A Player Transmigrated into a Martial Arts Game World

1. When Shen Youdie and the male protagonist meet for the first time, there is no problem with the stranger's attitude, "I don't know you, your strength is still low, completely worthless, it doesn't matter whether you kill him or not. Then it's okay for the male protagonist to say harsh words, but Liang Zi has formed a knot, it can be regarded as a grudge." The second meeting was at the teahouse. The male protagonist returned from his studies. The purpose here was to highlight that Shen Youdie had changed and had calmed down the young lady's temper, and then asked Shen Youdie to recognize the male protagonist and show off his strength. This was considered excessive. The third time, Shen Youdie was hunted down, and she directly kidnapped Liu Qiaoyu and threatened the male protagonist to fend off the pursuers. Note that at this time, the male protagonist's strength was completely higher than that of Shen Youdie, and then Liu Qiaoyu was directly kidnapped? Still when Shen Youdie was injured. Then the male protagonist killed the two younger ones and the older ones as a result of being injured. Shen Youdie had the means but didn't do anything at all. She was obviously showing the attitude of watching a show. It doesn't matter if your male protagonist dies or not. Anyway, you just need to hold off the pursuers. You have a tool-man attitude. And then after disgusting the male protagonist, you still want to win over him? The male protagonist, who was sold as cute and then magical, felt that Shen Youdie was cute and took her away with him. It was outrageous. A child threatened you with your valuables to do things for him. You were afraid that the things would be damaged and you paid him money to do it. Then the child gave you the things and said to you: You did a good job, you can be my subordinate from now on. Ridiculous? 2. Liu Qiaoyun first appeared in the discussion of the supporting role. Liu's father died and her relatives robbed her property, highlighting her misery and paving the way for her subsequent appearance. Liu Qiaoyun's official appearance was to sell his body to bury his mother. After the male protagonist finished, Liu's mother also died at this time, and his relatives wanted to sell Liu Qiaoyun. Then the male protagonist heard that Liu's father and Liu's mother were good people and planned to help, so he spent a hundred taels of Liu Qiaoyun. Yun was rescued from relatives and a brothel. At this time, she paid attention to her identity. A weak woman whose family was in decline and who had been bullied by others was bought by someone. The person also said that he would make her his sister. If you create an image at this time, someone with a gentle personality will be moved, but she will be a servant. Then, after many times of caring and persuasion by the male protagonist, he identified with this brother; he was so numb that he didn't care who he was sold to, he would only do things numbly, and then under the male protagonist's care, he believed that there was still true love in the world, and then changed; he had a cunning personality, and would agree to the male protagonist on the surface, and then quietly run away, and might meet again for some reason later; then the author chose Silly Baitian, Liu Qiaoyun easily believed in the protagonist, and then she actually regarded herself as a younger sister and directly intervened in the choice of the protagonist. Then there is the relationship between the protagonist and Liu Qiaoyun. There is no need for the protagonist to fight for Liu Qiaoyun, because Liu's father and Liu's mother can still make peace with the protagonist if they have a grudge. If one person is optimistic about the other person, he can help, but if he is just optimistic about the other person, he will never pay too much. After all, there will be nothing if he dies. Of course, the author wants to create an image of saving people to the end. This does not matter. 3. I can only say that in general, the author's writing is very good, the writing style and details are also good, the description is quite detailed, there is nothing uncomfortable, and the plot is well connected, but you still have to pay attention to the characterization, just like if Shen Youdie wants to win over the male protagonist, he must take action after the two older ones arrive, and he still needs to give something to resolve the conflict afterwards. He can't just pretend to be cute and get away with it. Then Liu Qiaoyun's identity is the eldest lady whose family has been ruined, which is already very miserable. People always have to grow up. What's more, the male protagonist and she are still strangers. It is impossible to be wary and prepared. At this time, people are under the eaves and have to bow their heads. As long as this eldest lady is smart, she will never be arrogant. In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist's image is a bit weak. The author hopes to portray a kind-hearted protagonist who likes to stay out of things but does not offend others. But kindness does not mean that you forgive him when others bully him. Necessary killing is needed. The protagonist should also be a little arrogant. He should be low-key, but he should not be bullied by all cats and dogs and still swallow his anger.

