Tales of a Tokyo Onmyoji

After reading dozens of chapters of psychological description, hey, is this a novel? This is the author's own pleasure. . .

This book is reboot, reboot, reboot! Important things have been mentioned three times, the work has been written about it, single chapters have been published, and the author's words have also been written. This book is a reboot! Don't ask why many things are the same as the previous one, because it's originally a revised version. You can always see it if I post it here again, right?

Too much about the Riddler actually reduces the reading sense of the novel. Just like the chapter about Shuten, the protagonist is basically in a passive state throughout the whole process. Others are talking about the Riddler. Although the final treatment makes Shuten die, it is difficult for the reader to feel happy. After watching the whole process, the reader will only have doubts about what I read.

The author has prepared many chapters for the transformation of the protagonist, but I have to say that the preparation is not good, it is a bit blunt, and the content of self-pleasure is higher than the plot. It's not that the author can't express some things, but these things cannot transcend the plot. You are writing a novel, not directly expressing emotions! ! ! This is a novel, and your plot is the most important thing. From the part about removing spirits to Mio persuading the protagonist to give up his practice, it is obviously more reasonable for an elder and more experienced Onmyoji to teach the protagonist. The character of Mio has not been as mature as the protagonist in the plot so far. She is too self-centered. Why can you point fingers at others? Don't say anything without saying it directly. Your actions speak for themselves. Can such a person who thinks he is superior but actually has no matching abilities really make people transform? Moreover, within a few missions and a dozen chapters, the protagonist's fundamental change in mentality was too rapid. If the protagonist has had similar ideas before, he should make more advances. The existing preparation is completely insufficient.

The author writes very carefully, maybe because I am not suitable for this kind of "riddler" and all kinds of specious writing methods. I seemed to be struggling, and I had less and less desire to continue reading. But I still hope the author will work hard.

Author, are you describing a subjective and idealistic worldview? I think the behavior of the characters in this book is not a logical evolution, but more like the behavior of ancient Tantric followers, and what they do seems to be ritual imitation. Your story shows your belief in morality and your relative view of the world, so I can't figure it out. Author, you have to wait until the story is finished to come up with a puzzle chapter to explain it properly.

Come on, but at the same time, I hope that the author will not be too influenced by the readers. The author is a kind of job that needs to be able to endure loneliness. Some authors are late bloomers, except of course if they have no money now, they will starve to death.

How can I put it this way? It makes me feel so awkward.

Come on, big brother who writes code!

The author can really persevere