Siheyuan: Beginning with the Siege of Peking

It can be integrated with some other TV series, such as The Little Woman Under the Zhengyang Sect, and the Glorious Era, and the stories of the new era. It can be integrated more.

The protagonist is suppressed too hard. The protagonist, a person who has made meritorious service, and a group of people who have not made meritorious service are pickets at the same level.

I thought that there would be no good books in Siheyuan after "Food, Drink, Men and Women" and "Golden Toad Ancestor". I didn't expect that this book is really original and takes a new approach... If the quality is maintained, it is another masterpiece...

The author changed the name and it seemed smoother. Now it seems that compared with the Siheyuan colleagues, it is getting more and more off-topic. There are no other faults. I just feel that the author has extremely suppressed and weakened the protagonist, and his IQ seems to be low. Knowledge is supposed to be a strong point. Putting aside some things unique to the era, after all, there is a gap of seventy years. It is understandable that I don't know the details. But the unique vision and knowledge of modern people have also weakened.

The courtyard is just an introduction. 90% Of the protagonist's activities are outside the courtyard, and everyone only shows up occasionally. Then the protagonist keeps catching all kinds of little karami and leads to "The Age of Glory". After seeing this, I don't want to watch it anymore. The author has no grasp of the rhythm. The protagonist is always working like a spinning top, and there are basically no details about his life. It makes my stomach hurt to watch it.

I don't know how old the protagonist was before he traveled through time. The author gave the protagonist the impression of a sixteen or seventeen-year-old boy.

The writing is okay and the plot is reasonable. It's just that sometimes Pig's Knuckle is a little timid (wouldn't it be better to send Yi Guixi off before entering the city, or fall into the quadrangle routine and become an unbeatable Xiaoqiang), and sometimes a little reckless (how many times has he been caught, and it's not a fantasy or something where he has to break through between life and death)

The dawn is always so dark. Those who do not experience it are like earthworms, like light emerging and darkness hiding. A very good courtyard novel.

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I would like to ask the author what the theme of this book is? Does the regent help the country avoid detours in its development? Little people life flow or what? However, I think the writing is okay at the beginning of the book. However, after the VIP chapter, the plot of the glorious era that you wrote directly for most of it feels a bit watery. I will save it for now. I will read the follow-up later when the glorious era is over.

I just finished watching "The Foundation". Let me say a few words. When I first read it, I thought it was a time-travel story about a courtyard house. It was nothing more than an article about parents being incompetent, arguing about this and that, and how much money you can make by marrying several wives. But as the plot unfolds, the city of Beijing slowly unfolds on the eve of the founding of the People's Republic of China in 1949. The undercurrents before the founding of New China surged, and the heroes and martyrs who sacrificed for the people's life and well-being slowly emerged one by one. Until this chapter, the people's heroes are immortal. Writing is based on small things. People who have no feelings about family and country, who only think about their own exquisite egoism, and are full of various isms will not love this book. They don't understand what revolution is, what a new life is, what it means to be self-reliant and self-confident, and what it means to stand tall and be a human being. I would like to express my highest respect to the heroes of the Chinese nation with this paragraph!

😂I thought it was for daily writing, but in the end I just used the courtyard as a shell to write about the founding period of the People's Republic of China.

Brother, where is your space? Wasted?

Aren't you talking about the daily prose written in Siheyuan? Why are we still engaged in counter-espionage and public security operations after almost two hundred chapters? Siheyuan has not mentioned it for a long time. Where will the focus be in the future? I hope the author can write something more clear in the introduction, otherwise for readers like me who came here for the subject of the Siheyuan but have read a hundred chapters of espionage stories (the struggle at the bottom in the early stage is not much, easy to understand, but the latter part is almost all about lurking or fighting wits and courage), well, it is a bit inconsistent with expectations.

If you take the worker route, you will enter the factory at this time. From the beginning of the trial period to the end of promotion, you will be promoted to a level in a year or a few months. In the year when promotion is stopped, you will work as a 7/8 level worker. From the first five years, it will be slow. Once a year, your seniority will be stuck. You will not be able to advance for many years.

In soul-traveling novels, one aspect that tests the author's writing skills is the cutting off of the original owner's interpersonal relationships, especially family relationships. After all, he is not his original self, so how can he have such deep feelings. When it comes to the people around you, you have to choose which ones you have deep friendship with, which ones you have shallow friendship with, and which ones you don't have any contact with. In this article, He Yueyue is too humble to Silly Zhu. Silly Zhu saved his life and should repay, but the protagonist should avoid excessive contact. After all, the other party's shortcomings are intolerable. When telling He Yuyu a story, the protagonist can tell it as he wants, rather than He Yuyu asking the protagonist to tell the protagonist. There is a difference between the two. (To put it bluntly, a little girl can be coaxed by telling two stories, and even get on the nose and face.) The second uncle He Daqing is an elder after all, and he has the grace to help. He only needs to look after him. The other party is not a good person, and he is often tricked by him. The protagonist needs to establish himself as an adult, not just his nephew, and is treated as a child and junior by him. The protagonist should be a sober person and not be bound by so-called family ties.

Don't write too many characters who are full of love for Siheyuan. Once in a while, it doesn't matter. If you read too many, it will be annoying. Now when I see the name of Siheyuan, I think it is the same as bad calligraphy and painting. There are a lot of Siheyuan books that are written like human-machine and are impossible to read. In addition, the core of period novels needs to pay attention to prices. Just don't make the prices too outrageous. Secondly, the protagonist should be cautious and don't write too arrogantly and show off your wealth everywhere.

If the author has such writing skills, why not just publish a separate book? Why bother with the smelly ditch of the courtyard?

If Beiping City didn't have Mr. Wen Sanwen, it could still be called Beiping 🙂

A single heroine in a courtyard? My brain is crazy

This book is a top-grade book. Keep this attitude. The early stage of Diet and Men and Women can be seriously watered in the middle and later stages. It makes my balls hurt to read it. There are at least 1,000 books on the two platforms of Siheyuan, and only two can be remembered. One is the author, and the other is the gossip.

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Author, how much do you like to use ellipses? It's everywhere, it's too common, and some ellipses are used very inappropriately, which greatly affects the reading experience. Can this problem be corrected?

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It's well written~ I really enjoyed reading it, but within a few days I saw an update 😭😭 It's so painful to follow the book