Is This the World of Pai Lao? Ada Thief!

Although the time interval is long, I am here to write a long review again; of course, the purpose of writing a long review is not only to give feedback to the author, but also to share some of my own feelings with other readers who are reading or who want to read the comment area first.       ，？ Answer: As of the end of "Memory of the King" in early 2023; this novel is still highly recommended in the Yu-Gi-Oh novel section. And according to the results of my long-term sneaking into the group and eavesdropping, there is still a long time before it is finished, so you can safely collect it and look forward to future plot developments. Next, let's enter the personal experience section, which will be conducted in a way that does not involve spoilers as much as possible: In terms of plot writing, the author has researched many details of the original work and consulted a large amount of relevant information. "Memory of the King" serves as the "final exam" for every novel written to the final chapter of Yu-Gi-Oh! DM. Whether the author depicts the original plot from the perspective of Yami Yugi or the personal plot depicted from Hayato's perspective, it can be said that he is in the plot It is reasonable in terms of rationality, and because there is a large amount of research materials (including Yu-Gi-Oh animation, comics, reality, etc.) As a basis, I personally feel very comfortable reading it, especially since the original work is conducted in the form of a running team, and the author can control it to the extent that it is OK for the card guys and the original party, and even readers who are not involved in Yu-Gi-Oh. The most powerful thing about the author is that he depicts the growth of other characters except the protagonist, especially for almost every character who appears, he can write about it with a chicness that will be discussed later: including the villain will not only get the punishment he deserves, but he will also repent due to the appearance of the protagonist and gain the power that he once longed for after his soul was purified. Although the righteous are usually caught by the protagonist However, under the influence of the protagonist, you can also get real personality and spiritual growth, thereby ushering in a new trend of deck evolution; this group-like linear growth route is very comfortable to watch, and I can't help but cheer for these characters who, although they are missing from everyone in the original work, have left their own footprints in this novel and complemented the regrets, and thank the author. (So when characters such as Insect Feather Moth and Super Aluminum Field can open a gym for the protagonist to lead his apprentices to level up, I am looking forward to it)  Of course, some shortcomings that are not shortcomings are also mentioned here, that is, the author's over-enthusiastic attitude towards making jokes makes this Yu-Gi-Oh novel full of various neta and tribute colors, including but not limited to knights, Gundam, Jojo, hot memes, etc. It can be said that for Duochu, every chapter is full of surprises: not only will there be timely jokes that make people smile, but also the vivid monster battles where the author is very good at describing "Yu-Gi-Oh"-style battle scenes, and you can experience the charm of monster battles.                                                                                                                                                                                                         Unfortunately, perhaps the author did not find the right tone in the "Memory of the King" chapter. The protagonist Hayato, who plays a lot of jokes in this chapter, is not as humorous and interesting as in the previous plot. Instead, like the Chimera Fusionmon with different card names, he has lost his character personality due to the mixture, and seems to have become a character filled with the author's enthusiasm for making jokes. A victim of love, Hayato can be like DIO, he can be like Raji, he can be like Tanlito, etc., But he cannot become them. The character is outstanding because he has been fully portrayed in their works, but the author's simple plotting has buried the shaping of the protagonist as if it were a joke; if I were asked to choose who is the best person? I would choose Malick, because the author's portrayal of Malick allowed him to truly turn the memes into his own personality, which is pleasant and funny, but without losing the style of the original work. I will read Malick's plot carefully several times, which is very interesting. But who is Hayato in the "Memory of the King" chapter? But I only remember Tan Li Dou, I only remember Ramses II, and I only remember Dio. Fortunately, the author is very good at writing daily life. After breaking away from the general background of "Memory of the King", he re-wrote several aspects of Hayato's personality. I hope the author can not forget his original intention and continue to make progress. (Please write to z4, please QAQ)

