Mirror Management Bureau

I couldn't stand it when I saw Zhao Le being roped in to join the Management Bureau. I really don't understand why Zhao Le was roped in to join the Management Bureau, just because he wanted to have a female protagonist when writing a novel? I would understand if you pulled her in at the beginning, but why would you still pull her when the protagonist is already powerful? She has no strength, but her intelligence is not too outstanding. The protagonist also has abilities. Why bring her here just because she is interested in the protagonist? The protagonist mentioned earlier that he wanted to recruit people with strength or power to earn points. Does this woman have anything to do with these two points? Don't tell me that he knows the two of them and won't betray them. Why doesn't the protagonist think twice about bringing the two of them up? Besides, he has absolute control. What is he afraid of? I don't know what others think, but I really can't accept it.

Isn't it good to write honestly about yourself? If you have to interact, make it clear that you are writing for readers, not for you to please other authors!

From a personal point of view, the setting of this book is quite good, but I feel that the author still has not escaped from the various shackles of writing fantasy fairy tales. It gives people the feeling of a breakthrough, but not a complete breakthrough. The more I write, the stronger the feeling. Especially in the recent portrayal of Zhao Le and his daughter, the father looks exactly like a country man from the feudal era. People who have read fairy tales and fantasy novels for so many years probably feel this way. And if Zhao Le intends to become a slightly important character in this book, it feels like a failure from the beginning. There is a strong premonition from the description in the hotel, and it reaches its peak in the dialogue between the father and daughter. A mediocre female character who deep down "longs" to become an accessory of the male protagonist and does not even have a bright personality. At the request of her father (which can be replaced by a family in ancient times), she half-nudging and half-heartedly leans towards the male protagonist. Although we can see from many chapters the hero's awesomeness and his socialist good young character from the hero's halo, Zhao Le and his father have not read these chapters. In addition to knowing the hero's strong and calm performance in one or two tasks, they also know a little bit about it. Whose daughter can be so disrespectful now that her father doesn't love her like a treasure? (Don't talk about some extreme examples in very remote areas) I'm not trying to talk about rationality, but the author writes urban articles! This whole thing in urban literature is outrageous. Finally, you can have a rational discussion with me, but don't come to boxing. If you want to ask me why I have to pick Zhao Le, it's just because this woman and the captain are the ones who get the most attention at the moment. To be honest, the facial makeup is quite heavy. "Perseverance, courage, wisdom, gentleness, independence, daring to love and daring to hate" and other "small" characters, you are not even willing to choose a perfunctory portrayal, insisting on copying the previous routine. The male protagonist can be straight, or he can dislike some characters, but sometimes having such a vivid female character or other supporting characters can bring the overall situation into play. In a word, don't let the value of an important character only be reflected in the fact that the male protagonist thinks this person is a tool with useful skills. The characters can obviously complement each other. (Am I asking too much? 😥) Finally, I am not teaching the author to write a book. I just saw that the dialogue between the father and the daughter was unbearable. It was so vulgar that I suddenly felt something. Above.

There are trees in the mountains, and the trees have branches. My heart is happy for you, but you don't know it. I miss you forever, but I miss you forever. Brothers, please share your interesting words and poems~~ (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

I feel that the early plot is very attractive, but gradually I feel that the protagonist's combat power is a bit exaggerated. There is no obvious comparison of combat power like in the early stage. The combat power increases too fast and the turning point is too radical. There is a problem with the connection.

My thoughts on just reading the first 50 pictures To be honest, I felt very alienated after reading these 50 photos. It's not that the writing is not good, but there is a small problem in expressing the protagonist's character. You actually weakened the official too much, because I know a little bit. The first time he went to save his deskmate, he was actually on the official focus list. His deskmate mutated and was attacked. When the official traced the reason, his deskmate was the second priority target. He was already discovered at that time, and the weakening was a bit too much 😥 Another thing that I think is a bit problematic is the character creation of the protagonist. The protagonist is just a high school student who has experienced three years of life and death, but in the end, he is just an immature child. He is too suspicious. Since he is so afraid, he should not reveal his abilities from the beginning to the end, and he has the ability to discover in advance. Why should he wait for it to happen, or to remedy it after it has happened? If I reveal it to the official earlier, I feel that a lot of mutants will be less likely to appear. In this century, the officialdom is very powerful I think it is necessary to cooperate with the government as early as possible, so that you can develop quickly and win-win with the country. And when the protagonist is the only one to join the police station, the country will definitely give the protagonist the most care and support This is just my feeling in the first 50 chapters. I will read more later.

