Douluo: Bride Bibi Dong, Eavesdropping on My Heart

He is just a showman, or a talkative guy. . . . The whole person is speechless. He can repeat the same words many times. The timeline is a combination of two lines. The author's writing is very good, but the content is sometimes too useless. Basically, there are repeated words every five pages. It depends on how you think about it.

Stop writing and go home and farm...

It's a lot of nonsense, the plot line is wrong, and the character cultivation is also wrong.

It's really too messy, full of nonsense, and a bunch of useless nonsense that can take up several chapters. It makes you jump very far at once. The only selling point of the whole book is Bibi Dong, and the writing is terrible. You don't even understand feelings yourself, so you want to write about it?

The timeline is so messed up

What are you writing about? A bunch of nonsense, the timeline is wrong

The plot of this book is too long-winded and a bit exaggerated, and it becomes unreadable after the middle period.

Not good-looking, not recommended, characterization is not good enough

It's so messy. Bibi Dongcai Soul Douluo and Qianxunji are still alive here. The golden generation of Tang San's time came out and went to the forest. The Dragon Duke and the Snake Lady took their granddaughters to hunt for soul rings. At this time, Bibi Dong was 97 or 98. I reluctantly watched it at the beginning and had high hopes. At this time, why don't you rewrite it?

Um, don't say anything else, you'll know just by taking a look.