The writing is very good, and now I can't help but want to leave a comment to support the author and share some thoughts. As a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic that is dragged down by its name (meaning that there is no "Yu-Gi-Oh" in the title of the work, only a miscellaneous field like "Ada Thief"), its quality can be said to be completely OK in the entire Yu-Gi-Oh fan circle, especially after the hasty ending of Duel City Next Door. Although many other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfics have appeared, there are currently very few that maintain both a high word count and quality online, and this book can be regarded as one of the outstanding works. Here we start with the three advantages that attract me: First, the duel itself. The author is absolutely first-class in the duel plot, especially in the description of the duel. It is one of the irreplaceable highlights. Whether it is the appearance of monsters, the use of effects, the command of the duel, the dark game gameplay, the interaction between the duelists, etc., It all has a "Yu-Gi-Oh Feeling" - that is, every duel is real, not just a simple "playing cards". After all, playing cards outside of the plot in animation is disgusting to the audience (for example, Serena's kick in the ARC-V Parasite episode made me laugh, and I was so worried that I didn't kick Yuya Yushengjuku's school uniform). If you put it in a novel, it means that the author is overly careful about the number of words. I also want to give the author a thumbs up, and hope that he can write more plots that combine meaning, duel, and plot like the original work. (Examples: DM+Dark Side of Dimension's Resurrection of the Dead, GX's Repayment Duel, 5DS's High and Low, Z4's Downgrade Magic, etc. The A5 and V6 I-images do not have a special balance between the three, but there are many remarkable ones, such as the battle between Hayabusa and Su Liang, Ignis (Fire Spirit Sky Star) against the Code Talker, etc.) Second, the personality of the character. The protagonist Hayato Kobayashi, as one of the time travellers, Hayato's duel shaping is also classic and has the characteristics of a real card player: focusing on checking cards, emphasizing resources, not sticking to the exchange between blood volume and monsters (meaning to dedicate oneself to justice and victory), and under Hayato's influence, characters such as Yugi, Kaiba, Jonouchi and others have also grown accordingly; What makes me happy here is that the author has faced up to this change in the plot: for example, Kaiba can temporarily sacrifice the blue-eyed white dragon for a moment of forbearance, and the Pharaoh can also say such beautiful words that the cemetery is not the resting place of monsters, instead of simply printing a card. It counts as growth; conversely speaking, Hayato also learned from these characters to respect cards, revere the power of cards, and be able to get along happily with duel monsters on weekdays. Therefore, under this mutual positive plot influence, Hayato can naturally integrate into the plot. (Will the disturbing trio be kicked out by the Dragon Maid in the future?) I really like that after Hayato wins the Yu-Gi-Oh King, the author will describe the plot of children and low-level duelists imitating Hayato's dueling style. Even if it is just a short paragraph, it makes me feel that the author will control the details of the world view. I look forward to the author writing more good chapters that belong to his own Yu-Gi-Oh World world. Third, the Inka God draws. Inka and Divine Draw are of course part of Yu-Gi-Oh (but Kuzu is definitely not). After being deduced from the original work of Yu-Gi-Oh and supplemented by reasonable secondary settings accepted by everyone, Divine Draw itself is an extension of the duelist's power. "Real duelists can even decide how to draw cards" "The use of real cards as a joke is a very normal sentence in the world of Yu-Gi-Oh. After all, if you get a deck of cards and can use random magic draws without cultivating the "card bond", then apart from catering to the readers, I don't think it will be of any help to the plot; The Ink Card, that is, the birth of the ace, is a symbol of the duelist's awareness, bond, and will; the handling of the Ink Card plot is also a watershed that distinguishes Yu-Gi-Oh fans. In other words, many authors "have no respect for cards." I don't care how powerful a card you use, but I care very much about the rationality of your use of this card: for example, it is definitely necessary to strengthen the supporting characters, but it must be worthy of the supporting characters' growth and experience (the red dad directly persuades them to quit in the early stage); the protagonist's replacement of the deck is also necessary, but it also requires the protagonist to be able to come up with a reason to use this deck skillfully. At least on these two points, the author has done a good job, especially in the story of the birth of Draco. Although the daily writing in the beginning is still poor, in the story of the battle with Samejima, a more three-dimensional image of the electron flow teacher is created, and the consciousness shown when the protagonist inherits Ryuuki Takumi, so it is natural to get Ryuuki Takumi, which is very consistent with the world view of Yu-Gi-Oh. Even in the animation, it is an excellent plot. Since there are advantages, there must be disadvantages. Having mentioned so many advantages above, I also want to mention that you, the author, also like to play jokes too much. To advance the plot and daily activities, you rely on a large number of jokes to fill the plot, which makes me confused. Especially in the boss battle, the jokes one after another cannot reasonably advance, but make me feel that it is somewhat lowering the quality of the plot. I am not opposed to jokes. From the perspective of the whole book, jokes increase the distance between the reader and the author; moderate and appropriate jokes can even increase the activity of the plot. Appropriate jokes when interacting with the characters can enrich the character image: For example, Hayato himself, the duel style dedicated to the cause of justice has the calmness of an OCG player and the characteristics of a duel king. It can be said that it is very appropriate in the plot. I commend Malick by name, I quite like the setting of turning into a fun person after being cleansed) In short, I hope that the author can control the intensity of jokes in the future while writing more and better plots, cheers for the author!

