Raised a House Full of Obsessions

To be honest, it feels average, and everything else is on par, but the story is too bland, especially the beginning, which is too ordinary. Compared with previous works, I subconsciously felt a little disappointed. Actually, quite a few readers in the past came here to read the imagination, but at least in the beginning of this book, you can't see it at all. Goldfinger is also unremarkable. In short, it is too ordinary to make an impression...

There are always some readers who insist on binding me to cosmic civilization and the like, but in fact there is no need for this. Everyone just needs to be a fan of the work, not the author. If the writing is good, just read it. If the writing is not good, don't read it. There is no need to be disappointed. After all, writing a book is not easy. No matter what you write, there will always be people who like it and others who don't.

It's a pity that the two previous books on the history of cosmic civilizations opened up my thinking about the real universe. Reading them as novels actually turned out to be books, which shocked me as much as the first time I read Jules Verne's "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea" when I was a child. Since then, I have lost interest in so-called fantasy, immortality, mystery, soul and other novels based on elements, and even awe in religious folklore. But the author has been writing fantasy and mystery novels since The Wandering Fleet. I can understand that the author is a writer and has to consider the number of subscriptions and food. But what a pity, maybe this is the atmosphere that a world controlled by capital should have. Author. I want to make a bet with you. I will download, print, and store your two books. After 50 years, humans still cannot break through the Great Filter, and I am still alive. Even if I win, I will spend all my money to promote your books in your name. 😐

There are fewer and fewer novels about exploring the universe. We encounter friendly or hostile civilizations in the endless starry sky, pursue one cosmic wonder after another, and leave various legends on strange living planets... I wish I could "see" such a human civilization now.

Next time I reward your book, I will be a pig.

Author brother. I don't know if you can see what I said. Chen Dong, Wang Yu, these writing masters, the characteristics of their success, or the characteristics of their popularity. In their articles, I can hardly see any swear words. I don't know if the author noticed it, because the novel is originally written by a very strict writer. Dear author, your Wandering Fleet is very rigorous and beautiful. Not many people have collected and subscribed to it. I guess Qidian has restricted your flow. Dear author, your Wandering Fleet is well written, but there are too many social swear words in the early stage. Fortunately, I saw these places, so I will just omit them. I almost uninstalled Qidian. I can say that 99% of all novels now contain swear words. The remaining 1% are those successful novels. They don't say they don't have them, but they can't find ten swear words in the whole text. I can be sure that 99% of the authors don't have them. Pay attention to this, because most of the novels are written by boys, and boys' settings for heroines are basically more than 90% of boys, which are more in love. From the bottom of their hearts, they don't like multiple female protagonists. The author of Your Deep Space: Wandering Fleet, Han Ziyue. This setting is well written. I almost started now because Han Ziyue died. If his family exhausted their energy, or he himself went into hibernation after putting in all his efforts, then this book really saved his life. Basically, more than 99% of the novels are either stud novels or the heroines are changed very diligently. This is not my personal paranoid idea. I stand on the side of the public Let's look at it from a perspective. After reading so many novels for so many years, I came up with the idea of why there is a difference between well-written novels and poorly written novels. One is the female protagonist, and the other is the control of swearing. Because I have relatively high requirements for reading novels. Basically, if I read a lot of swearing, I will uninstall this reading software. It can be said that I will not touch novels for a long time. , I am bored later, so I just want to see if there are any good novels. I have said so much here, and I have no intention of attacking the author. I will share my thoughts after reading the novels for so many years. After reading the novels for so many years, and reading many comments, I found that in fact, including myself and many readers, basically no one likes the setting of multiple female protagonists. The author, you love it. The setting of the ex-girlfriend in Langquan is quite good. Although there is no relationship, the ex-girlfriend will be gone if she is gone. Han Ziyue, I have read many other novels about this type of heroine. Some have a good ending, but there are no good endings. Basically, it is like this type, either the harem or the person is gone. To be honest, Chen Dong's new book The Other Side of Deep Space, the female alchemist mentioned at the beginning, most readers are very fond of it. I like it, but after a few chapters, I fell in love with another girl during training or fighting monsters. This kind of thing is the biggest reason for quitting, and it is also the most annoying. My dear author, your writing is very good. I even changed the name of the heroine using the reading software, but the reading source of my reading software is still the starting point, and it is also deducting fees, which is equivalent to support. Your job is done, but I can't get over this hurdle even if I change the heroine using reading software. The only heroine in this book who is pleasing to the eye, comfortable and likes is Han Ziyue, and Xingchen Transformation. I can't stand the anime version, but I rarely read the novel version in the past. It's because Xingchen Transformation has a single heroine. After reading this kind of novel, I I will reward without hesitation. Although my salary is only a few thousand a month, I feel that the author who can write this kind of novel is a very special person. He is not in the same boat as 99% of the authors. Star Transformation has written its characteristics, and the author's Wandering Fleet has also written special bonuses. Even if the heroine is slightly mentioned, even if they are not together, or the protagonist is old, I like it very much. I just like it. It's OK to reunite later, because most readers of novels are always happy with the first female protagonist. Basically, if there are social swear words in the back, or the heroine is suddenly changed, then this kind of novel is basically unreadable. What I say is not to ask the author to change anything greatly. Seeing that the author has such a good literary talent, I really want to help you very much, and I will also reward you.

