Spiritual Journey
灵缘仙行
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 501k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Writing novels is worse than writing prose. There are too many rhetorical and ostentatious elements. The general direction of the idea and the environment for character growth and development are not bad. There are a lot of words and it seems that the word count is too high.
The protagonist doesn't grow elixirs, refine elixirs, and finally learn swordsmanship. This has almost become the general outline of the space flow novel.
Foundation-building pills can increase the success rate of foundation-building by 10%. How many foundation-building pills must be used to successfully build a foundation?
Another dead eunuch, cut it yourself 🔪
The most annoying thing is that the protagonist can't help it. The protagonist who is pushed by the plot is far less likable than the protagonist who drives the plot on his own. It gives the impression that the former has no brains and just follows the crowd, while the latter has an online IQ and planned actions.
Did you use punctuation marks to break up your sentences, or was it written by a robot?
People who have been fighting monsters all the time, but if they don't digest it when they get an opportunity, what kind of monsters are they going to fight?
Author, your use of punctuation marks in this latest chapter is very uncomfortable. Just those paragraphs with exclamation marks made me feel a little embarrassed. The content of the book is quite good, but the reading experience is really bad!
It's very nice, but the punctuation marks are not used well in many places. Commas are added where they shouldn't be.
The overhaul is good, it should be good The opening is well written.
To be honest, the punctuation and sentence fragmentation made me half-read and half-guess. The experience was very poor. I hope it can be corrected.
It's too watery. It's just a hundred chapters to take a risk. There's not much foreshadowing for the follow-up. It's just watery. I have no patience at all.
The writing is okay. Why are the sentences and typos so messy? It would be nice to revise them.
In other immortality-building novels, the Foundation Establishment Pill can increase the success rate of the Foundation Establishment Pill by at least 50%, otherwise why would it be called the Foundation Establishment Pill.