An Onmyoji’s Life, Starting in Tokyo

I posted about my work. In order to prevent some people from skipping it and being poisoned by this book, I will save everyone's time myself. The following are the poisonous points summarized by the boss in the comment area of ​​this book: 1 The female protagonist is so strong that she can actually defeat monsters without relying on the male protagonist and not fall over! 2 The system is useless, it cannot send tasks or click, and it may even become invisible! 3 The male protagonist is too weak. He will not become stronger except for learning new skills. The most important thing is that he will not make a ding-dong sound when he upgrades! 4 The character design is plagiarized (the heroine comes from a big family, and she brings someone who may be a bodyguard) 5 I have written more than 100,000 words, and the plot is still at the beginning! After all, Qidian's online articles only have a maximum of 600,000 words, and they will definitely collapse later! If you don't finish the book within one million words, you will be the successor of the mermaid! The word count is messed up! 6 The male protagonist is trash. According to the current plot development, corresponding to reality, he is just a mediocre person who can easily go to Qingbei after graduating from high school. 7 The male protagonist's mental age is not a direct sum of his previous life's age and his present life! 8 The male protagonist does not have paranoia about being persecuted, and does not feel that he will die at any time! How dare you salt fish! 9 To be determined, I will come back to make up for it when the comment section summarizes it. In conclusion, it is too poisonous and this book cannot be helped at all.

