Longevity Chart

After reading the introduction, I feel that the author still succumbed to the mainstream market. My grades were not good, so I cut them all, and I also had a small goal of 100 million lifespans. It also felt very naive and pandering to so-called readers.

There is no problem with upgrading krypton life, but most of them are written in this way The problem is that life is deducted like running water How many days of life will be deducted by just moving a few times in battle It is outrageous to see other people's life span being deducted for dozens or hundreds of days in battle. This warrior does not carry a medicine jar with him, and it is full of medicine. A single fight will not deduct a year of life. The writing is very exaggerated And the lifespan of the protagonist is deducted so that there is only 0.01 Days left No one really thinks that the protagonist will die, right?

Like me when you pass by, I want to experience the feeling of being liked

Lao Ya's writing style is still average haha, but the story rhythm is very good - the setting of Goldfinger is similar to that of a library, both of which can improve and modify the skills. Then in order to cater to the market, a negative effect is added, which is the upgrade of krypton life, and then a certain level limit is imposed on the protagonist, which is a rather tricky approach. At present, it is similar to a library. It is an upgraded and refreshing article with a relaxed and humorous style. ——I hope this book will get better as it gets written, and I hope it will become more enjoyable as it gets written later, and that it will become a more popular work than the Library of Tiandao.

Several great masters have written longevity style, and it seems that the popular style is to lie down and slow down.

The price is too expensive. Your two chapters are equal to others' two-in-one three chapters.

I feel like this book collapsed again. I really like the author's book. It has a brisk pace and is easy to read. But there are more and more poisonous points, and the climax that I finally looked forward to is also a pig belly and a rabbit tail. Plot logic, character creation, golden finger wit. They all lack a lot. And to put it bluntly, the system flows quickly.

1001111 Happy marriage for a hundred years+1111 Happy 11th wedding anniversary to Yabai~

I remember the two authors I followed in junior high school, one was you, and the other was an author who wrote about gourmets from another world. During those years, my life was very gloomy. I was bullied by teachers and classmates every day, and I only got through reading your books at night! Grateful!

It's weird to kill the Iron Wall Bear. He's hiding from his family when his lifespan is almost gone. He shouldn't have eaten the bear on the spot. Besides, it's okay to find out that the bear was killed by the protagonist.