The Cat on the Pirate Ship Whitebeard

A great book. The story is very rounded from beginning to end, the combat power is reasonably distributed, and the world view is well constructed. It is smooth and comfortable to read. I have read eleven One Piece books at the starting point, all of which have been completed. This one is the most comfortable one I have read, and basically all the pitfalls have been filled in as much as possible. Although this book is not as novel and unique as "Pirate Galen", it has many details worth recalling, and I will read it several times in the future. One Piece is difficult to write. The One Piece world has many pitfalls due to its basic settings. Many things need to be defined and explained by the novel author, so bugs often appear. In addition, in terms of writing skills, there is indeed a gap between the pirate literature we see now compared to the popular literature such as sports literature and historical literature. This book made me feel for the first time that pirate writing can be of high quality and not have many big pitfalls. Personally, I think this book is as outstanding as "The Elf Master" and "I Want to Be a Superstar" among similar articles. I highly recommend it.

I have been looking for a lot of Pirates fans recently, and this is the most comfortable one to read. The author pays attention to details, and it is reasonable to speculate on the ending. Compared with common fans, the writing is more calm and simple, and the lightness and humor brought by the protagonist being a cat balance the writing style. Meow meow race high!

Overall nothing wrong! But I don't understand! You give a cat on all fours! Nails can grow longer! Learn swordsmanship? Eight-sword style? ? Are claws and swords the same thing? Can you imagine that scene? How does a cat with nails half a meter long get up from the ground? How does it look like flying in the air? Claws and swords are indistinguishable! It's hard to describe the appearance! 😒😒😒😒

The subject matter is novel and the plot is very good, keep up the good work

Advantages: The world view is very mature, the setting is rigorous, and the plot is not bad. Disadvantages: It's a new book for a newcomer, so the rhythm is not very good, and the writing is also considered a weakness (it feels a bit like keeping a running account). It's okay if you read it continuously. If you read it more, you may have problems with the sense of substitution. I suggest the author keep updating and practice more writing skills through this book. The next book should be good.

I feel that the creativity of this article is quite good, and it seems that the author is more rigorous about the setting. However, I feel that there is room for improvement in the smoothness of the writing and the compactness of the plot.

Hello author, I am your reader and your fellow Shanxi fellow. Thank you for such a wonderful piece of writing. I actually accidentally saw this book on a pirated website a few days ago. I just finished reading it today. I think there are too few online articles that are so wonderfully written and don't have a plot that is just a scam. So I came back and ordered all of them, which is a kind of support for the author (I'm a poor guy who can't afford to reward). I hope the author will work hard. Each work will be more popular than the other. I look forward to seeing you write historical articles!

It's easier to figure things out when you read the book this way

Recently, I am addicted to reading Dali Temple Diary. When I see novels related to cats, I can't help but like and save them.

I subscribed to about ten chapters before, but this time I finished it for free. Let me give you my opinion. First of all, I think this book requires a certain threshold, because the time background is set 30 years ago, when the Whitebeard gang was stranded in Wano. I have not read the comics. I am an anime fan, and animation has not reached this point. At first I was confused when I read it, and the author started to change the plot from Chapter 5. In the first 60 chapters, the author had already laid out foreshadowings such as sea floor stone, wine iron ore, cloning, cooperation with Ming Ge, platinum lead ore, etc., As well as some messy little details. In short, there are too many lines, which is not friendly to animation fans. After O'Hara, the author began to recycle some of the foreshadowing and began to prepare for the intervention in the battle between Kaido and Oden. This part of the foreshadowing was a bit too long. I think the author himself said that because the author made a mistake about the activity time of the GM army, he was forced to add a part of the plot. In short, it was too long. The plot of Wano Country is the connecting link of this book. I think it is the most exciting part of the writing, and the previous foreshadowing is not wasted. The latter push Tiger to the front, free the slaves, and the battle of Mariejoia is also based on the plot of Wano. Then there is the evolution of the protagonist. The plot after the evolution is a bit like before Wano Country. Various foreshadowings have been started, but at the same time, many foreshadowings laid before have been recycled. I don't know why, but it seems a little rushed, especially the plot of Impel Down. If it hadn't been for the author's words, I would have thought it was about to end. To summarize, I think this book is a very good pirate fanfic, and it is also one of the few pirate fanfics that supports the gm army. It is worth reading. For the sake of writing so many words, the author needs to be more precise.

Pussy boy...

I personally agree with his statement.

What kind of domineering setting is this? Akainu and the others can have a fucking level 9. Just kidding! They are only at level 10. Then isn't Garp fucking over the top? And Kaido, aunt, don't be ridiculous, this domineering setting

The floor is so high, no one will notice if you take a bite of shit quietly, right?

I don't know if the author can still see it now, but I still want to talk about my feelings after reading it. First of all, the author did not describe the characteristics of the cat, such as being quirky, cute, neurotic...

Create an opinion forum. If you have any interesting ideas or comments about this book, you can feedback all questions here. I will definitely come and take a look when I have time.

I have been thinking about why Luffy never likes Hancock. After thinking about it for a few years, I finally figured it out. It turns out that Luffy ate the rubber fruit because he was afraid that he would not be able to give Hancock stable happiness.

Why is no one posting the prototype?

To be honest, if O'Hara was killed, I would kill him even though I was the one in power. I had no ability to protect myself, and I still had to study things that could loosen the power of the people in power. This feels like you had to study the changes in the Xuanwu Gate after Li Shimin became emperor during the Tang Dynasty... Doesn't this mean that Li Shimin came to the throne improperly? If you don't do it, who will do it? Who wouldn't be able to destroy him? Even if he has the ability to protect himself, he will probably be destroyed at the cost of eight hundred losses 🤭 It has nothing to do with whether he is a sage or not. This kind of thing that shakes the foundation of the country must be justified in any era, whether in China or abroad. Whoever refutes will die, there is no room for it, O'Hara did it.

I really can't imagine a cat standing up and looking like a beastman

One problem is that too many digressions are inserted into the text, which greatly affects reading and reduces the sense of involvement. The other problem is that it looks like a running account.

A wild boar was cut in half and cured? Are you Brother Ming? Is it sewn with thread? 😤😤😤

Aha

Why does it feel like the protagonist is working as a nanny for the revolutionary army, contributing both money and effort? He spent 10 billion to buy 65,000 guns for the revolutionary army. They control more than 100 countries. Is it still 10 billion short of yours? Moreover, they have more than one million people. What is the use of your 65,000 guns? You might as well use them in the lottery yourself.

It feels a bit bland and looks a bit boring.

I agree more with the book Super Card System about the speculations about the sky islanders and the natives of the Golden Country. The characteristic that they all have wings is so obvious. Although the sizes of their wings are different, I think they should be of the same race.

The summary is: the cat master strives to dominate the world and consolidate the master's status on his journey↖(^ω^)↗

The main character is a cat? What abilities do you have? Ate an angel devil fruit? Angel? What kind of capabilities are set up?

The writing is pretty good, but the ability of the protagonist is a little uncomfortable, the system lottery is not very present, and there is also a description of the protagonist's fight, but the overall novel is okay, the subject matter is relatively novel, and it is quite interesting to read.

When did the Warring States Period get scratched by a cat? What about Akainu?