To be honest, I personally feel that the setting of this book is really not suitable for a harem, and there shouldn't be so much love and affection.

It feels a bit inconsistent if you directly substitute the daytime of the elbow

It's a very interesting setting. The background of the story seems grand. It's suspenseful at the beginning. From the beginning, you kill yourself and become yourself. The story unfolds from the mirror world. However, like many short stories, some innovative settings are not filled with enough solid content. For example, the stories in many units can take place on any stage, so the rather poisonous campus plot, emotional relationships and the like are quite poisonous. Elements such as terror did not have the desired effect, and the setting of combat power was still the same as that of Xiao Bai Wen. The overall story must be self-consistent. You cannot ignore the logic of the plot just because you want to write some customary plots. For example, two trainee police officers find a way to go to the prison to do a task, which is a small funny point, but the prison itself has no foreshadowing or explanation. The props added to the story for the sake of a small plot are not very logically tenable. Is it a prison that also has the function of police handcuffs? Why was there no explanation for being sent to prison before? Waiting for questions This kind of subject matter is indeed more popular recently. If I read it with the expectation of reading a novice novel from the beginning, maybe I wouldn't feel so disconnected. Generally speaking, there are innovative novice novels.

Two poems about going out of the fortress (Part 1) Wang Changling The bright moon of the Qin Dynasty and the Pass of the Han Dynasty, the people who marched thousands of miles have not yet returned. But the flying generals of Longcheng are here, and they don't teach Hu Ma to cross the Yin Mountain.

Absolutely awesome. The original setting was quite interesting. Why did you recruit Zhao Le as a trainee police officer later? In the later stage, it doesn't matter if you become stronger and there is no threat. In the early stage, your own strength is not good enough. When the number of trainee police officers is limited, recruiting a useless Zhao Le but not finding an experienced one is very speechless. I have to create such an inexplicable female character.

As soon as the quality drops, it becomes a daily guide.

It looked very cool at first, but I got mad after seeing the teacher contradicting him 1. The teacher taught each student to have special abilities so that the students could join the action team, or to protect themselves from being taken over. He had a great ideal, not to mention that this was the first batch of students with special abilities, but once Let's set up a teacher who makes the protagonist slap the protagonist in the face without thinking, which really causes discomfort 2. It's very frustrating that the trainee police officers other than the protagonist can't exchange freely for their merits. At the beginning, there are few people, and the protagonist can redeem them for you. But if there are more people later, will the protagonist still have to redeem them? 3. The protagonist's abilities have improved too quickly. He is stronger than the captain and still has to stay in school to bully the children. It's reasonable for you to hold the position of disciplinary committee member, etc., But you still have to pretend to be an ordinary student.

There are a bit too many "clicks" in this book. Brother Ya, I thought you had succeeded in transforming. There is still a trend of short-form writing. I can only say, keep up the good work. You can take a few days off to make an outline and see how Squid and others describe the tense atmosphere. Don't always be "clicky" and "numb-stricken". The writing style that was originally good can be directly used for drama.

I have read the first dozen chapters of this book, but I still don't understand one thing. Pigfoot is a high school student. When faced with the mutations that are happening around the world, doesn't he worry about his parents at all? He also worries about his classmates who are doing this and that. Is there really no need to go home and take a look?

