Elf Character Master

Not a bad elf fanfic. The author's description of the emotions of the elves, the protagonist, and the supporting characters is indeed good, but the first part is too sensational. Let me talk about my personal thoughts. The strength gap between the protagonist team is too big, especially the Salted Fish King defeated the Quasi-Tianwang, but there are still three children in the team. Also, the author is really bad at writing battles. The national competition ended hastily, and the world competition also ended hastily with almost no fighting. Currently, Salty Fish King is pushed all the way, and Menus has a few scenes in the gym. The rest of the little Baobao are reduced to mascots. In addition, the protagonist is reduced to a pendant, and it feels like the duel is no different with or without him. The author writes very well about life and emotions, but it is a pity that he encounters some fighting or training. . .

I have been following this book since its inception, and I will tell you my feelings after reading it for so long. First of all, the protagonist's champion comes out of nowhere. Is it because the author is not good at describing battles? I haven't mentioned the group battle. Meteor Forest has become the back garden of Slow King. With the right time, place and people, you can basically win the championship without losing a fight. There are not many battle conflicts. Personally, I think this is a big**. The writing is great Then the individual battle became very confusing. First, there was a flood out of nowhere. Then the protagonist went to support and fished for several chapters. At that time, I felt that most of the enthusiasm had been worn away. Then after finishing fishing, it was finally time to start fighting. Introducing the egg as the championship prize again? ? ? At that time, he looked like a black man with a question mark face Is it necessary to introduce it at this time? After enduring it and chasing after it, it was finally the long-awaited personal battle! It depends on the salted fish king, salted fish, one thrust penetrates six! Let's see King Dude show his cuteness! Watch the Little Tornado Charge Tornado! It depends on Little Dream Demon... Little Dream Demon is so good, just press the calculator to zero in the auditorium. These are all pretense that have been laid out in advance and are expected to be put here to attract everyone's attention But! Yes! All of these! None! ! ! ! ! ! The individual competition started. The Salted Fish King appeared and dressed six girls, and the girl cried. That's it. The description was extremely concise and perfunctory, without any strong character. Then there was Lao Wan, who had a chance to fight demons. Lao Wan used the ghost type at the beginning to scare the girls on the field into tears. The little dream monster was envious, and then the Salted Fish King came on the stage, and the Salted Fish started, and he was dead with one shot. What is there to say? Then you become the champion?                                                                   Black people are confused and asking questions? ? ? ? The actual number of chapters in the individual competition is only two, and the description of the battle does not exceed ten sentences Wang Defa? ? ? Is this the individual competition I've been waiting for so long? ?

Master of Character 🤭 started with a conservative Magikarp, and then nothing happened. The so-called Master of Character~

I just want to know what the significance of the protagonist of this book is. Although I cannot deny that it is a very good pm novel, but your poisonous point is too weird. This dream demon conquers the elves and is a trainer mega. Then you should not write the protagonist. It would be better to just turn the dream demon into a trainer. When I read it later, I found that the protagonist is not as strong as the dream demon. Also, I am very curious, why is there no female protagonist, but the elves are in pairs?

Magikarp can't learn 100,000 volts! Bro!

This book looks pretty good, but there are always some places that feel a little awkward. I feel that the author's writing skills are still a bit lacking. If this book was an anime, it might have a more visual feel, but the scene switching is a little weird It always gives people a strange awkward feeling ? ? ?ヽ（＿；)ノ

This book feels like an alien urban waste novel set in the world of Pokemon. I personally feel that it feels a bit inconsistent. After all, Pokemon are relatively innocent in my eyes. Adding a pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot... Okay ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ Anyway, I feel a little weird when I read it.

In fact, when I was reading this book in the early stages, I felt like I was being discouraged, but when I saw the protagonist teaching Magikarp how to make noise, I chose to continue reading. I really fell in love with the author's description of King Slow at the end. Really well written.

Wai Bi Wai Bi, Jiang Jiang appears!

It's been a long time since I've written a book review. This is one of the best elf novels I've seen in the past few years. When I was young and thin, I recalled the first time I watched Pokemon that traveled the wrong way, and the days when I giggled alone late at night. This once again gave me a sense of intimacy with this work that I hadn't seen in many years. In today's society, behind the scenes of your youthful appearance, your tired heart may feel a little comforted after reading this novel.

I'm new here. Has the Salted Fish King evolved in the later stages?

Here are Jiangjiang's [2020] footprints~

The student party can only subscribe and reward 500 to express support.

The progress is very slow, only 10% of the book reaches the evolution of Magikarp, and there is no clear level division, which makes the battle against monsters feel like a joke. If you like the daily series, you can read it.

It's been a bit rough during this period, there are only a few chapters about battles, it's almost all about daily life... You can have some in daily life, but brother, you should also write about battles! There are more than two hundred chapters of battles. I don't know if there are ten chapters in total...

I almost died laughing, hahahahaha, hahahahahahaha, it's so funny

[I celebrate the New Year with the elf] "Welcome home Gardevoir," I said, looking at the big bag of New Year's goods in Larulas' hand, "Thank you so much. I have to ask you to help me buy New Year's goods for the New Year." "It's okay, Master just needs to prepare delicious food. When will dinner be served? I'm so hungry."

Really, I only had a few pictures after raising them for half a month.

