Elf I Have a Super Illustrated Book

After reading Chapter 20, the start is pretty good. My father ran away and owed millions. My mother was beaten to a disability and came to collect debts arrogantly. The protagonist is set to be a person who achieved financial freedom in his previous life. This is definitely not an ordinary person. With the addition of Goldfinger, it has a realistic feel. If you prefer reality to be darker, after all, there are extraordinary people everywhere. It is normal for the strong to respect the strong. Like those books, it has the potential to become a small hit, but okay! The plot goes on and on, becoming more and more anime-style, with several girls appearing, the younger sister, the younger sister's best friend, the girl from the cafeteria... I feel no sense of tension at all. I haven't seen the level classification until now. It's completely blurry. It's hard to get ahead. If you look at the realistic books, the results are basically not too bad.

I know that it is difficult to find a good novel, and there are very few novels that can meet my own ideas, so I will list the selling points and flaws of my book in this post for readers who want to read this book but are afraid of being poisoned. 1. Is this novel systematic? This novel has no self-awareness system. There is only an Elf Guide in the mind, which can query all information related to Pokémon, so there is no overlying system or forced follow-up plot. 2. Are there any typos in this novel? First of all, let me explain that there must be some, but very few. Every time I publish a new chapter, I will check it twice. And sometimes, in order to let readers better assume the role of the protagonist, the words are chosen to be familiar to ordinary people, and not too many uncommon words are used. This is also to make readers read more smoothly. 3. Is this book updated quickly? There is no guarantee that it will be 10,000 per day. It will be updated once it is put on the shelves. It will be stable at 4,000+ per day, just a little more. There will be no intermittent updates. The specific update time is around 8:00 pm. Before it is put on the shelves, one chapter will be updated every Tuesday morning. 4. Is the setting of the sprite a game or an animation? The settings of this book are based on the settings of elves (Pokémon). The background is fictional. There is no setting that elves can only have four skills. Moreover, the skills will not completely copy the animated games. Slight changes may be made to be closer to reality. 5. What kind of brain is your protagonist? The protagonist is set to be a wealthy person in his previous life, possessing business acumen and a lover of elves (Pokémon). After rebirth, the protagonist likes to save money in many places, but when raising elves, he will never save money, and he likes elves more than girls. PS: If you have any questions, you can ask them ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

(Accident)

It wasn't working in the beginning. I've read too many elven stories, and now it feels too awkward to see how awesome you can fight just after time travel. Games and reality are two completely different things, even virtual ones. How can you command them skillfully without even touching real Pokémon? I feel that my IQ is not enough. It would be almost the same if the protagonist traveled through time for several years! In the real world, just shouting a few words is not enough. Just like sports, in real running, you have to stretch your legs, not just two clicks on the keyboard to run. No matter how awesome Pokémon is, its advantages are only some characteristics that haven't been studied in the real world, or treasures that haven't been studied clearly. Apart from this knowledge, the rest may not even be as good as a primary school student.

The setting is animation or game. In the animation, the mega evolution does not require a bracelet, and the bracelet is just a decoration.

After reading the author's letter to readers, I finally saw that the female character was treated as a tool. I don't know who started the trend, but now all elf writing has become monk writing. I admit that the core of elf literature is elf development, but imagine if Xiaozhi had been traveling with Xiaogang and Xiaomao in the anime, without the companionship of female protagonists such as Xiaoguang, Xiaoyao Semei, and without the powerful female kings such as Sirona and Kona. They were all men. After watching the first part, I would not continue watching. I was just inspired by the author's ideas after visiting the elf literature area. It's difficult to write a good emotional drama, but if you write it well, I believe the results will not be bad. The author just keeps his own rhythm. Come on.

It's worthy of being a daily introduction to poison. Hey, hey, hey

Where did Honey Girl come from🤝

Duan's comment was swallowed up, come here to post it. Can such a person be a teacher? Or the head teacher? Who deserves the credit for good academic performance? Whose fault is it for poor academic performance?

There is definitely no shortage of names and Pokémon (◍ ´꒳` ◍) These days, I see that many readers want a supporting role, but the Pokémon that are the contestants in my Rising Stars competition are all fixed. So the supporting role you want will be established for you in advance after the Rising Star Competition (After the end of the first volume). Want to see your favorite Pokémon appear? Want your favorite Pokémon to have a plot? Readers who may want to participate in this book through a secondary role can leave a comment in this format below this post Template Trainer name: Xiaozhi (This is just an example Fan, any similarity is purely coincidental) Pokémon: Pikachu (Try not to fill in the mythical beast) Position: Treat Pokémon as a friend, Like to travel (optional) Of course, if some readers write good character settings, I will also consider adding scenes for them later, but it will not exceed the content of one volume PS:In fact, I personally don't like to use the supporting characters created by the readers, mainly because I am afraid that the writing of the supporting characters will not meet the readers' psychological expectations, and secondly, because the readers also have certain emotions in constructing the supporting characters, which is a test of writing skills.

