Elf: It Makes Sense for the New Humanity Hall to Have a Champion, Right?

You are a champion, but others don't know that you are also funny, and you still do this trick of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, how clichéd it is.

The champion is still going to school. How boring is this protagonist? Boredom will not save the world or fight against evil. Let this child play house.

I would like to give you a suggestion. If the author has a main plot, please enter the main plot as soon as possible. Don't just use your daily routine at the beginning. After reading the content for two days, I have no idea what story you want to tell.

I don't want to read this introduction anymore. Is the gym leader deliberately abusing the newcomers? Aren't they using gym elves to guide newcomers? Do you really think that the other gym leaders who were defeated by the newcomers were unable to beat the newcomers? The gym leader written in this profile has no sense of responsibility at all.

The trainer's information is tied to the illustrated book, but the protagonist wears a mask and cloak to participate in the competition in an unconventional way (who would do this to a serious person, it is the first of its kind). This is not revealed. This is the replacement of the champion of a region. How can the protagonist, a person with no power, prevent the leakage of his own information😅😅

This is the worst time I have ever been hacked.

After the appraisal is completed, lowp pretends to be a pig, Conclusion: Out of touch with the times

What does Tucao Gym do? It's about assessing whether others are qualified to get badges, rather than asking you to win 100%. Many books are incomprehensible, and each question is wrong. Do you understand what a gym is? All the challengers were beaten away, not a single badge was issued, and you didn't even understand your own job. Why are you working so hard? If you are really showing off, you are also fighting higher-level opponents. For example, if someone kicks out and his strength is fully developed immediately, how many novices do you need to be beaten by a champion?

Your character conflicts with the plot, and the conflict is still very obvious. It reads very strangely. The protagonist always makes some tone or narration that is not in line with his experience, which is very strange.

How should I put it? The protagonist becomes the champion. An event like this must be watched by everyone. Even if he can't recognize him in the end, his father can't recognize him either? Okay, I'll just pretend you're wearing a mask. Then you raised an elf when you became the champion. How did you go up to play the game? You must register six animals. I think you are strong. One Western Lion and Siren, five Magikarp can do it. I agree, and you can still see it. But, after being the champion for half a year, haven't you saved any money? It's been half a year, and you haven't received money or solicitations from others? There is no money to build a monastery. I really can't stand it when I see it.

One glance at a poisonous weed, and the debut champion returns home to be ruined

Why people must not know the identity of the protagonist 😅 I really don't understand. If you don't want others to disturb you, why don't you just apply for retirement, or inform the senior officials in the alliance not to be disturbed? It's really uncomfortable for the protagonist to be so secretive.

What are they all about? What are they written about? It feels like a bull's head and a horse's mouth, a very weird feeling 😅

The protagonist who is obsessed with money opens a restaurant with a wide reputation, 😲 So who embezzled the money given to the champion?

After being convinced, a newcomer can cause damage to the champion elf with a damaged flame orb, so the villain of this world has not yet ruled the world? With hundreds of damaged orbs and novice elves plus a king trainer, can't you win a mythical beast?

An elf defeated the previous champion⊙▽⊙? If you don't rush to the street, who will rush to the street?

Wearing Pokémon skin, Wang Wen pretends to be a pig and turns into a pig dragon

Brother, I don't want to undermine your self-confidence, but there are many strange things in your book that don't make sense.

All I can say is that it's hard to describe in one sentence.

The beginning is too silent, the protagonist is so bad, and then the father is a waste, and he also thinks the protagonist is a waste...

It is a very boring book. The author is very boring and the readers are also very boring. It is not poisonous at all. After reading it, you will thank the author. Come on in and read it. It is not poisonous at all. It just suppresses the strength of the protagonist. All kinds of clown protagonists jump on their faces. The protagonist says he needs a reaction but actually doesn't dare to fart. It's a super cool book.

The author doesn't know how to write invincible articles. If you pretend to be a pig, you have to eat the tiger. How can you keep pretending to be a pig?

Urban pretense in elf skin

After reading Chapter 10, I think this book is either a mess or a eunuch. I feel that the author has no outline and has written exactly what he thought.

I can't even understand how to write about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. I'm writing about Pokémon and its combat power has collapsed. Why do you think Ash Ketchum and Pikachu lost to Ivy Snake?

The heroine of the princess

I really want to complain about it. I update it every day, but the plot is still so slow. It's a bit boring to follow...

Well, I have read more than 40 chapters, and the writing is tepid and okay. It just has no purpose. I don't know what the protagonist wants to do. He gave up the championship, gave up wealth and fame, and then said it was for freedom. Then why not go to school and play games for 500,000? For research? When doing research, you shouldn't just take risks here and there. You just sit around and don't look at what you're researching. You just play house. Now, there's no main line at all.

Can the author write about daily life? Look better everyday

After reading the beginning, emmmm, I feel like persisting in putting 300,000 words on the shelves and eating three months of subsistence allowance is a victory. Maybe it will get better after more practice.