Humanity Yongchang

This book is the first book that I sincerely want to order, and I have fully ordered it (for students, other books can only be ordered for the first time)

If you believe in cause and effect, stop writing about Buddhism like this. You have not entered the door of Buddhism and do not understand the great horror in cause and effect. If there is too much to say, even if you don't believe it, at least be in awe of it.

How can I put it this way, from the ordinary and weak Chen Sheng at the beginning to the "King of Han" later, the description of psychological details and every flesh-and-blood supporting character can make me, a 15-year-old bookworm, feel like I am understanding a real story. Of course, I even memorized the maps of the Warring States Period because of this story, and learned about many real historical figures from the information. It was really amazing! To say that I think the only shortcoming is probably the heroine. The author's portrayal of her makes me feel a little vague, but maybe it's just for me. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his persistence and writing style. I have no culture, so I will give you two words, awesome! 🤓

In this novel, I think everyone can feel the author's intention. Many times when reading a book, it can calmly arouse our positive attitude, which is very happy. When the author writes it, it is no longer the author's book when we read it. It will be connected with our thoughts. We are not substituted, but we are in it. I still love this book so much, cheers for the author. Read it when you are calm and you will find that there is nothing wrong with this book and you will love to read it more😏

It's a really good book. I didn't expect it to be such a mixed subject, but the author still handled it very well. However, the author also has to speed up the pace. It is not easy to write an article about competing for world supremacy, especially the foreshadowing at the beginning. Come on!

Chapter 1: What is the meaning of the heroine being a hairpin? Tea art?

It's not enough, it's too little, it makes me angry! ! !

Come on, author, I'll support you by watching videos (>ω<)

The writing is very good, but there is too little and it is not satisfying.

Not enough, please update soon

There seems to be something wrong with me. A question suddenly pops up in my mind. Why do you call yourself Fengyun instead of Xiaolou? 😃

Don't turn on the anti-theft, and have a bigger picture.

The war scenes are wonderfully written, but the life scenes are too overwhelming in comparison. They look more and more like the emperor's golden hoe. Moreover, Zhao Qing is completely unsuitable to be the princess of Han Dynasty or even the queen. To be honest, have you seen any emperor's queen or the wife of a president or prime minister who only knows how to cook? The main character, a businessman's son, is about to dominate the world. Zhao Qing was who he was before and is still the same now. He has not made any progress at all. He can't do anything except cooking. It's like he is stuck. The partner of the head of a country should at least understand some politics. You are like a mascot that is not even a vase. It is too unrealistic. Also from a low background, look at what Queen Ma is like. This is normal and reasonable. In contrast, if Zhao Qing is still written and the heroine is not changed, the plot will collapse.

There is a saying that this book is really rubbish. Apart from smooth writing, exquisite word choice, outstanding characterization, and an absurd but logically consistent plot, what else is there? Nothing!

Author, when will you let me feel this way?

The characters that have appeared in the past month all have the same face, and they all have a heroic mouth. They bowed their heads after Chen Sheng said a few words. Ying Zheng and Liu Bang have neither the heroic spirit nor the cunning of a villain, so the scene ended hastily. Li Si and Fan Zeng became Chen Chui. When the lord said something to them, they said: "Your lord is a great talent, and we will be convicted!" The hero was written as a villain, and the famous minister was written as a coward. A generation of kings ran around fighting for their lives with the leading generals, and the famous general was named Zhao Kuo in order to highlight the lord. Meng Tian, ​​Li Xin... These are all famous generals. I started pursuing this book because of Chen Sheng's youthful spirit. A heroic personality turned into a tool after becoming king.

Map of Twelve States, Map of Yanzhou

I have been reading books for more than ten years in vain, and your book is the first one I paid money to read.

Why does it seem like the protagonist is born and raised here? There are still some operations in the front that are like modern people, but the more I write, the more like locals. What about your modern acquired knowledge? Where's the big banger? If you don't want your brothers to die, just use technology. When you attack the city, you are surrounded by three and one is missing. If the wall collapses for him, why don't you just rush through it? The wall is not guarded by formations. Don't say anything else. If a large instrument like a trebuchet is equipped with some modern incendiary materials, all the cities that need to be attacked should be destroyed. Do you know about the things driven by hydraulic runner in iron smelting? It's not too much to halve the efficiency of the whole set. Every soldier has a set of hundreds of steel-making. Isn't it just a random rush? If there is no rubber monster, why eat it? Use it. The monster's feelings are just to gain a sense of presence? The fur is definitely tough and elastic. Not to mention being used as a sealing ring, wouldn't it be nice to use it to pad wheels to improve transportation efficiency?

The description of the heroine Qing Niang is really a bit embarrassing. Maybe the author wanted to describe a good wife who only cares about her husband, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I just skipped Qing Niang when I saw her. I don't know what the subsequent plot will be. Maybe the author will sublimate her emotions later or make her more flesh and blood, but I should be I will never read the description of this character again. It feels like a strong character The new writing is very good. Whether it is the world view, the world, or the emotional line, I will read it every word until I follow it to the latest. The heroine Zhao Miao is also worth recalling. In my heart, the martial arts genre can already be regarded as a god. Not only is it a very good novel, it would also be a very good screenplay if adapted. In short, I am also chasing new books. I came back to read this book after reading Spring Breeze and a glass of wine. It can be seen that the author's writing power has been significantly improved when writing Spring Breeze. In short, come on, the author, tell the story you want to tell according to your own ideas. His writing style is better than that of many great writers. The author will become popular soon.

The structure is old-fashioned, but some things in the core are thought-provoking! (Constitutional monarchy is not in Neha) The ending is very satisfying, and the self-justification of time travel is relatively satisfactory! Praise!

Is the author still traveling? Will be back soon to update the book

The author writes from Chen Sheng's point of view that the prince and general Xiang Ning has a kind of love that is indeed beyond imagination. It is even more remarkable that the protagonist can always stick to this concept. The author's grasp of emotions and the description of the scenes are just right, and people often get involved in it, especially the final talks about life, the death of friends, the arrangements for children, and the introduction of policies all give people a refreshing but reasonable feeling. The originally empty protagonist gradually became full of flesh and blood with the final description. It's a pity that the ending was poorly handled. The description of the battle in the book is a bit lagging, and Han Xin's death is such a pity

I want to ask a question. Did the protagonist win the world at the end of this book? I don't want to see the kind of protagonist who gives up his achievements to Qin Shihuang in the end. A true man will never give up his great achievements to others. He shouldn't be the kind of person who kneels down and licks Ying Zheng, right?

It had some flavor at first, but the more I watched it, the more boring it became. Whether it was a group battle, the enemy troops were disturbed and fled in chaos, but I couldn't feel the defeat of the soldiers at all, as if ruthless robots were following a process, or an assassination activity, it also felt like a process, without any flavor.

It's not that the back is boring, it's just that there are too few. I felt a little disconnected when I first watched it, and couldn't get into the plot. After reading it for 100 chapters, it will definitely be a climax!

Some aspects were not handled properly in the early stage, and I felt that there was a blaming temperament, like the Qing Emperor. The back is pretty cool. You should read this book a second time after finishing it. It's not easy. There are books these days that you can read a second time. None of it is easy.

I recently read Yi Ding. It turns out that this book is a reference.

Give me a boost! Don't go too far!

It's September, where are the new books 🙂