The True Spirit Clan

The scene where they bought the carp was handled perfectly from the start, but then they had to pull that cliché twist at the very end—it was utterly toxic… He succumbed to the poison and died. Goodbye. I don't even want to see what happens next; it's just another mindless plot of showing off, getting slapped in the face, and then getting killed.

Does anyone remember the Nine Transformations of the True Spirit, by the author Shui Qiu?

The scene with the female lead, Xiaomei, was so awkward. I can accept that the romance is a bit stiff, since the romance isn't the main plot, so it's pretty much the same. But what you wrote about hugging her so tightly and feeling so sorry for her, it gave me the creeps. Author, did you switch from the female-oriented genre? Is this kind of melodramatic scene appropriate in fantasy novels?

The most outrageous part of this book is that a novice from humble beginnings cultivates using a technique he deduced himself, eventually reaching the True Spirit realm. Even a typical wish-fulfillment novel wouldn't dare write something like that.

Sow a single grain in spring, reap ten thousand grains in autumn.

Just kidding, a once Foundation Establishment family has fallen so low that even their most important cultivation techniques are all incomplete. It doesn't make sense. You can copy cultivation techniques as many times as you want and store them in different places in a storage bag. Even a mortal could carry several copies.

Excellent, clear thinking, well-structured, a good book.

It was discontinued right after its release, amazing! 👍🏻

Come on

The writing is very detailed. The power system is there, and it's a step further on the Ninth Grade Immortal Path. The fish tank can probably transform a dragonfish into a dragon. That Spirit-Attracting Technique should consume lifespan or have other flaws; otherwise, it's a major bug.