Mumu Xiao can't do it. The real battle depends on Roaring Tiger, the number one Pokémon in our universe 😍

It's inexplicable at several points. The method of burying the pit is still a bit jerky. The debt collection begins. Zhao Yuntao is also a failure. And the woman next to Ogura I just saw. Why did you write about them? To bury a hole? Or is it to promote the plot? It's not necessary. Totally disgusting. Otherwise it would be darker. Otherwise, it would be a bit more fun. It makes people uncomfortable to watch this. Well.

Your Z skill has no action! There's nothing unattractive about the soul

After reading ten chapters, the content is okay, but the characterization is hard to describe. The man: two debt collectors, the villain, and a doctor surrounded by three coyote dogs. As a doctor in the elven world, there are no elves, or he goes to the wild without the protection of elves. Woman: Mom, the sister who is as beautiful as a fairy. She went to the rescue but was watching the show on the sidelines. Her best friend is the mayor's daughter. She is in a good mood for teaching and is not in a good mood for self-study. She is an irresponsible graduate of a prestigious school. She is a bitch and stupid. She wants to chat up the protagonist and have sex with her, but is tricked by the protagonist for 50 yuan from a super beautiful classmate in the class next door. It's really hard to put into words.

Just reading the Platinum Chapter, I feel that the author failed to do a good job in plot arrangement and development, and the character insertion, role and timing are not very good. Dr. Ogura and Mr. Bai are the big black spots. Dr. Ogura is obviously the first person to solve the rationalization of grass z, but his early role is to leave a shadow clone and disappear. He is not like a doctor at all. He has no curiosity and research spirit. At least giving him time to think about the problem of grass z is better than just flashing like this. It was obvious that the game could be finished here, but it was too sudden to let him out until the Rising Stars Game to finish the game. There was no mention of his appearance beforehand. In addition, Mr. Bai also has the same rationalization issue around grassroots, but it is obvious that the mayor's power is not very credible in front of the doctor. I am very confused about why the mayor should be elected first. Can't we just ask Dr. Ogura to rationalize it from the beginning? Mr. Bai can play a role in the plot of his professional counterpart. Now it feels more forceful and dramatic, and the professionalism is not up to par. In the end, I still have to rely on Dr. Ogura who suddenly collapsed out of nowhere to finish the scene. Or some people say that the protagonist did not want to expose the Z crystal before, but when Mr. Bai appeared and the protagonist confessed, everything was pale and weak. Later, the enemy filmed it for broadcast. Is the protagonist an ostrich? If I can't see it, it's not exposed? Even though it was post-production, I don't know how many times people watched it during the process.

There are hundreds of millions of novices, but the problem is not big 😏 Debt collection at the beginning is too poisonous

When writing this novel, shouldn't there be a picture for every Pokémon? I've almost forgotten how it looks.

Why do you think the cover of your book is so similar to I Have a Breeding House? I can't say it's exactly the same, I can only say it's exactly the same except for the words.

The author is really a Pokémon master and his professional skills are amazing.

Tell me how you feel after seeing it now. The writing style is stiff, the plot connection is not smooth, and there are even logical problems. I really can't understand many points, as if something was forced in for a set result. Z pure crystal is very rare, but no matter how rare it is, if you use it in public, no one will really care about it? They said it was a realistic theme, but I didn't see it at all. Regarding the characterization, I'm also obsessed with it. Many female characters seem to be written just to attract fans, but in fact they are not good at all. I think this is outrageous... I don't feel much about the interaction with Pokémon.

It's amazing. I have collected more than 3,000 pieces.

The progress is appallingly slow. After reading nearly 60 chapters, no new elves have been conquered, and the initial elves have not evolved. I don't know what I'm stressing about.

I can't say it's bad, it's a little bit weird 😓😓😓After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people.

I'm very curious. Is this world a world with Ash or something?

I recommend the grass-based team or the Sunny Team. Almost no one writes about this team now.

Mumuxiao likes his sister, so why does the protagonist stay with him? Although he is very talented, if my favorite Pokémon in the Pokémon world is not me, I might as well not let it go. The most important thing about Pokémon is the relationship between the trainer and the Pokémon. If someone has a deeper relationship with Pokémon than the trainer, then the trainer is a tool. Although he is the younger sister, it is written like this like the protagonist in a daily love story being NTRed.