Please Welcome the Little Uncle-Master

The plot of the novel is small, and the protagonist is not attractive (there are too many of these). As a platinum writer, I should be able to write better works. Even if it is just for food, I should not be so stereotyped. I hope there will be a change in the future.

Why were my posts deleted? Isn't it just a rant?

I didn't see much after it was put on the shelves. I don't know why there are so many monthly tickets.

My ability to brainstorm is so strong, it looks so embarrassing

Is Qianjie Tower a little weaker? No way, no way, there are really no book friends who don't want to challenge Wandie together here. . .

The writing is good, but the time schedule is a flaw. It's hundreds of thousands of words and only 5 days have passed. Isn't this nonsense?

"Su Yin, the days in the forbidden area are bitter and cold. Now that you have learned some basic techniques, you are qualified to come to my place to drink a glass of wine every day. This is your only time to relax." A residual soul slowly floated out and appeared in front of a boy who was only seven or eight years old. It was indescribably strange . The young man named Su Yin seemed to be used to communicating with these remnant souls, and he just asked curiously: "What kind of saint are you?" Although the remnant soul's face was blurry, you could clearly see the corners of his mouth twitching, and he coughed lightly: "Poison Saint - Du Zhuang" "They are all named after their professions, why are you named after your last name? Du Sheng, it sounds so ugly, I'll call you Wine Saint..." Du Zhuang almost ran back to the tombstone in anger, but then he thought about it and avoided the professor's guilt. When his face was exposed, he stopped dwelling on this topic, turned his back and said inscrutably: "To taste wine, you must first make the wine. Today we will first learn the "most basic" wine. This kind of wine has many ingredients, each with strong medicinal properties. Although "basic", most people It takes a year of study to pass, but it only took me one month " Su Yin listened attentively, feeling a little uneasy. If he was stupid and had to study "the most basic" for a year, he really didn't know when he would be able to go out. "Next, you take the utensils I asked you to prepare in advance and follow the steps I told you." Du Zhuang said unhurriedly, but secretly said in his heart: "I specially took out the most difficult poison to learn, which shortened the time for me to learn it in half. It should not be like other old masters It's such a shame." "Crush red dove eyes and kudzu into a paste, then put it in the jellyfish, and choose the appropriate method..." Following the words of the "Wine Sage", Su Yin put the powdered medicinal materials into the white crystal "mixing pot", covered the pot lid, and took the pot into his hand. His hands are still not comparable to those of an adult, and it seems a bit difficult to hold the pot. In such an awkward posture, Su Yin simply weighed the weight of the pot in his hand and took half a step back. At this moment, his eyes lit up like two stars. He grabbed the machine grass with his left hand, and raised the crystal pot with his right hand. Suddenly his five fingers spread lightly and his palm was close to the bottom of the pot. He saw the crystal pot suddenly spinning in his palm like a top. Su Yin then raised his right hand, but the crystal pot kept rotating at high speed in his palm, as if his palm had suction. The "liquor liquid" inside had been completely rendered red by Akatsuki. During the rapid rotation, it was like a red disk being held in his palm. Then, Su Yin stretched out his left hand that had previously held the tractor grass, and the crystal pot on his right hand was thrown into the air while spinning at high speed. It's like the sun has fallen, except that the lid and body of the pot are separated. Su Yin took the opportunity to throw in the grass and several subsequent medicinal materials, and then the fallen sun rose again. Su Yin's palms kept adjusting, making contraction and upward movements, while his five fingers trembled rhythmically like waves. Each time they touched the rotating crystal pot accurately and in sequence, finally making the pot rotate stably again. After adding the medicinal materials several times in this way, the crystal pot fell gently on the stone table. Su Yin naturally and elegantly unscrewed the lid of the pot, and a rich and somewhat spicy smell floated out. "Uncle Wine Sage, I think I succeeded." Su Yin wiped the fine beads of sweat on his head and sat down on the stone bench. "Well, it's pretty good, although it's different from what I did the first time. Moreover, I learned it for a month but it included techniques." Du Zhuang continued to turn his back, feeling extremely embarrassed. Su Yin looked at the "Wine Sage" in confusion, hesitated for a moment and said: "I only learned the technique for seven days, and you still said that I was stupid..." Du Zhuang almost cursed, took a sharp breath, and said calmly He said happily: "When you were studying with Old Man Sun and the others, you were already involved in the use of fingers, do you understand?" Su Yin suddenly realized that his qualifications should have been very mediocre, but that was the case. Only then did Du Zhuang take a breath, turned around and glared at Su Yin, "Why don't you pour out the "wine" quickly? Just have a taste, don't drink too much." Su Yin took a slow sip, then suddenly his whole body twitched, twisting like a marionette. Seeing his ugly appearance, Du Zhuang smiled and took the pot to drink: "You may feel that the wine is a bit strong the first time you drink it, but you will get used to it gradually. Remember, The beauty of Qianji Zhenjiu is that the strong taste has a hint of it. Sweet, spicy but refreshing aftertaste. When you feel better, go over there and drink the hangover soup. Come to my place for a drink every day." Su Yin nodded stiffly and struggled to drink the hangover soup. Seeing Su Yin's embarrassed look, Du Zhuang stared at the pot in his hand with a satisfied expression: "This boy is really good. Hemp god pulp, green bamboo green, broken yellow liquid... I haven't tasted these for a long time. From now on, one kind every day, hehe..." PS: I have been writing for a long time, and I suspect that Lao Ya did not write one or two things about life in the forbidden area just to be lazy (definitely not to speed up the pace, and do not accept explanations, hehe). If there is a chance, I would like to write about other skills. After all, I have been waiting for my junior uncle's fan activities for a long time.

Although the setting is barely okay, I don't know why it feels more and more awkward as I read it! I'm particularly curious about the author's age.

As a tooth fan for several years, I feel more and more that Tianya is resting on its laurels. The writing skills and plot content have not been improved very much. A lot of the content is just for show, and the characters are very lacking in flesh and blood. What I think should be improved is that the characters should have distinct personalities, whether they are good or evil, pure or greedy, heroic or loners. Either cunning or duty. The content of the story is interspersed with characters and the plot is exciting. This is what novels should be. Now, after reading the first chapter, you can basically guess the content of the second chapter. Moreover, the content and story are all for the appearance of the protagonist. The other characters have little communication with each other and have low IQs, and their character methods are very simple. In addition, the plot makes Xiao Xuan of the True Immortal Sect too invincible, so there is no need to be so deliberate. Since the continent is so big, why can't some top masters from other sects intersperse the plot? At the same time, can the big shot be written with a bit of confidence and dignity? If the protagonist is great, don't be too dignified. The supporting role is too low. The normal writing method should be that the big man is shocked in his heart. He looks calm on the surface, but is turbulent inside. Then he tries to save face by pretending to be fat. The protagonist was shocked after leaving, and then. . . In short, it really needs to be improved. Now the content is all about Xiao Xuan Wudi. Everything was done by him, and then the protagonist pretended to attack and everyone was shocked and knelt down to lick it. Then a low-IQ wild monster (troll) appears in the jungle. The protagonist is pretending and everyone is shocked. There are no other tricks. The characters of the passers-by are all similar. Basically, they just kneel down and worship the master when they see how powerful the protagonist is. The villain has no IQ or backbone.

Su Yin