Grand Supervisor of Great Wei

Currently, up to chapter 105, there aren't any major flaws, except for the somewhat rushed plot and the rushed timeline. However, this is understandable, as the author has to cater to the readers; it wouldn't be good to be a minor character after over 100 chapters and now the story is taking center stage. The establishment of the Eastern Depot can be seen as the curtain rising.

See for yourselves; it's contradictory.

There's a logical problem. You say the protagonist is very smart, so why did he have to kill the chicken instead of joining another faction?

I couldn't continue after reading the first chapter. He just got a new body and immediately becomes a eunuch. I want to know, what makes him think that becoming a eunuch will make him powerful and allow him to get revenge? There's absolutely no foreshadowing; the whole thing starts with him becoming a eunuch. And they just accept any beggar who wants to be a eunuch?

I haven't finished reading it, but instead of just saying thank you, how about saying thank you for your guidance, Master Lu? 🙂

Killing Xu Shengrong would essentially end the story; there's a cause and effect. Adding elements of loyalty to the emperor and serving the country later feels awkward. The protagonist has no real connection to the emperor; he's merely a tool in the emperor's hands. With the emperor only three years to live and the protagonist's life no longer in danger, this storyline becomes unsustainable.

The logic in this book is just ridiculous. A dead person is resurrected in a beggar's body and then becomes a eunuch in the palace—that's fine, it's for revenge, right? But why use the original name? What? The palace isn't a place where you can just do whatever you want.

Xu Shengrong just became a Xiantian (a high-level cultivator) like that? Lu Xingzhou barely escaped death to become a Xiantian, and you're forcibly giving the female lead a cheat code? Becoming a Xiantian in an hour, huh? Does the idea of ​​becoming a demon in a single thought mean you can write whatever you want? I didn't say anything about the romance with the young master earlier...

This book is getting better and better. Some people might find the first few chapters hard to read, but don't worry, just keep reading. Seriously, the author is getting better and better at writing.

The imperial court feels too small. Even with the addition of martial arts elements, the world it depicts still feels too small. Of course, this could also be due to the author's perspective. In other historical novels, the rise from humble beginnings and the exploration of grander themes create an incredibly vast world.