is not good. How about a disciple commenting?

The first time I saw it, I chose there. Sorry, I chose to slip away.

Why do things like alien heaven suddenly appear later? Wasn't it written about martial arts and the like at the beginning? To be honest, I can't stand the plot behind it. (It's free prostitution, it's up to you whether you want to complain or not?)

Suddenly I realized that the system should have prepared two paths to eternity for Cui Jian. One was already written in the novel, and the other was supposed to be the path of "demonization". From the various options, it can be seen that it is faster, but the risk is also higher. The system was used by the previous eternity to make up for this universe, so the path to demonization may only be left to Cui Jian. If he can't make it, he will die. I'm just thinking. I don't know what the author thought. I welcome your corrections.

What the hell, three chapters to persuade me to quit, I really can't stand it anymore.

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