Slip away, you will die if you lick the dog, it is too poisonous, and it cannot be compared with the leader of the reborn demon sect. I will point out a few shortcomings. First point, in the first few chapters, a cult woman kills the protagonist, and the protagonist's strength is greatly increased and he can't take revenge. I can understand the fear of revenge from the forces behind it, but I don't understand if you accept someone's feet. If you really want to take revenge (I just have a bad temper), I just abolish martial arts. Killed her whole family, sold her to a brothel for three days and then killed her. Second point, the protagonist bought a sister halfway, and she was still the cult woman, and was hunted down. His so-called sister was threatened by the cult woman. I really didn't expect that if it were me, I would kill the cult woman first, and I don't want the so-called sister. Third point, I saw half of it and made a prediction. The author may either accept the cult woman halfway, or become a good friend, or die within a few hundred chapters. I bet on the former, or even the protagonist becomes the leader of the cult woman's sect.

I have read more than 50 chapters, and there are interesting points, but more poisonous points. I can't help but vomit. 1. Two of the three weapons were buried. . . Slightly Poison 2, the father of the flower picker, who was forced to do so by all the witches, broke his arm and jumped into the lake to survive, but he actually let the flower picker go. . . Very poisonous 3. The leader has already destroyed your Dantian and sent you to the Crazy Sword Sect. Going to the Crazy Sword Sect would be worse than death! , The protagonist abolished the head and his son Dantian. . . Very poisonous 4, sold himself to bury his father, like his sister who died in a car accident. Very Poisonous 5, I am running out of money at every turn, I have only ten or so taels of silver, I still stay in a hotel that costs one tael of silver a night, I kill two top masters without even touching the corpses, I am short of money again, and I am a rich couple. He actually doesn't pay attention to it, so just don't mention the money, it won't affect the plot. . Very poisonous 6. The witch threatens the protagonist and the two of you with the sister you bought. Afterwards, you feel good about the witch because she came back and shot an arrow. . . Poison After ignoring all the poisonous points above, there are actually some points to watch, such as: the part where the protagonist engages in a flower picking thief and his uncle, the IQ online plot is reasonable and exciting. . But the protagonist's IQ fluctuates up and down. It feels like the author wants the protagonist to forcibly reduce his intelligence, and the protagonist's IQ has to be reduced. Obviously this book should be considered excellent, but the reading experience is extremely uncomfortable. I don't like to read exciting stories. In fact, after more than 50 chapters, I didn't feel happy at all. I still felt flustered when I read it. It's just that the poisonous protagonist is a bit too smart. . Shuangwen enlightens others, this is the protagonist who enlightens others. . . I will continue to watch it, hoping that the plot will get better and better and less toxic. . . .

After reading more than 30 chapters, I met this woman Shen three times. The first time I wanted to kill the protagonist together, the second time I smashed the protagonist's table, and the third time I kidnapped the protagonist's sister and forced the protagonist to kill her enemy. There are so many things to say, it wastes my time and ruins my mood.

Since the author chooses not to write cool articles, he should not be afraid of attacks from book friends.

Poisonous point: Chapter 1.30, The male protagonist thinks that the daughter of a good man has been devoured by the clan and sold her body to bury her father for 50 taels. He then bids with others for the last 100 taels or whatever, and buys it. He thought that he would secretly take it back later or directly rob the rich and give to the poor, but he walked away in despair? What about your top-notch martial arts? It is really aggrieved. You obviously have the ability to change but you just choose to be cheated by bad guys? 2. In the next 31 chapters, the witch is hunted down, and then you are asked to take the blame and call your senior brother. You directly take the blame and fight with others? What about the revenge on the witch mentioned at the beginning of the novel? It only lasts for ten or twenty chapters, so forget it? Then I couldn't watch it any more. The plot in many places could obviously be better, but the continuous poisonous points in these chapters sent me away.

The writing is very good, it has the flavor of real martial arts, adventures, experiences, masters, and the most important thing is the tackiness of not striving for excellence. Nowadays, many protagonists in martial arts are not "chivalrous" enough. They tend to follow the trend and rely on the system to take advantage of others. They are competitive in fights and will retaliate against the enemy for their flaws. I don't think the behavior is heroic... Even if it is bad, it is very worldly. It is not like the devil in traditional martial arts, but like a street gangster. The main character in this book is pretty good so far, and I will keep following it.

I can only say that if the author does not change the character of the protagonist, there will be fewer and fewer people. The old bookworm thinks that the writing style of this article is very good, but the character creation is not good. At least the protagonist's behavior towards this unprepared sister and disgusting shemale girl makes me very confused.

I feel reassured when I see so many people supporting the author in the book review section. San Guan Zheng and Holy Mother are two different things and cannot be confused.

The protagonist's IQ is comparable to Guo Jing's, and his emotional intelligence is comparable to Zhang Xiaofan. I can't live up to the readers' expectations.