I patiently and calmly explained several "irrationalities" that appeared in the comment area, and I will patiently explain them to you once, and only this time. If you still have the attitude of "I don't listen, I don't listen, and I say there is a problem with your setting, you have a problem", or "Other books are not set up like this, it's just you, so you have a problem", delete the post and ban you permanently, there is nothing to say. (Spoiler Alert) First of all, there is the issue of the protagonist's level and the level of his parents. When his father died, he was 29 years old, grade B, close to A. My mother is in her early 40s now, C. The protagonist is 15 or less than 16 years old at the beginning, E. I have already explained before which academic qualifications and diplomas each level corresponds to, so I won't go into details here. It's probably from compulsory education to doctorate and field authority, you can correspond by yourself. So, when his father died, he was 29 years old. In reality, he was like a doctoral student in Qingbei who was about to complete his thesis. Putting aside the mediocre theory of Qingbei in the comment area, from classic to unique, to be fair, compared to the top executives, he was not particularly talented, but he was definitely first-rate. However, this has nothing to do with the fact that the protagonist is 15 years old and rated E. Even if he is the son of a genius like Einstein, he has to be a high school student at the age of 15, so there is no problem. As for whether practice is getting faster or slower, I think this thing is what I have the final say. I set it up so that practitioners aged 15 to 30 will experience a knowledge explosion similar to that in the real world. During this period, you have the strongest learning ability and the strongest practice ability, so your magic power will undergo an adolescent-style explosive growth like your physical fitness. Your talent and understanding will all develop during this period. After this golden period, people who are not talented enough will start to get stuck. For example, if you were in your twenties, you were a C, and you are still a C now. Don't get stuck. This setting can be found everywhere. Only those who have reached the highest level during this period, began to understand their own way of cultivation, and walked on the road from A to S, can get rid of the limitations of ordinary physical talents and pursue a higher realm. To sum up, the protagonist has no problem with E now. Second, why do people seek help from Onmyoji and conceal the existence of ghosts? I have explained in the chapter that the root of most ghosts is human fear. If it is made public, it will definitely cause large-scale fear. If it causes fear, it will have a chain reaction and bring the world back to the environment of the Heian era where hundreds of ghosts roamed at night. On this point, whether it is the upper management of Onnyangliao or the The currently unknown mysterious organization has been mentioned, and in the latest Yan Yanluo and Sadako incident, it has been clearly shown that the mysterious organization is consciously lowering the threshold of human fear of the birth of monsters by weakening the strength of monsters, so that the number of monsters begins to rise. This is why Yin Yang Liao cannot disclose the existence of ghosts on a large scale. As for those who go to Yin Yang Liao for help, I have also written. Yin Yang Liao has peripheral organizations, similar to shrines and temples. Some people who believe in it will ask for help when encountering problems. However, they are only a minority and cannot shake the mainstream thinking of society. Even if they go out to promote it, they will only be treated as a laughing stock. As long as the mainstream believes that ghosts do not exist, there will be no return to Hyakki Night Walk, so there is no setting problem here. Third, why didn't the heroine go to the apartment to check in advance? Because she didn't think there would really be a big problem there. In her opinion, they were just some little ghosts. Before she saw the resentful ghost, she only thought there was a simple little problem. It was like a group of little kids going to set off firecrackers. The heroine was worried that they would injure herself, so she went there herself as a surgeon and found a colleague she knew (the protagonist) ), by the way, the ambulance and the first aid team (Haruko) were waiting outside the park. In her opinion, this was already safe enough to avoid over-stress, and she also hoped to use this incident to make those little brats improve their memories. However, in view of the second article mentioned, the existence of ghosts cannot be disclosed casually, so she could only make a detour like this. Unexpectedly, the place where the firecrackers were set off not only leaked underground natural gas pipelines (hiding a mass grave), but also encountered a landslide that blocked the ambulance's way in (the mass grave delayed communications, so Xuexi could not receive the message) If you still think she is not cautious enough and should check it out first when something happens, I have nothing to say. Fourth, the protagonist's family economic status. I never said that his family was poor. Onmyoji's income is very generous, but this does not mean that his family is rich. I mentioned in the article that the Onmyoji has high income, but also consumes a lot of money in training and combat. If you can't understand it intuitively, for example, the Onmyoji is similar to the special forces in reality. However, they have to pay for the live-fire training they usually conduct and the weapons they consume on duty. The salary is high and the expenses are high. In fact, they don't earn as much as you see. As for the protagonist's family, there are three people and three cats, and the main income comes from Haruko's C-level character. The three cats need special food. Haruko's missions are costly, and the protagonist and his sister need materials for practice, so their family is not rich, so the protagonist takes on missions as much as possible to ease the family's financial pressure. No problem. Last point, why should you go to an ordinary school? Because mathematics, physics and chemistry are very important for removing spirits, it's that simple. For the basic teaching of Onmyoji, each family has its own enlightenment education. There is no need to set up special courses, so there is no need for special Onmyoji elementary, middle, and high schools. I have never thought that Onmyoji is easy to learn, so I wrote that when they enter college, they not only have to take the cultural course, but also the Onmyoji exam. The Onmyoji grade needs to reach D level before you can enter the university on the prerequisite of meeting the cultural class scores. Otherwise, you can only go home and practice on your own, and you are not qualified to study the advanced courses offered by Onmyoji. Here you can see again that for the elite juniors that Yin Yang Lao focuses on cultivating, the conditions for high school graduation are only D. From the side, it shows that the protagonist is already E close to D in his freshman year of high school, and he is actually very talented. As for why mathematics, physics and chemistry are important, do you think the description of the forensic identification of monsters in my article was just a joke?

Is it unfair to use honorifics when speaking to elders? Even using honorifics when speaking to elders seems alienating. Even if you haven't studied Japanese, you haven't read novels translated from Japanese, and you haven't read any of them? Apart from selling fish, how many people feel like speaking to their parents without honorifics? Feeling alienated? I'm afraid you don't want to be slapped. In addition, if you ask me about Ouni-chan and Ocasan, no one will bully me, but if I use any honorific, I will be bullied? Someone else's book friend explained it to you kindly, but you still want to come? What's wrong, am I easily bullied?

No one is prohibited from saying that this book is not good, but there are certain types of posts that will definitely be deleted and banned: those that are political, insulting to the country, alluding to reality, those that are witch-hunting, personal attacks, those that are nominally talking about the book but are actually not good for the author. No matter where you post these types of posts, I found that the post will be deleted and permanently blocked. There is nothing to say about these. Then, it is normal for online articles to be like each other. Some people like and dislike the characters. It is normal. It is a mental age issue. You can think that re-living will add up. I can also think that what he lives again is a repeated life. There will be no growth after repeated experiences ten thousand times. No one can convince anyone, so you can argue, but there is a condition. I have built the Poison Point Building. Whatever I have compiled into it, do not post it outside. If I have compiled it into it, I will delete what is outside. If you want to argue, you can go to the Poison Point Building to argue. No matter how fierce the quarrel is inside, as long as it does not involve the first principle issue, I will not care about it. That's it. I think it is not too much to do so, right?

