Lord of the Demon Palace

Readers who have been following Xiaoyao for three years come and leave their footprints.

It's too watery, a bunch of nonsense, the plot advances so slowly

I just read Chapter 11 and I have some thoughts. Let me talk about the first 11 chapters first: the plot characters and everything are consistent (but the words these plot characters say are really old, like the plot ten years ago). If you want to publish these plots, it's not bad. If you want to continue the results of the previous one on the website, you have to think of new plots, or rely on your fans to help you catch up. Like the previous book, I gave up after reading about a hundred chapters because of the character of Pig's Feet. I also felt that the character of Pig's Feet made me give up on this book. So for me, no matter how good the plot is, the pig's trotter character still makes me want to give up 😭

Readers of Xiaoyaopai who have been here for many years come and support me.

Fans of Xiaoyaopai are here!

The phoenix is ​​a male bird and the phoenix is ​​a female bird. Uncle Huang looks so awkward.

The protagonist's aura is too serious. How can a silly Baitian with a cowardly character, no scheming, and a desire to return to the Holy Mother survive in a demon sect full of insidiousness and cunning, where disciples kill each other? I couldn't stand it anymore when I reached Chapter 50. I saw that the protagonist was receiving novice gift packages as a matter of course along the way, and I almost felt weak.

The author will update it as soon as possible!

It's too slow, the protagonist is silly and sweet, no matter how honest a person is, he will change if he is bullied too much. Not to mention becoming bad, at least he will be more considerate towards other people. After a long time, he still doesn't know the dangers of the world.

It can be achieved that the author makes the readers become eunuchs. One is from scratch, one is Emperor Domination, and the other is Xiaoyaoyou.

The record of extraordinary achievements in Jianghu, please update quickly.

The writing is quite good, but I haven't gained fame yet.

I think this book is okay, but it's a cool novel that progresses too quickly and is too fake. The poor performance is related to publicity, updates are too slow, and the author has two books together which is even more undesirable. Can't you finish one book first and then the other? It's not good to occupy both ends.

The plot is a bit thin, and it seems that there is only one line unfolding. With the author's creative skills and writing style, there should be multiple narrative clues spreading at the same time, making the suspense of the story interlocking and fascinating.

Updated Jianghu Qigonglu

Please update Jianghu Qigonglu more. We have been waiting for almost a year.

The main update of Demon Palace is! I'm also reading Qigonglu, and I want to read the book Demon Palace even more, because I've finished reading the next part of Xiaoyao Pai. Fight hard and support you.

A great fifth-level author, but he doesn't have many loyal fans!

If the three chapters are not explosive, the book will be meaningless. The Virgin Bitch is even more annoying.

In fact, "The Master of the Demon Palace" is very well written. Why did it stop so quickly?

I hope the author can complete the book from beginning to end and complete the book with the Master of the Demon Palace.

I'm also paying to read your record of extraordinary achievements. Don't be a eunuch for this one. I'll wait for your update.

Leng Guhan's whereabouts in the ancient world are still a mystery. He can't be the next boss, right?

Everything else is fine, but there is one thing I don't understand, that is, to what extent does one's martial arts reach, like the Xiaoyao sect, what state is it? What realm is clearly marked, so we also know, what kind of strength is it? And the Master of the Demon Palace in the second part was not written? How can we know what kind of strength Cui You is? Who can clearly tell the difference between dealing with a few and dealing with a few by comparing them?

Entered the main line? The master of the Demon Palace, the master of the Wulin Palace?

Now you have more people here and now there are more people there. If you go on, there will be no one there.

This looks great and needs to be updated! I have paid to read the book Jianghu Qi Dong Lu, 😡

Why haven't you updated yet? I've been waiting for you for a long time. Hurry up.

I think it would be better for the second child to be the male lead, this Cui You is just a silly fool

Update soon, it's very beautiful