Light Barrier

First of all, let me say that I like this book very much. I forgot where I started reading it. After catching up with it, I followed it for a while. I started reading the last volume. I recently finished reading it when I found out that it was finished. I actually rarely write book reviews, and I don't speak much in the comment area, but this book still has a lot of praises. It should be said that it is more criticized than praised. I don't know if the panda has seen it, but I ask myself that it is definitely well-intentioned, and no one has been attacked by ginseng. Maybe it can confirm my love for this book from another angle? I have finished watching it today. I should say that the ending is not very satisfying, but it is not dissatisfying. It is better than unsatisfactory. I can give it a score of 70-80 points. Below I will comment on my thoughts after reading the book Bulwark of Light by asking and answering a few questions of my own. First of all, there is a point of view. The feeling of reading online articles is completely different from the feeling of fattening and killing. If you think what I said is wrong or even nonsense, it is probably due to this difference; secondly, my reading is also intermittent, and I did not read it all in one go. I did not think about it a second time when I wrote this book review, so I may not remember many things clearly. Please be gentle. The first question, is the book unfinished? My evaluation is good and bad, and overall I prefer it. Fortunately, the big holes in the story of the whole book have basically been filled in, such as what is Blazing Fire, what is the super giant seismic storm, what is Turing, what is the truth of the world, how to deal with the Hellfire in the end, etc. You must know that it is not that easy to do this in a web novel. Easy, which means that after millions of words, the plot framework has not gotten out of control, nor has there been the problem of unlimited monster hunting, upgrading and changing maps. In the process, there have been no vicious bugs or poorly designed plots beyond the author's control that have caused the book to go astray. In addition, a happy ending is a personal preference. I don't like tragedy and I don't like people receiving lunch. The bad points are as follows: First, the progress is too fast and there is not enough preparation. The battles with Qinglong, Deep Sea, and Super Giant are too simple, and the dialogue with Turing's world truth is too simple. The protagonist does not even face Qinglong face to face. This boss has been shaped for a long time from the middle to late stage, but in the end it failed to contribute a big point. Deep Sea's defeat is too simple. Note that I am not saying that the plot is unreasonable, but the performance is insufficient; secondly, Gu Shen's final scene There is an extra saint character, which is a bit unexpected, and the early plot did not show that he has this trait; thirdly, some of the settings themselves are a bit vulgar. Setting the ultimate source of the conflict in a higher civilization cannot be said to be wrong, it can only be said that it is not good enough, and it feels a bit deus ex machina. Of course, because the book is handled well, it does not give people the feeling of taking the blame for higher civilizations if they cannot fill the hole, but this setting itself is not pleasing enough. Second question, how are the characters in this book? As we all know, men's online novels generally have strong plots but weak characters. I can only say that the character creation in the book Bright Barrier is okay, at least not bad. Some of the problematic characters cannot be said to be poor character writing, but a problem with the plot design. The best character written in this book is, of course, the great sage Gu Changzhi who is better than the protagonist. From the beginning to the end, his personality has never collapsed. It can be said that he is a saint with no inconsistent or unreasonable plot. This "sage" is not even fake and annoying, unlike the positive characters in some works who only have a memorial arch. He plays a key role in promoting the entire story structure and succession, and can be called the biggest contributor to this book. The most outstanding thing about the book "Fortress of Light" is that it is a truly tall and positive character, rather than a character with a complex background, twists and turns, emotional twists, who is both good and evil. I can't say what the author's level is. When we evaluate whether a character is well created, we need to see whether his character design can stand up. The key lies in whether there is enough plot, especially details, to support the performance, whether it can create a lifelike and vivid feeling, and whether it follows the logic of its own behavior instead of doing whatever the author tells him to do. If not, the character will become pale and pale. In this sense, the protagonist is the most difficult to write, because all the plots revolve around him, and it is difficult to make all the plots fit the character, not to mention that the protagonist always needs to grow (characters like Gu Changzhi are easy to establish, and this is also because his character is generally static and will not grow much). The character Gu Shen is generally okay, but the final saint characteristics come suddenly. As an AI mouthless girl, the heroine Chu Ling seems to be difficult to write simply. For a character with a blank slate, it is difficult to achieve reasonable growth, and it is not so easy to like. For example, the animation Violet Evergarden spent so much space to make Weir Li Te knows what love is, which may make some viewers feel stiff. Chu Ling's growth and change in character throughout the book are actually not big. At least I don't feel this way. You can say that the author's original intention was not well achieved, but at least she did not make her annoying or disappointing. There are many key characters and villains in this book. The one I want to complain about the most is Qinglong. There are big problems with this person's character and the plot surrounding him. I will leave the plot to the next question. Let's talk about his motivation and purpose in terms of character. With the characteristics of his later bosses, many early plots are unreasonable or even contradictory. In my opinion, this is because people can't establish it. Generally speaking, the author's writing of characters should be above average, and the problem of facial expressions and tool characters is not a big problem. The third question, what is the plot design of this book? In a word, the big frame and key plots are good, but the small ones are average and sometimes even a bit bad. I don't know what the author's outline looks like. In my opinion, the author can write well the key plots and main stories that can be listed on the outline, but the story always has to start and change, and there will not be a climax everywhere. Many transitional plots and non-key plots will not give the author too much time to design, which can easily get out of control. For example, the part where Han Dang becomes the mini-boss, or the part where Li Qingsui's family seizes power, are quite uncomfortable. I wrote it for a long time, and it became more and more outrageous. But the big aspects, such as Gu Shen and the Divine Infant, Gospel Box and Tinder, Turing and Deep Sea and Source Code, etc., Are all quite exciting. Let me continue here to talk about what I am most dissatisfied with the plot of this book, which is the forced promotion of Qinglong's combat power in the later stage. Judging from Qinglong's performance when he first appeared in Qingzhong to get back the fire of wine, he should not be so strong, nor should he have such great ambitions. If I want to say more, I will need to read the book. I can't remember the details. I will write this first, I understand everything. The fourth question, how is the combat power system in this book? Similar comments to the previous question, generally speaking, it is okay, but when it comes to specific situations, a certain person may collapse, such as Han Dang, who is the mini-boss. There are two big problems with this combat power system. The first is the "original" level that appears in the middle and late stages. I don't know whether this is a new level that appeared in the middle or it was there from the beginning. It has the flavor of a vulgar fantasy novel. The second is the combat power level of Deep Sea. To be honest, I really don't understand why Deep Sea is strong and how strong it is. I don't understand it. I don't know if it's my own problem. The fifth question, how is the author's writing style? Not really. Panda likes to use some very awkward words, such as spit out, softly, hand, etc. If you look carefully, it really affects the perception. I suggest you polish your writing in the next book. Last question, do you like this book? That means you definitely like it. Whoever doesn't like it writes such a long book review. I hope the author's next book will be better! This book review was written on a plane, and it has landed on the ground. I will write more when I am in the mood.