Eternity actually looks down on everyone🐶

I counted the eunuch within 1 million words of this book.

The reason why the author is not popular is very simple. The reading threshold is low. The reading threshold for fantasy, fairy tales, and heroes in urban areas is low. If science fiction is written in a cool way, it is no longer science fiction. If you write hard science fiction, who else do you know except Da Liu? Of course, people in this circle still know "He west", but only Da Liu has left the circle. The books written by the author are not hard science fiction like Da Liu (those who really write hard science fiction have published physical books), nor are they cool books that come with their own system. The reading threshold is neither high nor low. The result is that only old bookworms like this genre, and the main readers of online novels are actually students. Most of the readers who are new to online novels read fantasy fairy tales and pretend to be cool! After several years of reading experience, people will look for some in-depth novels, and most of them choose history, while a few choose science fiction! And the sci-fi Zhutianliu has attracted a large number of people, and the rest are us readers! And we readers, who are rationalists, find it difficult to make impulsive purchases! The result is that the author's book review area is very clean and there are few arguments, but there is also very little consumption, hahaha! If the author wants to change, he has to change it. What should I say? The genre of the novel does not need to be changed, but the character of the protagonist can be made more passionate! With the same novel design, if the protagonist is set to be a pirate or Naruto, the book will definitely be more attractive, at least it can attract more young readers. Of course this is my family's opinion. I have also read the author's previous novels. The protagonists are all calm and intelligent. They usually solve problems when they encounter them, but they don't have that tense and heart-strings feeling! For example, let's take the dark forest in "Three-Body" as a hypothesis. The protagonist wants to break the dark forest, but his actions may cause the destruction of mankind. Is it to save the entire universe? Or save all mankind? Based on the character of the protagonist in the author's novel, he will definitely hide with all mankind and wait for the next restart of the universe. The passionate routine is that the protagonist will settle the human beings and save the world alone, and then some supporting characters will be infected by his character, and then follow the protagonist to save the entire universe! This is also the climax of the plot of the passionate animated comic novel! For example, as soon as the pirate Luffy entered the Grand Channel, he challenged the shark Clark Darl of the Shichibukai. Everyone enjoyed watching it, but this plot was repeated over and over again. No matter how strong the opponent was, the audience knew that Luffy would definitely win! Once the audience loses that gripping feeling, there will be no excitement! So if you challenge the number one in the world, you are weak and he is strong, the reader is gripping. If you challenge the number one in the universe, that is a routine. If you challenge the number one in chaos, everyone will laugh.

Disappointed, do you know why I particularly like your article? Exploring the unknown, I like passionate adventures, and I explore the world framework myself. I can't say that this book is not good, but I'm really tired of watching supernatural genres.

Why do those gamblers who have lost tens of millions, even though they know they will lose when gambling, still borrow loan sharks and gamble online because you have never experienced the excitement of winning dozens or millions in one night. They just want to win that one hand and turn around, but even if they win that one hand and make up their money, they will still be gambling and losing in a few days, and then they will think about making up their money. They will not stop until they lose all their money and their families.

I feel that there is something wrong with the morality and concepts of that world, that is, there is something wrong with the author's three views in my opinion.

