Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Jiweijinmen

The emotional scenes are too long. There is no need to write about so many women. Is it difficult to take them all to ascend together? The road to immortality is inherently lonely.

It was disturbing to see that even though he was at such a high level, he still used his fists to fight. Haha, the enemy will always have more upright methods than you. Pig's feet will win completely due to luck. 88, It's a waste of my subscription

Author, don't blame readers for criticizing you. Look at the title of your book. What kind of title you write will attract what kind of reader group. People who read your book are attracted by "Cultivation of Immortality in the Republic of China", but your plot always relies on "Siheyuan". Those who like Cultivation of Immortality in the Republic of China feel cheated, and those who like "Siheyuan" will not click on the book title after seeing it. You are not trying to please both sides.       ，，，，，，

I was convinced, and I gave you a reward for posting this article No, brother, the author's grandpa, you finally got a copy of the food and grass, what's the result? You don't know how to write female characters, you don't know how to write emotional scenes, so don't write, don't write, don't write! It would be awkward to leave this alone. What's this? Don't write emotional dramas. If you can't write a female character, just let the heroine be a vase. If you can't handle the emotional line, don't write it. It's a good book and it's gone. Especially the heroine, I don't like this character now that I see it, and I don't want to read it. Please, author, cherish your book. If you are joking, I will leave right away.

My first feeling after reading this book is that I can't live without women.

There is no need to describe the widow too much. It is best to move away when there is a chance. Otherwise, just write it down and end it instead of a plot that looks like a silly pillar. Not many people like to be a silly pillar.

Why add a woman from the Siheyuan? It reminds me of Qinman Siheyuan. It's so fucking disgusting. I can't write this person to death.

Alas, how should I put it, the description of Fu Yunzhao's character was originally low in favorability, but she became the heroine. The other emotional lines have not been dealt with yet, and there is a female heavenly master. I don't know what to say. Now the female protagonist Fu Yunzhao suddenly leaves this kind of sexy operation again, and the male protagonist goes to chase and ends up in jail, causing harm to others. Now the sense of the female protagonist that the reader had a hard time maintaining is instantly cleared. I immediately lost interest in pursuing the book when I saw it in the Northeast, but when I saw it was limited to exemptions, I took a look at it again and recommended six of them to support the author.

The writing style is just okay, but the plot is very poisonous. The author has mastered the seven or six orifices of Taoist cultivation, and the writing is completely different.

It's getting more and more boring, and I look suffocated

Even modern people can't walk after seeing a widow

Knowing a name, you can cast a spell to arrest the soul of a Taoist without even having a birthday, personal belongings or hair. Are these Japanese going to heaven?

It's really difficult to portray a female character! So one of the reasons why the harem is becoming less and less popular is that works like this book disgust many readers. As long as you portray the heroine and the protagonist better, and there are not so many problems with the character design, this book will not have so few readers. If you want to write a novel in a realistic style, you can, but the premise is that it must be as enjoyable as possible for the readers. If readers don't like it, what's the use of being more realistic? I still like the theme of cultivating immortals in the Republic of China, but these female characters, especially the heroine named Fu, are too dissuasive for me.

When one is born in troubled times, one's life is not as good as early in life. In the ancient times of the Republic of China, beauties in troubled times often had a bad life. If the man is in love and the concubine wants to be married, what's the problem? It is a good thing for both men and women! Why should the protagonist be like a scumbag who doesn't take the initiative or refuse, and is irresponsible when a woman is in love? It's so poisonous! Change it, change it

I was really speechless when I saw the chapter about accepting disciples. I haven't learned my own skills well. After learning, is it necessary to seek other people as my teachers? There is also a system added to it, so what do you want the system to do? Is it just a decoration?

In a good novel, if a plot about stirring up excrement in a courtyard is added, can this book still be normal? What did the author think? Got a convulsion?

In an age where there are storms, constant wars, and people are inferior to dogs, why don't these widows meet a few ruthless people? In this modern society, widows are lying if they say they don't have men. Let alone the Republic of China, there are wars and gangs. People will die one day. Why do these widows live so comfortably?

If Yang Jinglin wasn't killed later, he really died from the poison.

The beginning is okay. The more I read, the more I can't stand it. The Republic of China is really hard to write about. Writing about immortals is a bit confusing. I hope the author can work harder. I won't read it anyway.

The writing is quite good. I have been reading books for more than ten years. I am an old bookworm. I have written two books when I got interested. Some books by great masters make me want to read them after reading them. This book of yours is strange. It seems to be to my liking. As for the emotional scenes, I won't comment on them because I don't find them uncomfortable, but I don't think they're very good either. Overall, it's okay in my opinion, not annoying. I hope the author will stick with it and want to see the plot of Little Japan.

Now that I saw Chapter 61, I asked if Guan Xiyi and Ni Qiufeng were taken in. If not, I would withdraw them. It was very disturbing.

Green-haired zombies can be sent to the next door with a strip of water. It is best to put them in the capital, far away from the mainland.

I can't stand it anymore when I get here in the Northeast. Has anyone changed?

Who else

Subscribe directly to the monthly pass and start! I have been a bookworm for 10 years. Good book. Immortal Grass. Excellent writing style. Realistic essays on cultivating immortals in the Republic of China. The author has included many real practicing figures and Taoist classics in modern times. For example, there are several versions of the Tao Te Ching, including the popular version, the Mawangdui (Silk version) and the bamboo version. . Fendao Jing and De Jing Historically due to Confucian tampering, the content of the Tao De Jing is very different from that before the Han Dynasty. There is also the Taoist leader Chen Yining in the Republic of China (a real person who cultivated immortality, published classics, and refined elixirs, but unfortunately he did not have enough qualifications and died of cancer and failed to attain Taoism) In addition, there are real sword immortals in history, and there is also a sect called the Sword Immortal Sect. Liang Haibin (Unknown Baidu) It is said that the only person who has become a sword immortal in modern times relies on the energy of lung gold to maintain his sword. It is said that there are still a group of real hermits in Zhongnan Mountain (about a hundred people) who rarely show up

I just passed by to praise this: the author's writing style is really smooth, and it is very comfortable to read, and it feels like reading a physical book. Come on come on!

There are not many good reviews, but the writing is not bad. At least it is thoughtful. It is not a book written by Ma Daha, and there are not many common sense mistakes. It is very good to read. I have just subscribed to 260 chapters. When I looked at the table of contents, I saw more than 400 chapters and the book was finished. I felt uncomfortable and wanted to continue reading. No more. In fact, anyone can write about the subject matter, but if you want to write brilliantly and not make common sense mistakes, there are very few. Many recommended books have millions of words and are full of common sense mistakes. I can't stand it.

You can consider ascending or changing the world

Brothers, is there a plot in this book where a few people catch a vixen, but they are disappointed to know that the fox only transformed into a spirit, not a spirit. The fox seems to have been protected by the mountain god when he was weak. Now he fights to repay the mountain god. Then the protagonist kills several people who caught the vixen. Later, the fox transformed with the help of a pig's foot. After the transformation, his figure was so hot that he immediately returned to his original form.

Recommend! ! ! It looks great, I update it every day!