Alas, I still can't stand it anymore. The author's score should be that his later works were very good, but I didn't have the opportunity to taste them. Let's briefly talk about the poisonous points of the first thirty-two chapters. 1. The protagonist's character is split. The protagonist in the opening chapters is an outstanding talent who is calm and bold, capable of action, able to assess the situation, and has strong logical thinking ability. This personality continued until after killing two killers on the rooftop. After that, he suddenly turned into a hard-working, resilient but immature little loser. These two characters are good individually, but mixed together is very troublesome. Because the choices these two people have when facing certain events are completely opposite. This refers specifically to the mental test. If it is a bad child character, I can completely understand it, because the little monster with its head curled up on its abdomen just wants to huddle in its own warm nest and not want to be disturbed by others. But if it is the first persona, you should not do this. I feel that a person who has strong thinking ability and can assess the situation should know when to hide his clumsiness and when to show his own value. The situation at that time was that your organization had paid a lot to keep you, and you shouldn't have shown your value to make them think that your efforts were worth it? The slice threat theory was also unreasonable and forced. (Actually, the separation of characters is more euphemistic. To put it bluntly, it means forcibly reducing intelligence) 2. The acquisition of the important props ruler is not reasonable. A009 If he had been running away without being caught, and met the protagonist to solve the "puzzle" and give him props, this would be very reasonable. A009 was just arrested, but the higher-ups didn't know that she was crazy because of a supernatural prop, so they didn't search her body, which makes sense. A009 was caught. The superiors knew that she was crazy because of an important prop, but they didn't search her body or "strip her naked". They just looked at what she was holding and made guesses. They didn't put it into practice (referring to taking it away for research). They just let her run away and deliver the prop to the protagonist. The key is that the prop itself had no concealment method. This. . . It's so "reasonable". According to some spoilers, this was arranged by Mr. Shu and the heroine, so it can be said to be reasonable, but when I saw this in the early stage, it really felt like it gave my logic a hard punch. 3. The amnesty order appears strange and unexpected. I know what the author wants to write is that Mr. Shu gives a letter of guarantee to allow the protagonist, a powerful (in the eyes of outsiders) wild ability user with no official background, to join the Judgment Office. There is no problem with this, and it is perfectly fine for his political opponents to use this to attack him. But the strange thing is that this kind of guarantee letter is actually issued internally. Is it okay to alarm the Council of Twenty (the highest body)? In fact, it is not impossible here. As long as the author spends a chapter or two to write about the exchange of interests behind the scenes, the logic is self-consistent. But the author didn't write anything and just threw this setting in the readers' faces. It was very abrupt and made people feel that this amnesty order was just a tool to drive the protagonist forward. The plot was very blunt. (There are also many people who don't like amnesty orders because the protagonist has not committed any crime at all. They are labeled as criminals and then they say that if you meet certain conditions, I will pardon you. Just like you were eating hot pot and singing at home one day, and suddenly someone broke into the house and robbed you. Then they paid you back the money you robbed and said, now you owe me a debt. The key law still pays I'm confused if I agree) In addition to the big poisonous points above, there are also some small poisonous points (I think some people may think these are the big poisonous points, or not poisonous at all), such as the setting of the social background, the positive institutions are not just, the protagonist runs around and is caught and then interrogated, the protagonist is interrogated and his cheating finger is exposed, etc. The writing style of this book is really good, but the logic loopholes in the early stage are really big. Even if it can be filled in later, the early viewing experience is really not good.