The wind and snow are blowing hard, everything is withered, and everything is white. Yang Yi came out of the company, dragging his limping legs. With difficulty, he held his bleeding belly and staggered. What a damn weather! He cursed secretly and shrank his clothes. Blood continued to seep out of the bandage as he moved, flowing all the way. Yang Yi stood by the road, looking at the various strange and unknown objects on the street, and fell into deep thought. These were once people like him. I don't know when there was a time when there were fewer and fewer normal people in the world, and more and more mutated people. He watched with his own eyes the number of normal people on the street gradually decreased, the number of monsters gradually increased, and even those close companions gradually changed. At first, Yang Yi just noticed that they had beautiful patterns on their bodies. They didn't care at all, as it seemed to be a normal phenomenon. Later, the patterns gradually increased, cocoons formed, red flesh petals grew, and it gradually became more and more inhuman. Other mutations also occurred in some people. Some people's tongues grew longer and licked other people's cheeks, but that person turned a blind eye. There are also people whose eyes are like swords, capable of stabbing others. He even saw some of his friends gradually becoming less human and more like dogs, even shaking their heads at other monsters for mercy. He felt that this place was getting weirder and weirder, and he felt that he was incompatible with this place. Countless monsters walk on the streets, just like ordinary people. But when he went out on the street, everyone shunned him. As if he is the monster. Yang Yi was puzzled. Obviously, they were the ones who were abnormal! The scars on Yang Yi's body were also obtained in this way. Countless monster-like people were constantly destroying his body in an attempt to turn him into the same kind. When he resisted, someone shocked him with electric shocks and murmured that it was for his own good. Yang Yi dragged his body and struggled to walk home. But he shuddered, was that really home? His parents were the first to become monsters. He was always trembling with fear at home, without any warmth at all. He did not dare to resist at all when his parents asked him to do things. Because if he is not well-behaved, someone will cause harm to his body and disembowel him. It is full of ridicule and abuse, fraud and lies. It was just a house, a house that could not be left, filled with resentment and curses that did not want to leave. He stayed at the intersection for a long time, and finally turned away from home and walked aimlessly on the street. The wind and snow are getting worse. He wrapped himself tightly in the worn-out cotton-padded jacket and covered the bandage soaked in blood. Many people told him to stop resisting and become them. But Yang Yi looked at them, the flesh cocoon getting thicker and thicker, deepening layer by layer, binding himself. They seemed to care about him and showed friendly smiles, but he saw ridicule in them. His strong body was finally defeated by this smile. He was a little confused. He could no longer distinguish between the biting pain of endless winter and the pain that penetrated his heart. The two feelings given to him were so similar. He was huddled on the street corner, covered in ice and snow. After all, he had no strength left and would stay there, motionless. Eyelashes were covered with frost and snow, and crystals fell off in the blink of an eye. In a trance, he saw a person who was just like him, with the same craziness and the same persistence. His frozen hands trembled slightly, and he waved vigorously and said hello. I saw the man turned his head and smiled. Only to find that the man whispered, "How did you know that it was other people who changed, not you?" Yang Yi watched him gradually alienate, his body gradually curled up, sharp claws appeared, patterns appeared on his neck, and they grew rapidly, forming blood-colored flesh petals. He used all the remaining strength to step forward, but gradually became desperate, walking slower and slower, and finally fell to his knees on the street unable to do anything. Before he died, he saw what the man looked like. Ho ho… His mouth spit out syllables with inexplicable meaning that no one could understand. His outstretched hands stayed in mid-air, and he died with a frightened expression on his face. His eyes still held the final hope and disappointment, and he did not even utter a complete sentence. He is me! In the end, even he felt like a madman. The cold corpse fell on the street without making a sound. The monster ignored all this and continued walking towards home. I looked up at the sky. It's getting cold. Let's go home. This time I should be able to mingle with my family. He walked happily towards home with a smile of anticipation. Only the beggar on the side watched all this, took off his clothes and put them on himself. Numb, yet fast. It seems that the wind and snow are getting stronger, gradually covering up all traces... (A work written by Cai Gou when he was crazy)

I want to give up the book. Not only does his identity represent justice and strength, but his image also shows that Lao Ya is a person who moves forward courageously for his beliefs, has great perseverance and is responsible. But he was merciful at all times, and if he had more harems, he would have more harems, but he was timid and even turned off the phone to escape. He always gives away cultivation resources to please women. Are all women so materialistic? How much blame has the scapegoat risked his life for? How many cultivation resources did such a good brother give away? The more you look at such a scumbag, the more boring he becomes. Does Lao Ya want to give the scumbag a whole new image of greatness and integrity?

