The Ximen Immortal Clan

Did Ximen Qing and Pan Jinlian make money or lose money? I think it's a loss because not many people are willing to change their stereotypes because of your book.

The writing is quite good, but there is one thing that is quite annoying. The protagonist's surname is Ximen. When I see this surname, the first thing I think of is Ximen Qing in Water Margin. If that's all, it doesn't matter. After all, it's just a surname. But if you bring Isn't it disgusting to mention the heroine's name? If you want to make jokes, just make jokes. But the problem is that you have to make the main plot into jokes, which is annoying. Could it be said that when I read your book, I am constantly "synchronizing"?

I have read more than 200 chapters in this book, and I would like to ask if the author has an outline for so many logical errors? Is there any setting? First, only level 3 monsters can transform and activate their spiritual intelligence. How does the protagonist's first-level insect become intelligent? Second, why can the five major sects not destroy the Ximen family? Are you raising a tiger under your nose? Third, how many people can afford 100,000 boiled eggs? The number of Foundation Establishment monks is so small. As a result, the spiritual weapons used by Foundation Establishment monks only cost a few hundred or even thousands. How do those who refine weapons make money? The magic weapon used to make the golden elixir is only tens of thousands. I think the golden elixir costs more than a million, right? To whom are these magic weapons sold?

The characters I write about do not have the wisdom of the Yuan Ying Transformation God at all. I write about the protagonist being smart and the others being stupid.

It's really poisonous. Don't read any further. It's just a waste of money to subscribe to a few pictures.

A bunch of bugs, can it be reasonable? For example, the Fire Spirit Pill is harmful to the ghost clan. When the Tianwu Sect changed the pill formula, it was said that this pill formula was common. How could he make a fortune from disaster? Even if over time, many small family pill formulas were gone, then the forces at the same level as the Tianwu Sect would not be gone. And what do you think of the healing magic used to make elixirs without capital? Or it may take time to use magical powers to condense the required green liquid. Alchemy requires a large amount of condensation, which will definitely delay the protagonist's practice. Or it is okay to use magical powers to absorb the essence of flood-level spiritual plants. The protagonist can be awesome but it must be balanced and reasonable. Will there be infinite green liquid after practicing magical powers? Even in battles, if the true energy is exhausted, it will take time or spiritual milk to recover. And that Tianyi, selling materials to the protagonist actually makes more money than selling them to his own sect. How can a sect that only sucks blood use to maintain cohesion? Can it rely on feelings? Do the disciples of this sect have good things that they don't use and sell them to others to strengthen other sects? How can our sect grow stronger? It is impossible for merchants to charge 10 yuan for something worth 10 yuan. They have to lower the price. The market price is 8 yuan. Can't the disciples of our sect charge 9 yuan? The materials are taken back and processed and sold for 20 yuan, and sold to the disciples of the sect for 18 yuan. In order to prevent the disciples from harvesting the sect's wool and making a profit on the price difference, a sect rule is set up to impose a heavy penalty. This way, money is earned and the cohesion of the sect is increased. It doesn't make sense to upgrade a magic weapon to block lightning tribulations. You can upgrade it several levels in a row. Your setting is that the quality of the material and the amount of restrictions determine the level of the weapon. It would be funny if you directly block thunder tribulations and upgrade. You can also add restrictions to thunder tribulations. Even if it is tempered by thunder tribulations, the material is improved, and artificial restrictions can be added later. In addition, the general weapon refiner will try his best to refine the materials to the extreme to exert the maximum power, so even after tempering by thunder tribulation, it can only be improved by one level. There are still many bugs like this. If you want the protagonist to become stronger, please be reasonable. At least it makes sense logically and don't brag.

It took more than 20 years of Qi training to break through to the first level, and you have to hide everything you get. Although this is correct, what you write is about family cultivation, not an invincible lone ranger. You are also proficient in alchemy, formations, and talismans. Other clan members are like waste, and the aura of the protagonist is too prominent.

Garbage, fighter among garbage

Hey, instead of seriously cultivating and improving yourself, I dream about things every day that don't match my own strength. It's heart-wrenching to watch. I won't learn any secret techniques and work hard to improve my cultivation!

While talking about practicing the Wealth Couple Dharma Land, wealth is the most important thing; but you don't use elixirs when you practice by yourself? Then your space is useful for planting.