After reading the first volume, I took a long breath and turned off my phone. But I am uneducated. My feeling after reading the first volume is, holy shit, it's so good! Is there any higher evaluation than a reader shouting "It's so good" after reading it! ! ? ? I have read a novel with a similar setting. The protagonist always has endless trump cards, and there are always opponents beyond common sense. It is inexplicable. To put it simply, I just can't understand it. As for the realm and combat power setting of this novel, whether it is the 12th level of the deep sea that surpasses ordinary people, or it rises to the level of the throne of God, there are traces to follow and the underlying logic to fight against it (laughs). Every development can be seen and understood. In terms of the development of the plot, it is also touching, with ups and downs that make people say "wtf". The "S-level review" made me look forward to how the review would proceed. The battle between Song Ci and Chen Mi, Song Ci feeling like he couldn't defeat him, and Qi Ju thinking that if Chen Mo was not in the bullet, he could penetrate Song Ci. It all made me think that Song Ci was going to be KO. The characters are also vividly created, such as the scheming Mr. Shu, the "rough man" Song Ci, the stubborn but growing Nan Jin, Zhao Qi who cannot hold up the wall, Zhao Xilai, a councilor and father... Each character has his own character and lives in his own way. So in terms of setting, plot, and characterization, they are all perfect. Then let me talk about my thoughts on the title of the volume [Judgment]. Many things in this volume are related to "judgment". Han Dang met Gu Shen, and then suffered Luo Er's "judgment": hypnosis, and then withdrew the report. In the Zhou Yu case, Xiao was sentenced and died in front of the icon. Zhao Qi, who banished his wife, also received a verdict. Lion Lane case, ten years later, Qin Ye was sentenced and committed suicide out of fear of guilt. Everything is moving in a good direction. But if Luo Er is not strong enough, the person who will be sentenced will be Gu Shen for "creating false ratings" and "arson and wounding people". If Xiao met someone other than Bai Shu, he could still get away with it. Zhao Qi, in addition to banishing his wife, has done many evil things, but he has not been "adjudicated" until now, just because "my father Zhao Xilai". Perhaps, delayed justice is no longer justice. Qin Ye died, a man who fought for the future of mankind died, and the family he and his "protected family" formed was shattered. The gangster who hurts someone with a knife can be safe if he destroys one of his own knives. After the ruling, there is power and injustice. As Nan Qin said, "The crown is not justice, and the sword is not judgment." The collision between the new world and the old world sparked the spark of the times. Is it true that the ship of the new era cannot carry the remnants of the old era? What is a lie and what is the truth? After seeing the truth, how should we choose? Since we are happy when we meet, why should we be sad when we part? A complicated world is slowly unfolding... …………………… The above is only my personal opinion. I originally wanted to read it all before writing, but I saw that this is the "first book review event", which means that there is a "second" and "third" opportunity to collect wool... I wish the Light Barrier becomes more and more popular, and I also wish the pandas good health, more and more! I'm going to read the second volume, it's so good.

After reading a part of it, I will tell you what I personally find very uncomfortable. It is that the switching of perspectives is too ridiculous. One second, Mr. Heshu and Mr. Bai are in the car, and the next second, without any explanation, he cuts directly back to lying on the bed. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. It is undeniable that the author's writing style is good, but if the reader's feelings are not considered, then the author is only suitable for writing literary works, not online articles.

