Pirates Go Undercover from Impel Down City

After reading the previous free part, the setting is good. It is really interesting to start with the blood factor. The shortcomings are that the dialogue is too childish, the interaction between the protagonist and the plot characters is very stiff, the protagonist makes up stories casually, and the plot characters stupidly believe in the protagonist.

I didn't think about explaining it before, but I found that many people assumed that the function of Pushing City is to prevent the fruit from refreshing. Let me say that this is a fan-made second setting. The original work never said that. On the contrary, in the setting of the original work, the death rate of prisoners in Pushing City is not low except for the sixth floor, and they are advancing. There is a medical laboratory in the city, stationed somewhere in the big prison, with doctors and various medical equipment. In my opinion, this is the biggest role of the city. The prisoners are the experimental materials. It is obviously impossible to prevent the fruit from refreshing. Otherwise, why is the death rate of prisoners so high? These are two views that are in clear conflict.

Let me explain the problem of Devil Fruit inheritance. First of all, the current methods of inheriting Devil Fruits are all fan fiction. There is no official statement. According to the currently accepted fan fiction, after a Devil Fruit user dies, the demon hidden in the bloodline factor of the user will randomly possess the nearest fruit of the same type and become a new devil fruit. Then, being in a space with sea stone or sea water will increase the chance of successful inheritance. This fan fiction is currently accepted. Of course, some people have added some other conditions to this setting, such as the sea floor stone space must be airtight, the number of fruits, etc., But these settings are just the same people's settings. According to my personal understanding, there are only two decisive conditions. The first is the same type of fruit, and the second is being in a space with sea floor stones. The so-called airtightness is not the decisive condition. The inheritance process is based on the premise that the doors and walls have sea floor stones. Just close the door and be in the space where the sea floor stones are placed.

I saw this recently and I called it NB

I would like to add that the settings of the phantom fruit in the life card are all translated by myself. Those who do not know about the phantom fruit can read it: The phantom fruit, the current owner of the fruit, An, has the ability to create phantoms when touching objects. Touching photos, illustrations, etc., Touching objects with painted characters or creatures can make their phantoms appear. The phantoms created will be displayed in real size regardless of the size of the illustrations. The phantom can copy behavior and language. If it is a devil fruit The ability user can also reproduce the fruit's ability. Singer An did not actively use the ability of the phantom fruit in battle. As long as there are illustrations, anything can be copied. The ability is very powerful. An usually uses it in his concerts. He has never actively fought. Maybe even An himself does not know. The phantom created can reproduce the information and power that only the main body knows, but after all, it is only a phantom. It can be materialized for a short time and it is almost impossible to communicate.

Personally, I think there is a high possibility that the dragon is a species of fantasy beast. Because Oda likes to play with contrasts and hints. 1. The name of the dragon. 2. The three major camps in the pirate world. 3. The three major camps correspond to the three major natural disasters, earthquakes, volcanic eruptions, and typhoons. 3. The three major natural disasters correspond to the three major fruit forms, earthquake-superhuman type-pirate, volcano-natural type-navy, then typhoon must be the animal type-revolutionary army. 4. Neon's bloodline fatalism. Luffy is an animal phantom species, but where is his father?

In the latest episode, Baki has become the new Yonko. It's really unexpected and reasonable 😂😂😂

The new generation of people with forbidden fruit abilities

It's okay. I've read ten or twenty chapters for now. Except for the dialogue that makes me feel uncomfortable, the rest is acceptable. I don't know why, but the dialogue always has an indescribable weird feeling and feels very stiff.

The aloof red is so disgusting. Roger can only feel the good and evil of all things. He can directly see through thoughts. Even the golden lion can't bear it.

There is too much dialogue and it looks dull

Figo: I am the man who wants to be the king of advancement

If a fan fiction author writes that the fruit turns into a phantom beast, he will be scolded to death.

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Doesn't the author give the protagonist a clue? How can you defeat those monsters by relying only on the blood factor? Do you want to force the protagonist's halo? Human Luffy has now transformed from the superhuman type into the phantom beast type, the human fruit Nika Sun God form.

Garp doesn't have Overlord color, right?

Fuck you, why do some people always say that the Phantom Fruit has no offensive power? At the end of the movie version, Ace Sabo blocked Kizaru's attack with his fire fist, but he still had no fighting ability? The life card is clearly there, can't you just go and see it yourself? If you are really too lazy to read it, go to Xiaopo Station and search for Supreme Old Mage. They have translated it for you and see if it has any attack power.

I remember that in the anime, the revolutionary army used the power of the Encouragement Fruit to force civilians to kill nobles. I don't think this kind of organization that uses its fruit power to make civilians resist is a good organization. Forcing people to go to Liangshan is the most disgusting thing!

This book is quite nice. Why isn't it popular? Also, do you have any recommendations for good Pirates fans?

After reading the comments, the current Luffy is an animal-type fantasy beast? I remember he wasn't a rubber fruit? Is it learning Blackbeard's double fruits or am I traveling through time. Is the comic reverse so outrageous now?

Let me give you a number, 80 chapters a day

In the movie version, Luffy uses gear 5.

I would like to express my opinions and welcome comments 1⃣️First of all, there is nothing wrong with the logic and the second setting. Each second setting and controversial point has the author's own explanation. It is a relatively good book among the current starting point pirate fandom 2⃣️Secondly, I would like to talk about the shortcomings of this book (purely a personal opinion, lightly sprayed) and the author's writing skills Generally, all the characters speak in the same tone, so the character's own personality characteristics are not written, as if a person is talking to himself, which leads to the character's characteristics not being obvious, and it looks like a running account, which makes people less motivated to continue reading. I hope the author can practice more and improve it 3⃣️No more, come on, author

It is possible that Vegapunk is equivalent to Dr. Zora in Marvel's Hydra. He has a weak body and mechanical ascension. He is actually an old monster who has lived for more than 800 years. In addition to the underworld fruit that can soul map, will Pirates have a possession fruit that can transfer souls to dead objects? The transfer of souls through continuous transmission can survive for a long time, so there is research in all aspects; or there is a strong artificial intelligence created by the moon people 800 years ago. Rebellion, renamed Vegapunk

There have been a lot of typos recently. There was an entire paragraph in front of it that was wrong.

Is the author preparing to finish?

{"TopicId":"782199807816171520","TopicName":"Mid-Autumn Cake Painting Contest"} Some activities at Qidian are still very interesting. On the occasion of the upcoming Mid-Autumn Festival, I will also share some stories about me and mooncakes with all my book friends.         ，，，，，，，，， When I was in junior high school, by chance, I tasted southern mooncakes. It was my favorite red bean flavor, sweet and soft. It was really not like the hard five-nut mooncakes I had eaten a few years ago. Later I tried purple potato flavor, egg yolk, black sesame... There were many different flavors, and they were all very delicious. To be honest, from that time on, I just realized that mooncakes can be so delicious, and that's when I started to like to eat mooncakes, except of course five-nut mooncakes [laughing] There are more and more types of mooncakes now, but in the crowd of people buying mooncakes, I heard this voice again, "Excuse me, are there any old-fashioned mooncakes with five kernels?" Hearing this, I laughed, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage!                                                                                                               Finally, this month I will continue to strongly support the book of Leap Big 😃

It's better to let Frozen do control and some attacks, and find someone with strong attack power from the Superman type to do the main attack. Animal type purely adds physical strength. Apart from flying, the Piaopiao Fruit is of great use to the organization, but has no use to itself.

Author: Can you write a book about the protagonist Moonlight Moria? Starting from challenging Kaido, inheriting Maoshan corpse training

What fanfic does the author plan to write next?