Hidden Mountain Monster

It's my first time writing a book review, so I'm a little excited. If there are any errors, please point them out. The book is quite good, the content is relatively coherent, and there are no major poisonous points. The author also looked up information on some names, such as the names of mountains and characters, and it can be seen that he put a lot of effort into writing this book. But there are still some places where I feel uncomfortable. 1. Regarding magical powers, the author said that the chance of a spirit beast transforming into a little demon to obtain magical powers is very small, but judging from the little demons that have appeared so far, basically all of them have magical powers. It feels a bit... There are pictures to prove it. 2. The battle between the demon hunters in Cangcheng and the winding mountains and mountains. The author said later that monster hunters are not as good as immortals, and the most basic level of becoming an immortal is foundation building, so it can be speculated that most of these monster hunters are Qi refining. But the mountains and ridges are full of great golden elixir demons. I think those monster hunters shouldn't be able to get any strange poison, which will greatly reduce the strength of the Jindan ancestor. And even if you can get it, can you make the two golden elixir ancestors, the big demon similar to the foundation-building monks, and a group of small demons so miserable with just a few Qi refinings? Below is the picture. 3. I feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist, it feels so awkward. I can come up with so many strategies at once (such as the battle between King Mighty and King Moon, and the subsequent battle between humans and monsters, etc.). All of a sudden, I was like a curious baby, asking questions here and there, feeling like I had no common sense about cultivating immortals. Not like a time traveler at all. 4. This is purely a personal complaint. I feel that the conversation is very awkward. People watching felt very embarrassed and almost didn't send them away (personal feeling). No matter the big demon, the small demon or the demon king, they always spoke with "I", "" and so on. Forget about the little demons, but the big demons and demon kings are like this too, which feels unworthy. If the big demon or demon king uses "I" and "I" when speaking, it will better show their unique strength. The above is my opinion, please point out if there are any mistakes.

Come on, author, you write very well.

The issue of stance is very simple, just don't treat people from other worlds as human beings! Aliens are just some kind of animals that look like humans, and are not the same race as the people on Earth. The aliens are just some kind of primates, just think of them as monkeys. In this way, position is no longer an issue! I am so smart!

Even if you think you are a monster, you still have a correct outlook on things.

I just learned that new books depend on recommendations, 😁 otherwise they may not be on the shelves even if they have enough words. So, as a new book, you have to read it! ! Follow-up reading refers to the number of users who have read the latest chapter within 24 hours, (I heard that you don't need to read it, you can just click to the last chapter) Follow-up reading will affect the subsequent recommendation position of this book. (I don't know how many people have read this book now. Can any friend post a screenshot of the latest chapter below this comment?) (Attached is a picture of a big tiger that sings wine. Jiang Liang can imagine it looking like this, with two yellow snakes on its shoulders.)

I ordered more than 20 chapters at once, and I was heartbroken. After arriving at Yunmeng Mountain, I don't know what the protagonist has been doing. He keeps doing things here and there without practicing, following the fire leopard? They both form good relationships and form cliques. Those who don't know better think they are Young and Dangerous.

The author has too many narrations. If you eat a rabbit, don't talk about natural selection and survival of the fittest. It's as if everyone doesn't know. The world of the jungle doesn't even notice that you are exercising your body, sharpening your claws, and talking to a weasel. You haven't cultivated to immortality yet? Can you speak?

The author's writing is very good, but this genre may have fallen into an endless cycle. A few years ago, when alien beasts were quite popular, there were deer demons competing for deer, and great demons in the clouds. There were many kinds of them, good writing, bad writing, and clear ideas. I found that they have a common problem, that is, they are all eunuchs, and many of them are unfinished. As a result, this genre may not be very popular, and most of the current ones are selling sheep over others. The book written by the author is actually very good, and the ideas are quite clear. There is nothing wrong with it. It is not popular now, which may have something to do with the current situation of this genre. The author is also a newcomer, and he stopped updating some time ago.