My rating is 6. Are normal comments not moderated? Then I'll send it again. If you still can't review it, I'll change my number and send it. The subject matter is relatively new. The writing is just okay. But the character dialogue and characterization are really bad. After reading the first 5 chapters, I thought it was a very good novel. But after meeting Mr. Shu later. It started to be inconsistent with common sense. Some of the dialogues between the protagonist and Nan Jin are very strange. There are many inappropriate jokes, but they are used only when they are serious. After Mr. Shu gave him his mobile phone number, what was the point of throwing it downstairs? There is also the empathy in the welfare home later. There is no foreshadowing, and sympathy is won in just a few sentences. In my opinion, there are many things that the author wanted to write but couldn't write well. And characterization. At the beginning, he was chased by Mrs. Bachi and was set on fire by an assassin. The protagonist, an ordinary person, actually had no qualms about killing people. On the contrary, he can smile and smile later, and even feel calm when he, a victim, is being interrogated by an official agency? Isn't this an official issue? Shouldn't the protagonist be angry? The official didn't even offer any compensation or an apology. Even interrogation? The protagonist still accepts it? The protagonist is barely made into a cowardly person. But after being knocked down during training, he kept standing up. The author said it was because he knew he could not fall down. Why would an ordinary person do this? Moreover, there is no logic at all as to why such a cowardly person like the protagonist behaves like this, and the author does not explain it. All I can say is that the characterization and dialogue ruined the book. Some people don't understand why there are so many people criticizing it, because many things in this book were imposed by the author and are very poisonous. A book that could have been a masterpiece was ruined because of these things. I am really angry, which is a pity. The writing is really good, and the poisonous parts are really poisonous.

This book can be read, but it cannot be called a masterpiece. The protagonist of this book does not have enough self-awareness, the protagonist's aura is too strong, and there are some situations where the setting is unfair, so it can be regarded as food and fodder.

I was really disappointed in the end. I didn't care about the update. I followed it just for the sake of fully subscribing. The plot behind it was already made clear. Shenhai Qinglu's death was really caused by the previous B-squares. He died very lightly, and you at least let these two die standing up. As top villains, the two of them gave me the impression of pure red noses🤡. The meaning of existence is to highlight how awesome Gu Changzhi and Gu Shen are, but the grace that these two characters should have is not visible at all. I basically didn't see any mental game between the two sides during the whole war. They were just waiting for Gu Shen to come. He was in a stalemate and waited for Gu Shen to come. The air and the deep sea were second to second. As an AI whose computing power crushed humans, he gave me the impression of a pure person. It couldn't think of anything. Gu Shen's IQ was completely obscured by Gu Shen. How many things can a computer or a top-level artificial intelligence do in one second? How many strategies can it come up with? As a result, I really don't like White Lizard. If you give an AI a personality and then write it as if it were a human being, why would you write it as an AI? Then Gu Shen revealed with all his body that I am the protagonist, I am invincible, I feel that whatever I do must be right, and I must be able to do anything. I feel like maybe my expectations for this book are too high 🙂 Science fiction...? Pure fantasy, nothing scientific.

The pure thinking core of American special effects movies (only showing off skills but no ideas): The core of world power is rotten and gone astray, but it is saved by one person in a coincidental and gorgeous way. After reading the early chapters, there is nothing that can be recalled. When you first read the plot, you will feel that the setting is novel. Later, it will feel like that. There is nothing worth thinking about. After reading it, I just feel like I just listened to a story. The plot completely revolves around the main plot, and the branch plots are not dared to be developed at all. Although there are no big logical problems, it is also very dull. (Personally, I think the appropriate branch line is what the author wants to write to the readers, rather than blindly telling stories to advance the plot) The summary is a little white text with a little bit of thought, which can be used to pass the time if you are short of books.

Today is also a day to praise the author. I stayed up late yesterday and finished reading the first chapter. I really cried to death when Zhao Xilai died. What is be, it is two ambitious people who turned from being good friends to turning against each other; it is people who agreed to fight together and finally met each other in arms, and the yin and yang are separated; what is he, it is when a close friend dies and turns into a wing to protect his children, it is a relationship that has devoted all his life in ten years The hard work of nurturing and caring means that in the end he still gave in step by step and used gentle methods even though he was different from his children. It was not until the last moment of his life that all ideological differences could be put aside, and he solemnly asked, can he be buried next to him? The unknown Lu Cheng and the ambitious Zhao Xilai are great.

This book has shortcomings. The level structure is vague in the early stage, and the fourth level is divided later. The combat power is a bit vague in the early stage. The protagonist's halo is too great, but the power structure is very good, the plot is also very good, and the foreshadowing is also very good. The most flaw is the fighting. If it were replaced by a fairy tale, it would be equivalent to countless people using a few exercises, but not many spells. Isn't it too empty? Well, the use of empty space is very suitable. The power of the God's throne is so great. Shouldn't there be many martial arts secrets when broken down? Good or bad, self-created or something, so this book is good to read, but not perfect. I would give it an 8.5 Out of ten. It is still a good book to read.

