Abyssal Slave Master

Why did the slave master of the abyss change his name to the Virgin of the Abyss?

That Catwoman was a failure. Maybe the author wanted to make her into a cute, lively and alert type, but I think the "cute" and "lively" are too much. When interacting with the serious and tall image formed by the protagonist "Lord of the Abyss" and other settings, it makes people feel that Catwoman's attitude towards the protagonist is even a little presumptuous and becomes more and more intense. The protagonist chose to ignore Catwoman when she first started to be "presumptuous". Later, when Catwoman entered the temple, she directly climbed up the statue of the protagonist to take off her helmet to see the protagonist's true nature. Yong, this series of plots made me a little bit poisoned. The protagonist's mentality was to avoid Catwoman. After Catwoman's "attempted action", she felt relieved, "Fortunately, she didn't...". This creates a great contrast and contradiction with the protagonist's character as the "master" of Catwoman and all survivors. You are the master, but you have no majesty that matches your identity. Another thing I want to say is that when Catwoman discovered that the eyes of the protagonist's statue were different from usual, she did not think about a lot of possibilities such as "divine manifestation", "special spells", "hallucinations" and so on. She directly came to the conclusion that "the statue is the protagonist's true body" and was convinced of it. There were obviously many more reliable conjectures than this, but she insisted on the unlikely one. This plot is also poisonous.

No, no, in writing they are called Abyss Slavers, two synonyms for darkness, and they also write about the direction of light, a negative or a positive?

These chapters of Dragon Girl have poisoned me to death. They are both edible and cute. . Complete poison points. . You worked so hard to collect food in the early stage, and then it will eat more than half of you. . Forcibly explaining the combat power is overwhelming. . I know some people will say that the black dragon has high combat power. Forget it, after reading books for so many years, you still don't understand what these authors are thinking. Of course, there will definitely be a scene in the later stages where the Black Dragon Girl saves the entire team, but she will definitely not be the main character in the end. If you don't like this kind of character, skip these chapters.

If the protagonist still has a bright future in this environment, I will send you to the street.

In a black dye vat, you can still wash white and show off. Just say this to you, it's definitely a novice.

When writing this article, I just caught up with the latest chapter 70. Since the introduction is weak, I will write one here so that everyone will not miss it: After the destruction of the old world, humans are still being born continuously from the "Human Manufacturing Factory". In the doomsday [Ringed City], they are lingering. Alien species, crazy killing machines, mummy pilots, they are struggling between light and darkness. Tang Hao, a time traveler from another world, unexpectedly possesses the ability to control humans. Faced with the people from other worlds who worship him as a god, he decides to use his tricks to pretend to be the "lord" in their mouths. Tags: Post-apocalyptic, farming and territory construction, science fiction, machinery Comments below: The novel is pretty good. If labeled, it would be post-apocalyptic farming science fiction. Games like this are too real. The plot conflicts and writing style are both up to a standard that can be tried. The only shortcoming is that the characterization is not good. It is still very promising at present. There are many doubts and clues, which can give readers the desire to read further, including why the world has become like this, territory construction, social development and other very interesting farming elements. If I were to comment, I would still recommend it. ps: 1 The term "Ringcheng" was not mentioned in the article, but I thought about it and it was very appropriate, so I used it. 2 It's time for the author to clean up the comment area. Those badmouthers seriously affect the perception of new readers. I almost believed it. 3 The classification of fantasy is very strange. Normally, this should be considered science fiction. Maybe the author thought that science fiction must be reasonable, so he chose fantasy. However, in fact, according to the outrageousness of science fiction in the current Internet literary world, your book can definitely be considered science fiction. {"NickName":"Dentists love to pull teeth","UserId":230989762}Give me some sperm

Just my humble opinion, I hope the author can change the title of the book. To be honest, I came in for "Abyss" and "Slave Master". I thought it would be a good dark novel, but after reading it, I found that it was not. The protagonist cannot be said to be kind, but he is far from the standard of darkness, not to mention that he will become a "god" later on. It would be much better to change the title of the book. After all, it currently attracts mostly readers of dark literature, but some of them do not like the plot development very much, and those who do like the plot development do not notice or are not attracted by this name.

Selling dog meat as a sheep's head, showing love everywhere, more than 20 people in the team escaped with supplies during the war, but no one was sent to hunt them down or held accountable? Just pretend to say that I won't be punished severely next time? People on both sides started fighting. You came to break up the fight but ended up bleeding yourself and giving away technology? Just change your name to Our Lady of Doom.

I was really attracted by the title of the book, but this is the result.