Changes in Pai Lao

The book is quite good, and it is a good source of food for players. The main problem is that the main deck is not conspicuous, and it has not caught the public's preferences (dog head). When reading this book, I recommend you not to pursue the details. The details are not very good, but other aspects are good. If the results are not good, it is probably because you have chosen the wrong website. The fan environment here does not fit in well (dog head)

Hahahahaha burping made me laugh so hard

The oral habit of boy is too dissuasive. I seem to have clicked in three or four times, but I was dismissed after reading the same place. After all, Becas is at that age. People of the same age will only get summoned fists when called like this. They will show attack gestures and direct attacks. Calling people boy is actually very insulting. I can only say that everyone understands it. If your English is not good, just pretend that I didn't say it.

I finally understand why there are 1,000 chapters. It doesn't matter if the opponent is strong and fights for more than 10 chapters, but an unknown bastard with all kinds of messy original characters and protagonists can't be killed instantly? You have to play cards slowly. Once you are convinced, you will get 6 or 7 chapters in one play. Is it okay to kill instantly? Once you are famous, play slowly.

A brick was thrown into the toilet, hitting Tokushu, Jo, Pai Lao, Jiao Lao and the trainer. How many people were hit?

If the protagonist's character is La Er, then isn't Yami Yugi the protagonist's grandfather?

To be honest, few people know about Yu-Gi-Oh now. When Takahashi died, there were still many people playing One Piece.

The beginning is admittedly a bit long-winded. Is it so slow to respond when writing a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic? "I Play Cards in Duel City" looks much smoother than yours. Most of the people who can read this novel are Yu-Gi-Oh fans. It's not necessary purely for the word count.

The author, I would like to ask in advance whether there is a female protagonist in this Yu-Gi-Oh world. When playing cards, just play cards well and don't care about the love between children. If there is a female protagonist, I will quit early. Thanks!

One thing to say, the initial card pack from ocg had a lot of banned cards. Even the 4th Elemental Waste was first released by 403 together with Ku Juji. It depends on what kind of situation the author is in. If the DM's standard point is to use a lot of mortal bones and a magic trap to counter-attack.

The author's writing is really good and I am rewarded with the Extreme Fox World

Don't get tired of the heroes in the deck. Dragon Maid, Dragon Splendor, Cyber ​​Dragon, Witch Technique, and Shadowdoll can all be used.

The author's treatment of the Dark Archmage is really not very good, and a lot of people said that if these corpses are not destroyed, the duel environment will be bad, and they also said that Muto Yuxi's God will immediately gather five corpses when he is either Tianhu or about to lose. What a bunch of cuties... Didn't the details of Muto Yugi's duel in this fanfic be written by the author? Can the Dark Master break the fourth wall and capture the author's handwriting? Am I the only one who thought that these cards belong to Muto Sugoroku and just return them to him? The ace in Muto's game is the Dark Magician, not the Dark Archmage. Pagasus's handling of Feather Moth was too abnormal. As the organizer of the competition, he didn't handle this kind of off-the-table move. Then everyone else was focused on other things than the competition! If you can't win at cards, you can hit someone. If you can't steal cards, you can steal stars and grab gloves🙄

Personally, I think the most discouraging thing about this book is starting from Duel Kingdom. In the early stage, I really didn't want to watch it, so I jumped directly to Duel City and started watching.