It's a pity that the writing was good in the early stage, but it fell apart in the later stage.

After looking around, many people have finished their praises, so I will briefly mention them. The writing is pretty good, and the idea is pretty good. It's still a more traditional plot of upgrading and surpassing levels to capture the spiritual world of a younger brother. However, the several confrontations with Xiao have the flavor of a battle of wits, and the ability design is also quite good. It can be seen that there is thoughtfulness. I think Xiao's ability is a big highlight of the book, and the hidden foreshadowing of old world fires such as Travelers makes people look forward to what the author's overall design will be. But as for the emotional line of the protagonist, I personally think that although it is a bit inexplicable in the early stage, it is acceptable. The relationship between Chu Ling and Gu Shen is a bit boring at the beginning, but it becomes natural later and when the relationship heats up to a certain extent, I feel that it is very comfortable to watch. And I think the bad thing about it is that the author is a little too pursuing happiness ending, there are many emotional lines that are a bit redundant and unnecessary. For example, Shen Li/Bai Lu, the emotional line that the author recently added secretly, I think is very redundant, as well as the relationship between the Saint of Light and Gu Nanfeng at present. The emotional line has little significance in promoting the plot. Senior brother and senior sister/Gu Shenchu Ling/Baishu and the sealed object eldest sister/Mu Gong/Senior sister Crow/Gu Nanfeng Saint/Bailu Shenli (hidden)/Captain Mu Wanqiu (?)/Qianye Gu Changzhi There are already 9 couples. I can understand that the author writes group portraits so he wants to arrange everyone's ending as perfect as possible, but I think love does not have to be mixed in. There are too many. I like Qianye Gu Changzhi's emotions that can drive the plot, but the scene of Bai Lu and Shen Li is so inexplicable. What the hell is it that makes you blush when you call her big sister? Originally, I quite liked these two characters, but the coercion of cps affected the viewing and experience. I felt that the couple was forced to join forces, and the forced setting, as well as Crow and Senior Sister, were a bit greasy and crooked when they reunited at the beginning. I think there was less foreshadowing and it was a bit stiff. Gu Nanfeng agrees. , So it would be a bit watery to fill in the love details or daily life between Gu Nanfeng/Senior Sister/Shen Li/Baizhu later. The author has done a good job with the emotional line of the protagonist, but I personally think that the emotional line of the supporting characters can be appropriately reduced. Shen Li Bailu is really a bit stiff

I have read Chapter 140 so far, the part about Xu Yan being forced into marriage. I always feel that the last few dozen chapters have been written by a different person, the supporting characters have collectively lost their wits, and the plot seems far-fetched, as if it was forced to make up a slap in the face. The key point is that the plot is not well written, both in writing and logic. He came to a big family to force a marriage, and he was still showing off. The key point was just mentioned in the previous article that Zhu Wang is a well-rounded person who is good at making friends... It was also the same in the previous martial arts competition. In order to get a ranking, he would do whatever it takes. Is this like what a good dancer would do? I'm afraid not everyone has offended you. Elder Gu went to Qingzhong and pretended to be cool, telling you that I could sense fire, and then left? ? ? Before we fight, let me tell you what my skills are? What's the point? Isn't it really someone else who is writing it? The quality gap between before and after is a bit big.

A bold guess is that the ruler is a product from the old world, and is therefore contaminated with great unknowns (hence the fear of returning to the old world), so the evil of the previous Pluto is amplified (in the exchange between Gu Changzhi and Gu Shen, he said that Pluto is his very good friend, and as a friend of the bright image of mankind, the friend of Dou Zhan should not be any worse), and the devil here is not Pluto. , There is a sentence in this chapter: "He has never seen anyone as shameless as Gu Shen." If this is not a joke, then who has he seen before? Is he the new king of Hades? Why did A009 lose control because of the ownerless ruler? In other words, an ownerless ruler can make people lose control, so when Pluto and the ruler meet, can the ruler also have an impact on Pluto? Also, I have read Panda's Fu Cang Lu once and Sword Bones twice. I have to say that one shortcoming is that Panda's ending is really too rough. The death of Yuan Tiangang is not even as good as the intrigues in the Six Paths Buddha Skeleton. Sheng's death only has a few words, and Lu Sheng's pure yang energy is more impressive than that one. To be honest, the curtain call for such a key character should be more colorful. The rest is very enjoyable to read, much better than some new books about unknown old age and Jie Jie Jie.

