Grand Supervisor of Great Wei

I have read Chapter 105 so far. There are no huge poisonous points except for comparing destiny and too fast time. But it is also understandable. After all, you have to take care of the readers and you can't remain a little eunuch for more than 100 chapters. Now you can say that you have stepped onto the big stage. The establishment of Dongchang can also be said that the curtain has risen. The author chose aboriginals as the protagonists because in Dongchang, no time traveler would be willing to enter the palace and chop up his little brother. Many people are unhappy about thinking about Ronger all the time. I think it's okay. After all, the male protagonist is so miserable. There is no goal. According to the pain in the novel, there is nothing to support and collapse early. Refer to the reality of those who suffered extensive burns and disfigurement or oral cancer and cut their faces. Few can persist in living. The protagonist is more serious. The brother is gone. Now the protagonist is out for revenge. In order to avenge the experience of being slaughtered by his childhood sweetheart like a chicken and being dumped in a mass grave without a whole body. The most important thing is that he also saw his original body, turned into a pile of rotten flesh in an ancient background. For a talented man who was once a master of others, this is devastating. Now I want to see when Ronger will die. What will the protagonist do if he dies? This is a turning point.

See for yourselves, it's inconsistent.

It's a bit of a logical problem. You said the protagonist is very smart. Why does he have to cut up the chicken instead of going to another force?

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. He immediately changed his body and became a eunuch. I want to know why he thinks that becoming a eunuch will make him powerful and take revenge? There was no foreshadowing at all, just running towards the eunuch at the beginning. ​​And just accept a random beggar who wants to be a eunuch? Can the beggar be a eunuch if he wants to? To be a eunuch in the palace is not to just let anyone come in. There is no inspection or background check, just do it as soon as he comes? Then people are not randomly placed in the palace. They are purely mindless and can be read without brains.

I haven't finished reading it, but instead of thanking you all the time, I would like to say thank you to Mr. Lu for your cultivation 🙂

Killing Xu Shengrong, this story is actually over, there is a cause and effect. It's a bit awkward to write about being loyal to the emperor and serving the country at the end. Because the protagonist actually has no friendship with the emperor, it is just a temporary knife in the emperor's hand. The emperor only has three years left to live, the protagonist is no longer in danger, and this line cannot continue. There is no point in rebelling because he is a eunuch. Loyal to the emperor and serve the country? When the emperor dies, everyone in Dongchang will be dealt with, and a falling out is inevitable. The protagonist and the third prince have no friendship at all, let alone personal relationships. So the protagonist will definitely fall out with the royal family. He can't be the emperor, nor can he assist the prince. Then the plot behind it would be meaningless. The best ending is actually to kill Xu Shengrong, take revenge and commit suicide.

The logic of this book seems very funny. A dead person is resurrected in the body of a beggar, and then enters the palace as a eunuch. This is no problem, just for revenge. But he even used his original name, why? The palace is just messing around casually. You said it was fine before you entered the imperial study room. If someone like the imperial study room is always around the emperor, wouldn't he find out? And you're out for revenge, please. Could it be that when you are so weak, you will expose yourself in front of the enemy? That is not to die. Besides, in a place like the palace, killing a eunuch is not easy for the queen and prince. You are not really valued by the emperor. It is really difficult to explain...

Is this Xu Shengrong so innate? Lu Xingzhou was born with a near-death experience. Isn't it disgusting for you to forcefully give the heroine a hook? Become a genius in one hour, right? Is there a writer who can become a demon with just one thought and do whatever he wants? I didn't say anything about the emotional scene with the young master earlier. The more I write about it, the more vicious it becomes. Who can stand it? Do you really think readers are here to see your male protagonist and female protagonist being inseparable and fighting in a book? Why don't you kill her quickly and take revenge and then fight for supremacy in the world? It's true that the layout is too small

This book is getting better and better as it gets written. Some people may not be able to stand the first few chapters, but don't be impatient and read on slowly. Really, the more the author writes, the more interesting it becomes.

The imperial court is too small. Even with the addition of martial arts elements, the world view of this world still feels too small. Of course, it may also be a problem with the author's perspective. I used to read other historical novels, "Rising from the dust, growing from small to big," and the world view is extremely grand. This book is about working as an overseer in the East Factory, and it doesn't write too much about the intrigues between ministers and aristocratic families. It feels like they are underestimating them. It doesn't feel like a country and a world, but more like trivial matters between neighbors in the village.