Seeing that each of the protagonist's clones represents the protagonist's 1080 emotions, I wondered what the 1080 emotions were. Human emotions are divided into basic emotions and complex emotions. After all, I am not a researcher in this field, so I can only list a few. The rest may be the protagonist's multiple personalities, such as the seven deadly sins (arrogant protagonist, greedy protagonist, etc.) Happiness, anger, sadness, joy, sorrow, sadness, surprise, fear, fear, regret; >1. Joy: love, infatuation, liking, attachment, nostalgia 2. Anger: anger, anger, anger, irritation, boredom, impatience, rage 3. Sadness: sadness, sadness, grief, grief, pain 4. Le: joy, joy, pleasure, happiness, excitement, excitement, satisfaction, happiness br>5. Sadness: worry, worry, anxiety, concern, worry, melancholy, care, concern, worry, anguish 6. Sorrow: grievance, aggrieved, depressed, depressed, depressed, pity, sympathy 7. Surprise: frightened, frightened, pleasant surprise, astonishment, astonishment, astonishment, embarrassment, embarrassment, shock >8 Fear: hopelessness, loss, disappointment, depression, despair, collapse 9. Fear: fear, fear, timidity, fear, trepidation, nervousness, uneasiness, anxiety 10. Regret: regret, regret, apology, regret, remorse, remorse, guilt, guilt, shame Unclassifiable emotions And personality status: Shy, bashful, shy, ashamed, humiliated, timid, envious, jealous, hateful, integrity, greedy, crazy, boring, indifferent, giving up, indifferent, negative, hurt, doubtful, crazy, misunderstanding, paranoid, paralyzed, suspicious, expectation, impulsive, thirsty, lustful, stingy, doting, coquettish Indulgent, possessive, stubborn, wanton, cruel, hesitant, suspicious, evasive, lewd, perverted, selfish, aggressive, argumentative, warlike, mean, cunning, frustrated, gluttonous, provocative, demanding, sinister, disgusting, ferocious, irritable, discouraged, hateful, malicious, hostile, jealous, cruel, resentful, stubborn, reckless, impulsive, wild Savage, passive, anxious, stubborn, violent, arrogant, smart, smart, autistic, arrogant, hypocritical, withdrawn, unique, arrogant, arrogant, ascetic, alert, vigilant, confident, bold, arbitrary, energetic, enthusiastic, exploring, humorous, unique, independent, open, optimistic, insightful, positive, appropriate, sharp, strong, Tired, willing, enthusiastic, innocent, rich, gentle, kind, harmonious, peaceful, gentle, harmonious, in tune, understanding, calm, pure, peaceful, relaxed, satisfied There are too many, I won't list them, the rest is left to the author to think about. It is estimated that in the end, the author will also mention a variety of emotions and personalities in one stroke.

This book looks good from the beginning, but why do you want Zhang Zhen to take the blame and madly step on him on the side of Shen Yuexin and the Hermit, so that he can be compared with Yang Yi. Let him take the blame and get the corresponding benefits, instead of being the protagonist's initial deskmate who has to be pushed up to serve as a cover for the protagonist's identity while being crazily stepped on. This behavior does not add to the laughter but makes the relevant characters, including the protagonist, look disgusting.

Maybe it's because I'm too old to see dramas about girls that use a lot of words and ink, especially those about girls that are mentally retarded and psychological. If you want to write about it, why don't you just write it out directly? When I saw it later, I thought the author had been changed and the female channel had been changed. I don't know how many women have been killed in this gang. How can I still behave like a little girl? What kind of inner qualities are they? Are they all vicious lolita?

The first 30 chapters almost took off like a red moon, but it's a pity that it's behind. Listen to readers' opinions. Why are you, a book writer, listening to the opinions of a bunch of readers?

There are some ideas, but I don't feel they are deeply explored. The pace is fast, but the details of the description of the environment, characters, and language are not enough and abrupt. The white text weakens the power of the government and the country, which makes some touching plots feel awkward and forced to be passionate. The protagonist is completely omnipotent. For example, after about 100 chapters, he writes a mobile phone software and sends a text message to Captain Hao to invite him to join. Do you really think that no one can crack it? Summary: Little white text.

The protagonist's behavior is really childish. The first twenty chapters have a strong chuuniu comic style, and the supporting characters are either black or white.

The author's writing style is less mature than that of the leading writers, and the background settings are quite innovative, but the characters are a bit familiar, with all the emotions divided. There are some contents in the article that may cause discomfort, including jokes about women's bodies. Does the author feel that he has no female readers?

For the supporting building, everyone can just give it a name. If you want to add drama, you can set the character. It is best to fit the story, so that it will be easier to adopt. People from Lao Ya Que will come here to look for them. Everyone is welcome to leave your name. Each person is on the same floor. Don't brush the floor, otherwise I won't be able to see other people's names.

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"Is there something on your mind, girl?" The scholar in white asked while sipping his tea. The girl hesitated, faced the scholar's inquiring eyes, and asked softly: "Do you know Mr. Zhang from Chengdong City well?" Scholar: "A family friend." Girl: "Then next time, Mr. Zhang invites him to join us. Come on." Scholar: "He doesn't like watching plays and drinking tea." Girl: "It doesn't matter, what does he like? I can learn it slowly." The scholar said, "He likes me."

The protagonist was exposed in three places. The official either didn't find it, or they just suspected it. The first one was climbing out of the library window. They only asked a few questions about such an important thing without searching carefully. The search would definitely find traces. The second one was that a mutant wanted to kill his friend and the protagonist called his friend. The official found out but only suspected it. In the third exam, the protagonist was frightened and dropped the pen on the ground. The official didn't see it. The author was a bit too deliberate.

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It was promising at first, but things suddenly turned sour!