I have read this book several times. Every time I think of the plot that is just out of my head, I can't stand it. For example, in Chapter 13, what I want to say is that Kaiba took over the Kaiba Group for more than 1 billion. Author, I admire you for your courage to write a book after reading some marketing accounts. The original plot is about 10-year-old Kaiba being given away by Gozaburo. 1 Billion yen, and was ordered to earn 100 times a year, which is 100 billion yen. One year later, with 1 billion as the principal, Kaiba successfully earned the funds to acquire Kaiba Group. Looking at Gozaburo's previous performance, 100 billion yen was nothing in the total assets, because even if Kaiba made 100 billion yen, he would not be able to compete with him. I asked my classmates studying economics that reserve funds for large multinational companies generally do not exceed 5%, and leading arms dealers like Kaiba Group may not even account for 1%. In order to ensure that normal company operations are not affected, I calculated that Gosaburo took a risk and gave Kaiba 5% of the 1%, allowing him to earn enough money for assessment. Then, before Kaiba Group was acquired by Kaiba, this set The assets of the group are at least hundreds of billions of dollars, and the original book mentioned that in the next few years, Kaiba Group will reach a higher level under the leadership of Kaiba. So based on the fact that Kaiba can earn 1 billion yen (10 million U. S. Dollars) a year when he is about 10 years old (taking into account acquisitions, Kaiba's own assets must be several times that of Kaiba Group), how much can he earn when the plot begins four or five years later? You want to scare the president with 1.5 Billion yen for a blue-eyed white dragon? Is it possible? 150 Billion US dollars (currently close to the level of the world's richest man in the real world) must be in cash, which is about the same

Let's talk about the reason for abandoning the pit. It's really ugly to disturb the three brothers. As a Yu-Gi-Oh player, your cards may not be powerful, but they must be cool.

At first I saw that I was going to use Dragon Maid, so I opened it excitedly. However, the main character entered the game at such an early stage, and the card pile he used was not interesting. It was really unbearable. It makes sense for many books to start from Duel City.

I have read more than 60 chapters. The author is a cloud player who has never played poker. He has all kinds of scumbag behavior and refuses to listen when others point it out. The card games and plot are also bad. If you mind, don't read this book.

Anchor, anchor, please tell me back. I watched it when I was in junior high school and now I'm almost in college. Where do you want to write anchor? It's too long. I don't even have the courage to finish reading. 😨 Also, how can the anchor write a book while playing cards? I'm exhausted after playing a game, but the anchor can still write a book😨

This book actually reached nearly 2,000 yuan. I admire the author.

In the early stage, I didn't respect dueling at all, and I could already sit at the same table with A5. The protagonist has modern consciousness in the early stage and plays cards normally, which is understandable. However, in the card duel etiquette, he regrets when he goes back on his word. The murderer who broke into the protagonist's house earlier was the one who still screamed when he lost in the card game.

It's a long card novel Is it good to read The protagonist's ace is that one This is the first time I've seen a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic with so many words With so many words, shouldn't it be a passer-by game that needs to be described in detail The passer-by also needs the protagonist to make a comeback The author is awesome The writing is very complete and the plot needs to be written in V6 to have so many words

I saw a comment before, would a time traveler win in a cartoon fight with a teardrop?

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but it doesn't feel right to have a trump card that's a bit too much. It's even a bit unfavorable. Even the effect of Armed Dragon Lightning is a hundred million. If you use this, it's not good.

Is Kaiba's decision-making only about stereotypes? Do you really only know how to start with fusion?

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In Chapter 1, Tiandao said in the finale of Jiadou: "Those who walk the same path can only be companions; those who walk different paths but can walk together are friends."