Mirror Management Bureau

Absolutely awesome. The original setting was quite interesting. Why did you recruit Zhao Le as a trainee police officer later? In the later stage, it doesn't matter if you become stronger and there is no threat. In the early stage, your own strength is not good enough. When the number of trainee police officers is limited, recruiting a useless Zhao Le but not finding an experienced one is very speechless. I have to create such an inexplicable female character.

As soon as the quality drops, it becomes a daily guide.

It looked very cool at first, but I got mad after seeing the teacher contradicting him 1. The teacher taught each student to have special abilities so that the students could join the action team, or to protect themselves from being taken over. He had a great ideal, not to mention that this was the first batch of students with special abilities, but once Let's set up a teacher who makes the protagonist slap the protagonist in the face without thinking, which really causes discomfort 2. It's very frustrating that the trainee police officers other than the protagonist can't exchange freely for their merits. At the beginning, there are few people, and the protagonist can redeem them for you. But if there are more people later, will the protagonist still have to redeem them? 3. The protagonist's abilities have improved too quickly. He is stronger than the captain and still has to stay in school to bully the children. It's reasonable for you to hold the position of disciplinary committee member, etc., But you still have to pretend to be an ordinary student.

There are a bit too many "clicks" in this book. Brother Ya, I thought you had succeeded in transforming. There is still a trend of short-form writing. I can only say, keep up the good work. You can take a few days off to make an outline and see how Squid and others describe the tense atmosphere. Don't always be "clicky" and "numb-stricken". The writing style that was originally good can be directly used for drama.

I have read the first dozen chapters of this book, but I still don't understand one thing. Pigfoot is a high school student. When faced with the mutations that are happening around the world, doesn't he worry about his parents at all? He also worries about his classmates who are doing this and that. Is there really no need to go home and take a look?

I couldn't stand it when I saw Zhao Le being roped in to join the Management Bureau. I really don't understand why Zhao Le was roped in to join the Management Bureau, just because he wanted to have a female protagonist when writing a novel? I would understand if you pulled her in at the beginning, but why would you still pull her when the protagonist is already powerful? She has no strength, but her intelligence is not too outstanding. The protagonist also has abilities. Why bring her here just because she is interested in the protagonist? The protagonist mentioned earlier that he wanted to recruit people with strength or power to earn points. Does this woman have anything to do with these two points? Don't tell me that he knows the two of them and won't betray them. Why doesn't the protagonist think twice about bringing the two of them up? Besides, he has absolute control. What is he afraid of? I don't know what others think, but I really can't accept it.

The wind and snow are blowing hard, everything is withered, and everything is white. Yang Yi came out of the company, dragging his limping legs. With difficulty, he held his bleeding belly and staggered. What a damn weather! He cursed secretly and shrank his clothes. Blood continued to seep out of the bandage as he moved, flowing all the way. Yang Yi stood by the road, looking at the various strange and unknown objects on the street, and fell into deep thought. These were once people like him. I don't know when there was a time when there were fewer and fewer normal people in the world, and more and more mutated people. He watched with his own eyes the number of normal people on the street gradually decreased, the number of monsters gradually increased, and even those close companions gradually changed. At first, Yang Yi just noticed that they had beautiful patterns on their bodies. They didn't care at all, as it seemed to be a normal phenomenon. Later, the patterns gradually increased, cocoons formed, red flesh petals grew, and it gradually became more and more inhuman. Other mutations also occurred in some people. Some people's tongues grew longer and licked other people's cheeks, but that person turned a blind eye. There are also people whose eyes are like swords, capable of stabbing others. He even saw some of his friends gradually becoming less human and more like dogs, even shaking their heads at other monsters for mercy. He felt that this place was getting weirder and weirder, and he felt that he was incompatible with this place. Countless monsters walk on the streets, just like ordinary people. But when he went out on the street, everyone shunned him. As if he is the monster. Yang Yi was puzzled. Obviously, they were the ones who were abnormal! The scars on Yang Yi's body were also obtained in this way. Countless monster-like people were constantly destroying his body in an attempt to turn him into the same kind. When he resisted, someone shocked him with electric shocks and murmured that it was for his own good. Yang Yi dragged his body and struggled to walk home. But he shuddered, was that really home? His parents were the first to become monsters. He was always trembling with fear at home, without any warmth at all. He did not dare to resist at all when his parents asked him to do things. Because if he is not well-behaved, someone will cause harm to his body and disembowel him. It is full of ridicule and abuse, fraud and lies. It was just a house, a house that could not be left, filled with resentment and curses that did not want to leave. He stayed at the intersection for a long time, and finally turned away from home and walked aimlessly on the street. The wind and snow are getting worse. He wrapped himself tightly in the worn-out cotton-padded jacket and covered the bandage soaked in blood. Many people told him to stop resisting and become them. But Yang Yi looked at them, the flesh cocoon getting thicker and thicker, deepening layer by layer, binding himself. They seemed to care about him and showed friendly smiles, but he saw ridicule in them. His strong body was finally defeated by this smile. He was a little confused. He could no longer distinguish between the biting pain of endless winter and the pain that penetrated his heart. The two feelings given to him were so similar. He was huddled on the street corner, covered in ice and snow. After all, he had no strength left and would stay there, motionless. Eyelashes were covered with frost and snow, and crystals fell off in the blink of an eye. In a trance, he saw a person who was just like him, with the same craziness and the same persistence. His frozen hands trembled slightly, and he waved vigorously and said hello. I saw the man turned his head and smiled. Only to find that the man whispered, "How did you know that it was other people who changed, not you?" Yang Yi watched him gradually alienate, his body gradually curled up, sharp claws appeared, patterns appeared on his neck, and they grew rapidly, forming blood-colored flesh petals. He used all the remaining strength to step forward, but gradually became desperate, walking slower and slower, and finally fell to his knees on the street unable to do anything. Before he died, he saw what the man looked like. Ho ho… His mouth spit out syllables with inexplicable meaning that no one could understand. His outstretched hands stayed in mid-air, and he died with a frightened expression on his face. His eyes still held the final hope and disappointment, and he did not even utter a complete sentence. He is me! In the end, even he felt like a madman. The cold corpse fell on the street without making a sound. The monster ignored all this and continued walking towards home. I looked up at the sky. It's getting cold. Let's go home. This time I should be able to mingle with my family. He walked happily towards home with a smile of anticipation. Only the beggar on the side watched all this, took off his clothes and put them on himself. Numb, yet fast. It seems that the wind and snow are getting stronger, gradually covering up all traces... (A work written by Cai Gou when he was crazy)