About the leopard's bloodline and plug-ins. Bloodline: Currently there is no such thing. I think it is better to be a grandson than a grandfather. Clug-ins: As the protagonist, there will definitely be some. In fact, being able to be reborn and bring memories is the biggest cheat. The plug-in will be given to him as reasonably as possible. Attached are two small black panthers and a red-billed crow (scientific name: red-billed chough)

As for the alien beast genre, there is now a book that starts with the tiger dragon. It can be said that it has blazed its own path and has more words. Although it is also a newcomer, the author can exchange ideas with the author of that book. After all, it is too difficult to write about monsters with humans. It is like a female channel writing a male channel. You cannot understand what the monster thinks, so you can only try to anthropomorphize it.

I suddenly hope that the protagonist can have a powerful bloodline. After all, they already have it in their bodies, but it's just thin.

Everyone said it was a eunuch, but no one subscribed to it. No results came out after updating. No matter how good the article is, the readers will stop it. Hey, I hope the author will get better and better.

I would like to ask how the protagonist stands. The biggest pitfall of the Alien Beast style is that you are in the Cao camp and your heart is Han. You should not always admire and feel sorry for humans.

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I see there is a big poisonous point now. The Demon Suppressing Division said that it was established by the demon clan and the human clan bosses to suppress the demons. But he randomly intervened in the fight between the human and demon clans. To be honest, I'm very dissatisfied...

The writing is very tasteful, the writing style is impeccable, and some details are very exquisite. It is a great book about demon cultivating.

This is the third time I have pursued this kind of book, and it turned out to be Eunuch. What a pity!

This book is a bit of a pity. I remember that the results were good just a few days after it was put on the shelves, but then it stopped updating for a long time. . .

Come on, author, don't be discouraged, your writing is pretty good. I believe the results will gradually improve. Write more about the characteristics of the monster clan, such as the protagonist leopard's speed and bite force, and the old iron cow's strength and simplicity. Tigers roar, ghosts, etc. They must have characters and characteristics, so that readers will have a more three-dimensional image of them, rather than just a monster with a name. Why is it that the big demon has not left a deeper impression on me than the rooster that crows in the morning? The impression of Lao Tie is also good. After all, it is a joke, but this is a joke that Xian Xia can't keep playing. Lao Tie Shen Tong Ye is good. Having said all this, I don't want to teach the author how to write, I just want to give some suggestions. After all, I like this book better.

It's rare to see people who write novels as seriously as you do. Regardless of the writing style, I write very seriously. Come on. Although I am a busy person who relies on perfect attendance to make a living, I promise that I will make the first order.

I haven't read it yet, but when I encounter this kind of evil cultivator, I just add it to the bookshelf. I hope the author will write well and not be a eunuch. I will give you three recommendation votes first to encourage me.

The end of the month is here again, author, aren't you going to complete the task of this monthly welfare pass?

Come on! Very well written! Write according to your own ideas!

What we are saying is that the end of the month is about to pass, so just add some of your essence to others, and don't waste it, right?

It's well written and has good intentions. Come on. Full booking

Where have you gone? Are you still writing novels?

I now give almost 7 recommendation votes every day. The current writing is really in my way. It is not impatient or impatient, unlike other male protagonists who pretend to be X right away. I am grateful that the work has given me a completely new and different experience. I would also like to give you some personal advice. Currently, the writing is more about daily life (perhaps because of the larger picture). Many people prefer to bring some modern ideas to ancient times to change something when reading books. I am very happy. Is it written as a step-by-step approach to immortality in other novels, or is it based on the chapter-by-step approach of "Journey to the West"? Anyway, I want to write more about people who open shops selling food and ideas. Just a personal opinion, just for reference

Come on, author, there are still many people who support you. Don't be affected by some weird and weird things. Stick to your heart and outline and write. It's great.

It's good-looking, not cliché, no nonsense and very smooth, come on＾0＾~