Xiao Xiaoyu has finally evolved, and 2 monthly tickets plus rewards are being given as promised. I hope it will continue! 😊

🤓 Leave a footprint of 2 million words

The elves and I celebrate the New Year Yang Yu said: "Today is New Year's Day. How about we send honorifics to all the elders!" The elves all agreed. When Xianxian came to the water gym, instructor Xiaobai said: "Ho ho ho ho ho Kong Kong ho (Instructor Xiaobai hopes you will be more satisfied with your life next year)." The little dream demon came to the ghost tower to confront Geng Gui Laohei. Said: "I hope you will be emaciated in the coming year. You can pass through my computer screen. Don't forget to deduct coins as a New Year gift for me." Silently teleported back to the Meteor Forest and said to Lao Hu: "Master, I wish you more happiness in the new year." To Xiao Kong Zhun: "Don't be lazy in the coming year, train diligently and become an excellent elf." The Mini Dragon returned to the Deep Sea Dragon Palace to congratulate his brothers and sisters. Said to his father, "Don't give up, you will always find your mother. You have to work harder next year, and I will become better than you. Go and find your mother yourself." Yang Yu himself, Xiao Yuyu, Bobik, Xiao Baobao and Yang Xiaoyu went home together, prepared a lot of dishes, and waited for their return. Everyone is back and the dinner officially begins. Eating Chinese food, the taste of home began to spread, coupled with a few of the specialty dishes made by Daidai. This New Year's Day you and I are no longer alone. I can only write like this, if there are any mistakes, please point them out in the comment area

Congratulations on the completion. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I have recently left the world of novels and faced real life. In reality, I feel really tired from working hard all the time. It is novels like yours that give me a place to escape and rest when all kinds of unsatisfactory situations in reality are not satisfactory. I don't know much about novels, but your novels make me feel very warm. Thank you for accompanying me during this time.

The salted fish king is the best in the world (ಡωಡ)

At the beginning, emmm, there are so many elf fanfics, about attributes, races, plots... What else is there that you haven't written yet? By the way (≧㉨≦) I can write characters. Matching a golden finger with the protagonist can change the character of the elf, making it easier to cultivate or play tricks! Then, wow, it was so cool to write ^_^♪Wait a minute! I wrote it like this, but it seems that there is no improvement in the character (ﾟoﾟ;, so far there are only two elves, what should I do? ╯╰Then there is no other way, the only way is to add elves, increase the number, and then the protagonist has a good personalityヾ^_^♪, wow, I'm so smart, um, let's bring a golden finger that can learn skills, hahaha Now, emmm, not many people seem to notice it, so just ignore this problem, delay the evolution for a while, and then burst out, that is, you can cut a wave of leeks, collect votes and rewards, and also divert your attention, so as to save the total attention on the character (¯ㅂ¯)

In view of the author's procrastination in updating, long-term irregular chapters, and constant charades with readers. In order to protect the personal safety and mental health of the majority of women, maintain the social security environment, control the number of ferocious invasive creatures such as Gyarados, and deal with the staff shortages and bad social impact caused by the collective go-off line strike of the stupid chefs to only serve Yang. After consultation, we have decided to suspend the financing of Dadai and Xianxian funds and the publication of this book, which is completely inconsistent with the content and title. We will wait for the author to make serious corrections, consciously abide by the four-update code of no late updates, no delayed updates, no late updates, and no late updates, and carefully practice the five-plus ideas of adding refinement, adding updates, adding benefits, adding women's clothing, and adding py.

PM like-minded people. Suddenly I wanted to make a weak comment. . . Raising elves requires corresponding resources. For the main team's consideration, in terms of offensiveness and auxiliary performance, a grass type is needed to fill the field at this time. After all, the grass type is easy to maintain and its strength is not bad. Such as Grass Turtle or Mo Mushroom (this is my favorite grass type). The late-stage Turtle can provide tree fruits and its body is also quite powerful. The poisonous mushroom evolved from the mushroom is also quite powerful 😌😌

To put it another way, the Lord's elves seem to be in a daze at the beginning. Is it possible that the protagonist's elves are like this? Look at Magikarp, his eyes are dull and dull. Slowpoke is inherently stupid. What about the stupid fish? I'm also dumbfounded... It's really hard to say what the protagonist will conquer next, especially in terms of attributes. The ground type has Ubo, Sand Hippo, etc., The general type has Big Tongue, Variety Monster, Kirby Beast, etc., And the grass type has Mouth Flower, Pitcher Plant, etc.,,, It seems like there are too many.

I just got home from the car in the evening. That's it for today's update. Happy Mid-Autumn Festival to all the trainers! Salted Fish King: Ho ho ho! Dudu: Yalu! Xiao Xiaoyu: Huji! Lalulas: Lalu! Ghost... Pop! Cammy Turtle: Cammy! Yongjira: Yong—— Sea Spiny Dragon: Huga! And... Gua Gua Gua? Up to duck! Stinging Jellyfish Top Hat: Gulu! Gao Mao's second elf... 403 Everyone, Yang Yu, Wenren Fang Chen, Hong Kun, Gao Mao, and Yang Xiaoyu. I wish all the trainers a happy Mid-Autumn Festival and a happy family! That's it, croak!

Please forgive me, I already finished it a week ago, but I was too lazy to post it, so I have been putting it off until now. . . . . I haven't done the latter ones yet, mainly for the early stage teams. Seeing how hard I have worked, I can't give you too much 😁😁😁

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