I want to give up the book. Not only does his identity represent justice and strength, but his image also shows that Lao Ya is a person who moves forward courageously for his beliefs, has great perseverance and is responsible. But he was merciful at all times, and if he had more harems, he would have more harems, but he was timid and even turned off the phone to escape. He always gives away cultivation resources to please women. Are all women so materialistic? How much blame has the scapegoat risked his life for? How many cultivation resources did such a good brother give away? The more you look at such a scumbag, the more boring he becomes. Does Lao Ya want to give the scumbag a whole new image of greatness and integrity?

Seeing that each of the protagonist's clones represents the protagonist's 1080 emotions, I wondered what the 1080 emotions were. Human emotions are divided into basic emotions and complex emotions. After all, I am not a researcher in this field, so I can only list a few. The rest may be the protagonist's multiple personalities, such as the seven deadly sins (arrogant protagonist, greedy protagonist, etc.) Happiness, anger, sadness, joy, sorrow, sadness, surprise, fear, fear, regret; >1. Joy: love, infatuation, liking, attachment, nostalgia 2. Anger: anger, anger, anger, irritation, boredom, impatience, rage 3. Sadness: sadness, sadness, grief, grief, pain 4. Le: joy, joy, pleasure, happiness, excitement, excitement, satisfaction, happiness br>5. Sadness: worry, worry, anxiety, concern, worry, melancholy, care, concern, worry, anguish 6. Sorrow: grievance, aggrieved, depressed, depressed, depressed, pity, sympathy 7. Surprise: frightened, frightened, pleasant surprise, astonishment, astonishment, astonishment, embarrassment, embarrassment, shock >8 Fear: hopelessness, loss, disappointment, depression, despair, collapse 9. Fear: fear, fear, timidity, fear, trepidation, nervousness, uneasiness, anxiety 10. Regret: regret, regret, apology, regret, remorse, remorse, guilt, guilt, shame Unclassifiable emotions And personality status: Shy, bashful, shy, ashamed, humiliated, timid, envious, jealous, hateful, integrity, greedy, crazy, boring, indifferent, giving up, indifferent, negative, hurt, doubtful, crazy, misunderstanding, paranoid, paralyzed, suspicious, expectation, impulsive, thirsty, lustful, stingy, doting, coquettish Indulgent, possessive, stubborn, wanton, cruel, hesitant, suspicious, evasive, lewd, perverted, selfish, aggressive, argumentative, warlike, mean, cunning, frustrated, gluttonous, provocative, demanding, sinister, disgusting, ferocious, irritable, discouraged, hateful, malicious, hostile, jealous, cruel, resentful, stubborn, reckless, impulsive, wild Savage, passive, anxious, stubborn, violent, arrogant, smart, smart, autistic, arrogant, hypocritical, withdrawn, unique, arrogant, arrogant, ascetic, alert, vigilant, confident, bold, arbitrary, energetic, enthusiastic, exploring, humorous, unique, independent, open, optimistic, insightful, positive, appropriate, sharp, strong, Tired, willing, enthusiastic, innocent, rich, gentle, kind, harmonious, peaceful, gentle, harmonious, in tune, understanding, calm, pure, peaceful, relaxed, satisfied There are too many, I won't list them, the rest is left to the author to think about. It is estimated that in the end, the author will also mention a variety of emotions and personalities in one stroke.

This book looks good from the beginning, but why do you want Zhang Zhen to take the blame and madly step on him on the side of Shen Yuexin and the Hermit, so that he can be compared with Yang Yi. Let him take the blame and get the corresponding benefits, instead of being the protagonist's initial deskmate who has to be pushed up to serve as a cover for the protagonist's identity while being crazily stepped on. This behavior does not add to the laughter but makes the relevant characters, including the protagonist, look disgusting.