Elf: Retirement Life of a Champion

Compared with the previous book, the writing style has improved a lot. You can re-examine the plot and strive to write unexpected developments. Come on, Pigeon Terrace! (Some people say it, but I still think it is called TNT Dragon, which is auspicious)

That adjutant is completely unnecessary. Apart from being disgusting, it is of no use to the reader at all. Yo-yo.

How should I put it? The senses are relatively poor. There are always a few supporting characters who look down on me and are mocking It's a bit embarrassing.

Although I have only read the first two episodes, the negative descriptions of the characters are really bad. One of the two colleagues had an accident with the elf and was about to die. The other one came with him, and then kept telling him that there was no hope, wait to die, and don't treat him. There were a lot of negative ones, and maybe the elf who was about to die was his boss, awesome