Book Review I am a very picky reader. After all, I have been reading books for more than 10 years. I have read all kinds of books, and I will never miss the more classic ones. As a result, I am very picky about reading books now. Barrier of Light is a very good novel that I have read recently. It is a wonderful novel that I can safely recommend to people around me. The pace of this story is very good. In this environment full of fast food and mindless novels, Fortress of Light is a book worth staying up all night reading in bed.

Book Review I want to talk about the changes in Panda's writing of books. Jiangu and Fucanglu were read on pirated websites. I read Jiangu first and then Fucanglu. The story of Jiangu impressed me even more. Whether it is the Great Sage who conforms to the traditional culture or the eight-volume heavenly book of the sword holder, or the guardian of Lu Sheng, Longxuan Palace, they all depict the world in a grand way. The plot of fighting against corrupt creatures in the end is very cliche but still attractive (Martial Universe is like this, Great Master is like this, Martial Peak is like this) Like this, many books are like this), but it is still unavoidable that the plot is not delicate enough due to the rapid advancement of chapters. I have said before that for example, the Great Sage will die with a stick Let's talk about Fucang Lu, it was obvious that there was a smell in the snow when I read it (I didn't know that the eunuch was the idol of pandas at that time), but the problem is still the same. The plot advances too fast, giving me a feeling that the book is finished and I still have more to say. Hai Hai and Yuan Tiangang ended a book just like that, or when portraying the red clothes, it always gave me the feeling of trying too hard to write a white fox face Speaking of the Fortress of Light, this book is a group portrait like the previous two books, but it is obvious that the author's writing rhythm is a little slower, maybe because the popularity is rising and the income is higher than before (😂), and this kind of subject matter has not been tried before, the first two books are more or less with There are some ancient Chinese cultures, such as dynasties, Shushan, and swords, but the subject matter of this book is very new. It must be the author's first attempt, and he has dug a lot of holes. At present, it seems that this book can be written for a long time, depending on how ambitious the author wants to make the book. I have been reading novels for eight years. This is the first one that I have paid to read the original version. I hope you can make more money for me In summary, there is only one sentence, why haven't you updated it yet?

The character of the protagonist is never clear, and his IQ fluctuates. He is calm and cautious at one moment, and seems to have no brain at the other. He is forced to lower his intelligence in order to advance the plot. . The writing style is also high and low. It feels like I want to write something, but I am using too much force. There is no smooth transition. The creation of characters is all about addition, constantly describing the characters to make them vivid, full-bodied, and gradually have their own personalities, so that readers can get involved, but the author is just like drawing a sketch, adding a stroke now and erasing a stroke now, so that the protagonist's character appears calm and cautious sometimes, and reckless and brainless sometimes, which is a very vivid reading experience. .

I have been reading books for more than ten years, and now I am very selective in reading novels. I just gave up on the first 3 books if they didn't appeal to me. If I don't have more than 3 million words, I won't read them. This book suddenly came out a few days ago, and I was so excited to read it for two days and two nights. I saw pirated copies in the early days, and now I'm here. Keep reading, come on, the author, the writing is good, the world view can be bigger, the old world, the new world, there are many powerful existences beyond the 5 continents, there are many things to eat in the sea, beasts can be awakened, they are all good ingredients, after all, life needs fireworks! !

The way to defeat AI is to reduce computing power and reduce the number of people connected to the deep sea. What is there to fight against? I don't understand how Turing will build a new host, upgrade the hardware and algorithms, let Chu Ling move in and set the highest authority, and add more advanced encryption systems and protocols internally. Dongzhou, Beizhou, and Nanzhou all use this network to establish network barriers. Zhongzhou and Guangming can do whatever they want with the deep sea. He also said that he didn't trust Deep Sea and didn't want to find a replacement. To kill an AI, you still have to think like a killer. In addition, Sky God has lived for so many years, and his biggest hobby is to be able to play tens of millions of chessboards at the same time, and calls it the feeling of becoming a god. This simple wish that is so easy for this old man can only be given by the deep sea upgrade. It can only mean that he is too busy and has nothing to do all day long.

==I stopped reading after seeing Chapter 9. I was forced to join the organization. I didn't even ask the protagonist if he wanted to. They also used medical expenses to coerce the protagonist. If you don't join, you will have to pay. Also, if you don't join, you will be interrogated or imprisoned. 6. The comment section said that this is not official but it is doing official things. If the protagonist is a vengeful person, this organization will definitely not have good consequences. ==Actually, when I saw this, I had probably already thought of the plot. Someone was playing chess. In Chapter 9, I could tell that the protagonist had already started to be guided. It is estimated that the dungeon will become stronger later, and then the people in the organization will be nice to the protagonist, so that the protagonist has a sense of belonging and important people. 😅 Later, there will be some righteousness and some high-power positions to bind the protagonist. This is probably the case. ==If you want to get out of the chess game, you have to die or become a chess player. I guess the author doesn't write the protagonist to jump out of the chess game and stay out of the situation. This kind of protagonist will only care about himself and the people closest to him. If you write something like this, remember to call me. I want to see how you can trick the Inquisition and what will happen if the protagonist is gone 🤔

It's a pity that the work that could have been a god has been reduced to a mess.

