The Ximen Immortal Clan

Did you gain or lose by trying to frame Ximen Qing and Pan Jinlian? I think you lost. Not many people are willing to change their preconceived notions because of your book.

The book is well-written, but there's one thing that's really annoying: the protagonist's surname is Ximen. When you see this surname, the first thing that comes to mind is Ximen Qing from Water Margin. If that were all, it wouldn't be a problem, since it's just a surname. But when you combine it with the female lead's name, it just gets nauseating.

I've read over 200 chapters of this book and have some questions. With so many logical inconsistencies, did the author even have an outline? Were there any specific settings? First, only third-tier demonic beasts can transform and gain intelligence. How could the protagonist, a first-tier insect, possibly possess intelligence? Second, why didn't the five major sects destroy the Ximen family?

The characters I wrote lacked any wisdom whatsoever at the Nascent Soul or Divine Transformation stage; only the protagonist was intelligent, while everyone else was a complete idiot.

This is really addictive! Don't keep reading, subscribing to a few chapters is a complete waste of money.

There are so many plot holes. Can't we at least make it believable? For example, the Fire Spirit Pill, which harms the Ghost Clan, was mentioned as having a common formula when Tianwu Sect changed its formulas. How can he profit from such a disaster? Even if many small families lose their formulas over time, forces at Tianwu Sect's level won't disappear.

It takes over 20 years to break through a single level in the Qi Refining stage, and he has to keep everything he gets to himself. While there's nothing wrong with that, this is a family cultivation novel, not an invincible lone hero story. Furthermore, the protagonist is proficient in alchemy, weapon crafting, array formations, and talismans, while the other clan members are treated like trash. The protagonist's halo is too prominent.

Garbage, the best of the worst

Sigh, instead of seriously cultivating and improving themselves, they spend their days dreaming about doing things that are completely beyond their capabilities. It's heartbreaking to watch. Why don't they learn a secret technique to improve their cultivation?

On one hand, you talk about cultivating wealth, companionship, and the right environment, emphasizing that wealth is the most important thing; yet you don't use elixirs when you cultivate yourself? What's the point of your spatial planting then?