Douluo: Bibi Dong, Eavesdrop on My Heart

I wonder if you already wrote that there is no secret room, so why did you write that Bibi Dong already fell in love with Yu Xiaogang? Isn't it just as disgusting? Since you want to write something clean, then it should be completely clean. Why do you have to talk to Yu Xiaogang? I don't know if I've ever touched or held her before.

The protagonist and Bibi Dong, two Contras, almost overturned when they fought for a year, and the timeline was confusing. Let's not mention that Qian Xunji did not die. Let's talk about the original Bibi Dong being so easy to fall in love with someone else? Is it okay to read the original work before writing it? Especially Meng Yiran is more than a dozen years older than Hu Liena. 6666

I feel like this voice is too silly, like a nouveau riche. Although most of us are such people, we don't want to be such people.

Good water, so poisonous. Chapter 530 made my head hurt.

Md This is a mess. I really don't understand why I can't write 50 chapters without writing boring dialogues. A lot of nonsense and I am speechless. Are you really saying why only about 50 people read your book? I am so wet and unhappy that I am speechless.

I can imagine now, sitting with my mobile phone, licking the screen, thinking about obscenity, and writing, and then licking the screen again, writing, thinking about obscenity, the cycle continues.

In chapter 5, he became so poisonous that he couldn't even brag about it. He was still like a fire unicorn. He was so low.

Bibi Dong was originally a traitor and she deserved to be locked up in the secret room. Has Bibi Dong ever received the slightest reward for how much Wuhun Palace has paid to her? On the other hand, the betrayal of the Wuhun Palace is purely unreasonable, and the protagonist behaves like an idiot. Didn't he say that he is getting married in a fake way? The protagonist has no idea? Can't your wife adjust her position correctly? Even if Qian Xunji originally wanted to directly compete with Bibi Dong, what is the difference between the current protagonist and Qian Xunji? If the protagonist had a reason, he would definitely be more of a beast

It's so rubbish. It's full of water. It makes me dizzy.

This book contains a lot of nonsense and is really boring to read.

The protagonist is not only pretentious but also vulgar. I feel that his character is similar to that of Chihiro Ji. For details, please see Chapter 65. I also want to ask the author, does this protagonist not need to practice? When I traveled back in time, it was level 84. After reading almost 300 photos, it was still level 84? The same goes for attaching soul rings. Can't you just go to the Star Dou Forest and finish attaching them and then come to Tiandou City to show off? As a result, I saw that more than 300 soul rings have not yet been fully attached. How smart are you?

Everyone, try reading Chapter 45, it will definitely be fun! ! !

There is Yao Lao in the Endless Fire Realm, but Yu Xiaogang is not seen in the God Realm The grudges are clearly scattered in the clouds, and all five hundred soul masters are slaughtered The Fire Realm is established on the border, and it leads to the abyss. Can I be a human being? The grace of a drop of water is repaid by a spring. How many years of care will it pay off? Mu Chen has become a master, when will Yuhao be free? Xiao Mei and Xiao Yu were divided as much as they wanted, while Chenxiang's cousin was turned into ashes Never cause trouble, he is not afraid of trouble, he is a mediocre person who dare not cause trouble Ascend the Qian Yuan Qi, the god of the Tang Dynasty for ten thousand years Guard the Da Qian against the evil clan, how many people will die in the ten thousand years plan? Never claimed to be a good person, Tang Sanshao was pure and pure

The protagonist Gabby Bidong and the two Contras were teased by Shi Nian and let him run away in the end? Waste

It's almost 600 chapters, and the content in it is only a few months after I have known Bibi Dong, and the content in chapter 600 is only a few months old.

I just read Chapter 6. I thought it was pretty good at first, but I didn't want to read it after seeing Wuhun Awakening. But I can watch both pistols. It's not that I look down on CF. On the contrary, I quite like it. But if you write it in Douluo, it may be more disgusting.

The martial spirit is a gun. . . . Or Ak... So embarrassing

Well... How should I put it, except for making the fire unicorn a little weak, everything else looks good.

Is it a single heroine? Is it ambiguous?

After reading more than a dozen chapters I couldn't stand it anymore, so I started licking it.

Can the progress be faster? (~￣▽￣)~

Where is the plot? I thought it was too confusing before. I wanted to watch it again after coming out of Tiandou City. But now I can't tell the progress by looking at the chapter names Has the relationship between the protagonist and Bibi Dong been broken through?

To be honest, the writing is good and the subject matter is novel. Regardless of whether it is weak or strong, it will definitely be very, very, very strong in the later period, otherwise there will be no need to write it. So it depends on the author's arrangement in this aspect, but in terms of content, the emotional line is too long and there is quite a lot to write. The world line is well written, so I would like to suggest that when writing a world line, don't focus too much on writing the world line, but also focus on writing the emotional lines of the protagonist and the heroine. Because writing a book must be attractive, you must write the core attractive things of the book, the emotional line, and then the world line that is second to the emotional line. If this thing is easy to write, just copy the original work and modify it. As long as it is not too broken, it can be said to be past. After all, you have written the emotional line, and your world line is not outrageous. Who cares?

After it is finished, I just want to ask the author if he has released a new book

Domineering heroine

Should I say it or not? I can really lick it. It gave me goosebumps.

You only need 888 to buy the Fire Qilin, and another 888 to buy the Destruction

Just get rid of this eavesdropping thing. You are so disgusting, do you understand? No secret at all

Who are the protagonist's wives?

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