The protagonist does have a youthful feel, but it's hard to judge whether this is good or bad from the perspective of today's online novels attracting readers; but creating a growing protagonist is obviously not a bad thing for novels.

After reading the free chapter, I really like the plot and the character of the male protagonist. But the female protagonist who is reckless in order to advance the plot is very poisonous, and the male protagonist who chases the female protagonist everywhere in order to let the male protagonist follow the plot is very vicious. I don't plan to read it myself. If you can accept the above two points, this book is very good. Well, that's it.

What can I say about this book? Seriously speaking, it is a good book. The subject matter is also my favorite type. I recommend everyone to read it. However, the author has written too much about his mental journey. It does not mean that he cannot write it, but the author basically writes about every chapter, and it accounts for a relatively large proportion. I personally feel very uncomfortable about this, so I can only say, come on, author, I will withdraw first! Goodbye👋🏻

I'm speechless. Internet writing has become like this now. I just want to have fun without thinking. Except for the emotional scenes that are a little awkward, this book is still good in all other aspects. It also has some cool points, but it's not that outrageous. It's a good book.

I saw the recommendations in the comment area on Chi🐔 and have kept up to date (fully subscribed). One-sentence review: This is a Japanese youth campus + Onmyoji training light novel, recommended to readers who like campus love and urban training. But both labels have obvious flaws (only for the current progress). 1. Japanese Youth Campus: Too few supporting roles! It's a quick show, but there are too few peripheral supporting characters, few interactions on campus, and no campus activities (the three treasures of Japanese campus dramas: clubs, campus festivals, and sports meets). However, considering that the logic of ghosts is similar to that of anime spell battles, which are caused by the fear and resentment of social groups, and there is a corresponding Onmyoji University, it should be improved in the future. The author recommends adding some interactions between other onmyojis of the same age and the male and female protagonist in the early stage~ (I thought it was strange that the family would conduct apprenticeship training in the early stage, but the male protagonist had no contact with other onmyojis in the same area... There are apps but no WeChat group?) In addition, I look forward to the roles of teachers and students in the university. The heroine's character issue, this is the most complained about or scolded part. Typical avoidant attachment personality! In fact, the audience is very wide, but since I have observed that most of the readers currently follow the male protagonist to travel through time and practice, and the supporting characters rarely have scenes that highlight the cuteness or appearance of the female protagonist, it is also difficult, so there are too many people scolding... Poor author, half of the problem can be solved if the female protagonist in the anime draws nice white hair or red twin ponytails. The other adopted heroine, Yuki, is too out-of-the-box. Maybe because she has few roles in the early stage, Yuki obviously has a lot of hidden plots to explore, so I want her to be more multi-faceted, which leads to a big difference between her and the nanny/bodyguard identity. I personally recommend a character named Misato Katsuragi in "eva". Her character has a deep side and a free and easy cynical part, and she is very lovable.

This is purely a personal opinion and does not represent anyone else's... This book is indeed a good book, but it makes me very tired. I can only read it during my vacation. I usually come home from get off work after a tired day and want to read something lighthearted and relaxing, so this book is not suitable. It was okay at the beginning, but the plot became more and more intense as it progressed, with conspiracies one after another. In the first year, the protagonist died once and was brought back, and not long after that, he was hospitalized again because of a curse. Can you occasionally intersperse some daily life to relax the rhythm? Speaking of which, there is another book in which the heroine is a miko (I won't mention the title), which is completely opposite to this one. After reading more than a hundred chapters, they are all cute and cute. The "extermination of demons" mentioned in the title only happens once and is resolved quickly. The plot is too loose... It would be great if the two books could be combined 😅