I think the most interesting aspects of a book are these 1. The character's IQ is online 2. The foreshadowing and the subsequent climax 3. The character's distinctive personality characteristics 4. The characters (positive/negative/neutral) can all cause some resonance Panda is undoubtedly better at these points, especially in the role of Jia Wei. He shows Javi's pursuit and piety towards the light, and this character's piety is dialectical to a certain extent (he is the person closest to the real light in the City of Light except Meng Xizhou, although he is still far from the real light). I personally think that the life-and-death feud between Javi and Gu Shen is entirely due to different camps and hatred of Pluto. If Javi had not been loyal to the light, perhaps the fate of this character would have been completely different. But there are also some strange points. Taking Jia Wei as an example, after Yao suggested to Jia Wei that the bright guidance might be wrong, Jia Wei still insisted that Gu Shen "had a problem". Another thing is that there are actually very few negative descriptions of Jia Wei in the book. Apart from his personal feud with Gu Shen, there is no description of him doing evil things (or maybe I forgot). It would still be a bit forced to write Jia Wei to death in this way. Although it is already very good, I hope this book can be better and reach a higher level😡

Unknowingly, after three years of writing, "Fortress of Light" is coming to an end. Someone in the review of the latest chapter said that although the ending is bland, it is just right for this category. Although I have made a comment, I thought about it and left a "quotation mark" for Panda's novel in advance! The super giant seismic storm was solved in this way. Although this article was written early, it can be vigorous or dull, but I think if the panda book becomes a system in the future, Xiao Gu meets Yi Xiao in another world, and meets Ning Tiandao (Ning Yi) who has transformed into the way of heaven. I wonder how sad the three of them will be when they meet. What you can feel in Panda's writing is the two words "irregular and deviant". Yes, perhaps the best illustration is the uninhibited page-turning illustration of Panda when you write about Ning Yi on the Smile official account. Because it is not serious, it can make us watch it as relaxed as possible. Because they are deviant, they have their own shining points, and they can break the stereotypes of the world at all costs. Therefore, whether it is A Thousand Years of Remembering the Morning and Dusk, or Mr. Ning and the Divine Girl, it is a... Uh... A different kind of rebellion, a kind of drawing a sword for what. In fact, strictly speaking, in the eyes of some picky readers, Panda is not well written, especially each ending may not be as they intended. As the old saying goes: There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Panda's "Fu Cang Lu" was poorly written, and the emotional lines of Ning, Xu, and Pei in "Sword Bone" did not leave each of us with a scene (or ending) that suits our own unfuckability. I think it is impossible, and life is unsatisfactory. I saw that the book was in the process of writing or completed. Some people read the chapters, but some people find fault, abuse and even ridicule. In fact, this is understandable. To put it shamelessly, I also read books and write some novels. I am also self-aware and know what kind of bad article I am writing now, but controversy is the greatest compliment, right? Finally, leave a reverie for the ending, the ending of "Xiao Gu"! I think it may not be as good as the book friends and colleagues wish, but at least this story has a happy ending. At least this story may become a shining new world in the minds of many people who read it for the first time, each with its own wonderful follow-up. Finally, I hope that the people who write the next book can make a side story about these three people playing mahjong 😏😏😏

After reading it for a long time, I finally finished it. Summary: It's good to watch in the early stage, but I can't arouse interest in watching it when I'm not watching it in the middle stage. It's easy to get fascinated when I'm watching it. At the end, the author fills in the holes perfunctorily. This book has a pretty good layout from the beginning, but from the back to the front, there are many things that cannot be explained. For example, there is a bug. Adam was able to predict all the time in Sanggao Cave, but it turned out that he had been taken away from him for a long time. So was his habit of talking to himself also made up? Are you making up a story that has lasted for more than ten years just to deceive Gu Shen, who you have known for less than two years?         ，80%4，20%， In one sentence, a very handsome chosen one saved the world from the omnic crisis. The view of time and space is the biggest highlight of this book.

Congratulations to Bright Barrier for its four-star glory, and hope to achieve greater success again👏👏

This is a sci-fi book in the early stage and a fantasy in the later stage, coupled with artificial intelligence destroying human beings and other operations, the overall content seems to be rich, and the IQ is basically online. Group portrait description is now a very common operation, and the supporting characters also have some edges and corners. It's a kind of complex. If you are interested, you can take a look.

