The Twilight Prince of Warhammer

Overall, it hasn't been very appealing so far. To put it bluntly, the only reason we've gotten this far is because of the Warhammer system. The plot is incredibly weak, feeling like an archaeological dig, with the protagonist constantly being harassed.

The female characters the author wrote are... Well, let's just say they're hard to describe. Books with unlikable female characters these days tend to lose a large portion of their readers. Hopefully, the author will pay more attention to this.

Your writing is really confusing. Earlier, the ratman ate an enemy and got killed, but later it willingly threw people to it to eat. What kind of writing is that? 😰

The choice of a new unit seems to be a very big issue. There is absolutely no need to recruit ratmen when fighting bandits. A simple squad of Imperial crossbowmen or lizard skirmishers combined with dwarves would have been a complete rout. Recruiting ratmen to feed them was pointless; the ratmen ended up eating corpses after the battle, and banning them from doing so after killing a few was entirely unnecessary.

Rats don't eat carcasses, so where are you going to find so much food to fill your stomach?

Could you add some modded units, like the Eternal Guard and the Black Grail? You could also establish religions like Pure and Immaculate, Harmonious and Friendly, Khorne, Honest and Trustworthy, and Joyful Fountain, Slaanesh.

So, will the protagonist only cultivate magic or, like Chicken, master both magic and martial arts? Personally, I think dual cultivation is the best choice. With such a thrilling and exciting background as Warhammer, it would be unreasonable for the protagonist not to have some melee combat skills.

By the way, author, is the strength of these units determined by their lore or Total War origins? If it's based on the lore, the Grail Knights and Dragon Princes are much stronger than those in Total War (ಡωಡ).

The cliché of periodic civil wars determining the succession to the throne as the main storyline is quite old-fashioned, even though it's wrapped in the skin of a Total War: Warhammer system. I'm curious how you came up with the idea of ​​using this as the main storyline?

Charge as soon as you see Warhammer! Go for it! 😆😆