Pokémon: Have You Played Pokémon Today?

Pokémon

Do you really like Sakaki? Did you just ignore what Team Rocket did? Even if Musashi Kojiro and the others were to be convicted, they would be locked up for decades. They were an orthodox criminal organization. The evil man's flash is infinitely magnified? Falling in love with the boss drug dealer?

Isn't there no pure adventure writing now? Either they are anchors, they are farmers, or they are craftsmen, and here comes the game producers.

Qishu, who has the most likes, has not yet entered the arena, but his wife, who has the lowest number of likes, has already finished her meal

Bamboo Orchid

The writing is quite good, but the relationship between the protagonist and Sister Baicai at the beginning feels a bit too deliberate, and it's only the second time they meet, and it seems a bit ambiguous, a bit too fast.

How can you sleep at your age? You do ten updates a day🙂

Why do so many Pokémon fan novels like to write fusion worlds, blending reality and Pokémon 😅 or adapting worlds such as Dark Flow?

Have you ever been a Beast Boy? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Let me first talk about the points that I cannot accept. First of all, abnormal states can be superimposed: I actually think this point must be handled well, otherwise my opening with double poison nails + electromagnetic wave + will-o'-wisp would be very ex, and double blood burning + slowing down + physical attack must be handled well. Secondly, I really like to defend the poison. I can only say that I don't want to describe too much about the tactics that novices can talk about now. After all, it's not 18 years. I have been eating this for 8 years. It will make me vomit! Finally, the multi-line narrative of the game, reality, dreams, and past lives is indeed out of rhythm. It is fun to watch it in one go, but it will be uncomfortable to follow it further. (But there is not much to say after the dream line) The next point is what I recommend. 1. The relationship between the harem and Pokémon is fairly well-characterized and reasonable, with both ups and downs, but I hope Lillie and Blue can have a good ending in the future. 2. Although there are oriental elements added, it is only in the early stage. How should I put it, there is no overshadowing, and the map will be pushed to push the main storyline normally. I hope that the descriptions can be distributed reasonably later. At least it is the starting point for Gengar and Rocket Logistics. 3. Although the male protagonist is a scumbag, he understands and takes responsibility for his actions and does not play with emotions (Xiao Lan?). 4. Invincible flow is very exciting, very exciting, but it is difficult to reasonably allocate the cool points and grasp the rhythm of the plot. Moreover, the basic plot is to serve the protagonist, and less is allocated to marginalized characters. At least you know what your friends like to watch.

Lusamine

It feels like the current generation of Pokémon writers are either making games or being farmers, or running live broadcasts

I asked you to make a game called Pokemon. There were a lot of attribute errors in that book, and I didn't even finish reading the illustrated book.

Pokémon

This author was crazy about money. He started charging money as soon as he put it on the shelves and gave up.

…It's hard to describe in one word.

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Rt, I feel that I am greatly influenced by Teacher Lu

I finally saw a fanfic that made the mythical beasts look like mythical beasts instead of selling cute pets. Very beautifully written! Hope it doesn't collapse later! Come on, author! Looking forward to Lusamine's appearance🤤

As the title states, it is very important to follow up on new books! Just turn to the last page of the current chapter and the number of readers will be displayed. Thank you very much. If you have any comments, you can write them here and everyone will read them.

The storyline of Lord Dawu is over, but it's a pity that I didn't use Dawu's Noble Phantasm, Diamond Princess Dianxi.

It's both a treasure and a piece of cake. The author's speaking style. Are you a woman?

By the way, this book has Chihong and they don't have Mitsuki and Xiaozhao?

I saw the shadow of Teacher Lu

Pokémon Seedling is a very good game. In terms of making games, it can be regarded as a collection of the best of all the treasures with the same theme. It is very interesting to watch, and the wild game battles are also very novel. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. It's not really a shortcoming. It's that the author wrote a lot of "plot tumors", which refers to plot elements that were originally only minor parts. As the plot progresses, they continue to occupy resources, oppress the main line, and make the entire work lose rhythm and focus. For example, the original Donghuang area, the real-life battle between the protagonists, the detailed price of "poison pearls worth 3 million," and premature emotional lines. The reason why they are called tumors is because these plots have little to do with the main line, but they can easily cause chain reactions in long-term updates and cause problems. For example, the Donghuang area, the capital, and other hints are fictitious. Few readers will praise it if it is well written. However, if it is written illogically, readers will definitely find it and become bored, turning it into a "malignant tumor" and affecting the reading experience. For example, if the protagonist has unnecessary battles in real life, it is best to briefly mention them because they are not the main content. The logic is the same as above. For example, there is no need to use detailed monetary values ​​to describe "3 million worth of poison beads". This is a mistake that many authors easily make, unless the author's writing skills are strong enough to support him in writing a detailed and reasonable financial system. It is often described with a fuzzy economic writing method such as a small amount of money, expensive and rare, enough for a full meal, a huge sum of money, etc. It is better to leave the rest to the reader's imagination. The emotional line that appears too early, well, actually there is no problem with this, but the author's writing is a bit stiff, and appearing so early affects the plot coherence of the protagonist's game part. To sum up, the current plot ratio is 70% related to the protagonist's game play, 10% important plot of the protagonist's first elf, and 20% miscellaneous content. It is best to adjust and allocate the main plot to the protagonist's game-related and the protagonist's own elf. After all, it is a long serialized update novel. If every Ten updates and five updates per day, then the 20% "plot tumors" are not considered a shortcoming. If the book can only be updated twice or three times after payment, then the 20% "plot tumors" will greatly affect the reader's reading experience. Even as the plot expands and worsens, there is a possibility that the author's writing ideas will deviate. It will also take effort to patch this early setting and slow down the update speed. Of course, these are my personal opinions. If you don't like or agree, just treat me as nonsense. I hope the more I write, the better it will be and it will be high-quality as soon as possible.

I want to ask, what is the storyline of Xiaolan's heroine? I really like this character 😊. I just read this book. Is it true that there is Xiaolan in the heroine column?

Will the Light Palace and Cattleya be taken away?

It's really great. It's a good idea to recall the past in the game. Good luck, author.

I just read the first few dozen chapters, and I feel like I want to watch the story of the Red Team more than the protagonist.

I saw the chapter about communicating with Banmu in this world. I'm a little confused. If the divine beasts in this world don't exist, why can the core be summoned?