It's the final chapter so soon, I'm really looking forward to it

Hehe, I was attracted to "Fortress of Light" by Dragon Ball's welfare works. In fact, I have wanted to read this book before because its operation team is very awesome. There are many, many activities. But I was a little confused after reading the first chapter, and I never showed interest in reading further. This time, in order to obtain the Dragon Ball, I had a chance to read carefully. I think it just happened to be the end of the book, so why not just enjoy it in the form of listening to the book. The two anchors randomly clicked on one first, and then wrote my evaluation of the other one, and this one is for the Poxie team. This post only represents my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, please feel free to describe it in the comment area or book circle~ In addition, today is Thursday, February 29th, and the next Thursday, February 29th will be 28 years later. Isn't it really crazy? Bad Smile JPG Narration Voice: The articulation is clear, the voice is slightly magnetic, and it gives people a sense of elegance. The listening experience is acceptable. There is a slight distinction between the male protagonist's voice and the narrator's voice, but the distinction is not very strong. The dubbing of the female character is not very stable, but the timbre is good and it sounds pleasant to the ears. Background music: The background music of the Poxie team is very good, especially when the girls appear in the first chapter, the melodious piano sounds are scattered, giving people a dreamy and ethereal feeling, filling the atmosphere and artistic conception, and the subsequent soundtrack also gives people a tense or light experience, which is a real bonus. Post-production sound effects: In general, it's pretty good, but the excessive force in some places makes it a little subtle. For example, where the light rail appears, in my opinion, the light rail should not have too obvious whistle sounds, but maybe in order to highlight the scene, some slightly redundant designs were made. Comparison of the original work: The content is basically the original text, but the anchor team has re-divided it according to length. Overall evaluation: A good-quality audiobook team. All aspects of the combination give people a reliable and mature team feel. The anchor's voice gives me a sense of a teacher, so I personally don't like it very much, but after listening to a few chapters, I feel that it does have a methodical and eloquent charm. Overall, the quality is good and you can give it a listen. Book title: "The Bulwark of Light" Author:The Wrestling Panda Status of the work: Completed Anchor Team:Poxie Top introduction duration: About 15 seconds {"TopicId" :"911806161065213952","TopicName":"Listening to books"}{"TopicId":"894890053301174272","Top icName":"Listening Book Lovers"}{"TopicId":"795619379952877568","TopicName":"Lighting Barrier"}

La la! I was attracted to "Fortress of Light" by Dragon Ball's welfare works. In fact, I have wanted to read this book before because its operation team is very powerful and there are many activities. But since I was a little confused after reading the first chapter, I never showed interest in reading further. This time, in order to obtain the Dragon Ball, I had a chance to read carefully. I think it just happened to be the end of the book, so why not just enjoy it in the form of listening to the book. The two anchors randomly clicked on one first, and then wrote my evaluation of the other one, and this one is for the Wang Wang Immortal team. This post only represents my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, please feel free to describe it in the comment area or book circle~ In addition, today is Thursday, February 29th, and the next Thursday, February 29th will be 28 years later. Isn't it really crazy? Bad Smile JPG Narration and Protagonist's Voice: The voice of the anchor of the Wang Wang Immortal Team is a very standard male voice, and even has a little AI anthropomorphic feeling. It is clearly distinguished from the slightly lively and sunny voice of the male protagonist, and it feels good. Background music: Mainly composed of suspenseful and tense background music, combined with the plot, to keep the audience's anticipation of the article online, giving it a sense of a movie or drama. Post-production sound effects: The details are quite good, such as footsteps, the running sound of light rail and the chirping of birds. Various detailed sounds make the work feel extremely real and enhance the audience's sense of tension. Others: Whether it is the background introduction of the first 4 minutes and 20 seconds, or the introduction of the first 52 seconds of the first episode, it shows the intention of the anchor team to help the audience better understand the story. Since I was persuaded to leave because of the slightly confusing beginning when I first read it, I personally think that the design of this listening team is enough to give praise. In addition, other content of the Wang Wang Immortal Team is mainly based on the original text, with only a slight re-cutting to length. Overall evaluation: Wang Wangxian's team is excellent in terms of sound, background music, sound effects, and attention to detail. It is a team worth choosing. Book title: "Light Barrier" Author: The Wrestling Panda Work status: Completed Anchor Team: Immortal Wang Wang Opening introduction duration: About 20 seconds (the first episode does not have an opening team introduction) {"T opicId":"795619379952877568","TopicName":"Light Barrier"}{"TopicId":"9118061610652139 52","TopicName":"Listening to books"}{"TopicId":"894890053301174272","TopicName":"Listening to books lovers"}

It's March, Panda, is there no news about your new book?🥺