I only watched the Age of Mythology. The Age of Mythology is really well written, and it's very interesting just to watch the imagination. The various apocalypse, and the one-day trip to the Lord God's Space is even more exciting, but it's a pity.

Author, do you know why you rush to the street? If you don't write good science fiction, you have to transform. It can obviously be high-quality. Must transform. Forget about the transformation, the subject matter is not in line with the mainstream. It doesn't matter if the subject matter is not in line with the mainstream, but you are not a master, and there are not so many readers in the early stage. How can this book survive? ? ? ? ? Cut it quickly. Back to science fiction, Fang is the master.

I think every time I use spiritual energy, my lifespan is consumed. This is really ridiculous. It is better to use spiritual energy to consume spiritual energy, but it can be restored through exercises, etc. Excessive use will overdraw the vitality.

I think this book is even better than the Age of Mythology. What a pity, what a pity😔.

I just wanted to say, this is so cool. I just posted tens of thousands of words and got a lot of tweets 😰😰😰

Eternity, I have read the latest chapter of the book, so I will talk about my own feelings The subject matter of this book is indeed good and very novel, but I feel that you have never found a main line that can be developed until now. The current main line is to be a small psychological therapist in the West Institute to treat a few patients and reap the rewards of low-level resentment. It can be understood as early development, so be careful, but this development time is too long. Also, I really don't like to watch the protagonist browse other people's memories. It's really boring. Another thing is that the current plot is too bland, so bland that there is no desire to read it. Call it fantasy, it seems to be daily, but daily life is not the main theme of this book. The little beauty Sun Jingjing is well portrayed, but the old Sun's braised chicken appears too frequently, basically once every two chapters. Wake up, eternity, this is fantasy, you need a little passion. Just like the previous book, although the heroine is not well portrayed, the plot is good and can make people excited. Really, sometimes I can dream about a certain plot But now, the evaluation of this book is only two words, bland, too bland. I think your positioning of this book is inaccurate. Those who like daily life will read those daily love books, but there is no market for this book. You neither caught the appetite of the old readers of the previous book nor stabilized the new readers, alas If you still can't change your thinking, this book is really coming to an end, I hope it can be helpful to you Of course, these are just my personal opinions, it's up to you 😊

It's over. This guy is so perverted that he was harmonized😭😭

The author's writing is good, I won't write a book next time.

Alas, to be honest, I can't read other science fiction books during this period. After reading your book, I feel like I read other books. Theirs are all rubbish.

It looks pretty good, why is it gone? Alas

Isn't it well written? Pity

I think the first 100 chapters of Wandering Fleet are well written, but it seems that many people can't accept it. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is more like a "person" and has a lot of resonance. This is very important.

It's a pretty good book, but it's over. Leave a name

I know that this kind of subject matter is not suitable for the author's transformation work. I saw some readers asked the author to polish it more carefully, but the result was unfinished. I laughed to death. Who asked the author to choose this subject?

Wish us all a bright future

So I opened Customize Your Eunuch. True 6

I've been raising it all this time, why is it that it's only over one hundred and seventy chapters and it's over 😰

Seeing this novel reminded me of a novel with two protagonists that I once read. I forgot the specific name. The protagonist travels to a weird world of martial arts, and also possesses an ability that can strengthen his ability to control weirdness. In that world, after everyone practices martial arts to the first level, they need to defeat the weirdness, capture their obsessions, and then temper themselves, which is equivalent to raising an obsession in their minds. The version of the game is weird, and you need to control the weirdness to prevent them from taking away your body. Then in the early stage, you are a little enthusiastic, and the protagonist is a bit funny, but not invincible. In the middle stage, the protagonist gradually feels the corruption and darkness of the dynasty and family in this world. The protagonist wants to change the world and use the thoughts in his mind. With a small amount of modern knowledge, he began to cultivate a group of children. In the middle and late stages, in order to save his sister, the protagonist went to a strange place with a large number of powerful and powerful medicines to find some medicinal materials. In the end, half of the protagonist's group died directly, and the protagonist was trapped there, and then the protagonist Jiao relied on his golden finger to fuse the nine weird obsessions he had fused with his own spiritual soul, and barely survived. Later, the protagonist's sister brought the remaining half of the protagonist group to look for the protagonist. In the end, when this group of people was in danger, the protagonist appeared to save them. There was a person in the middle It's a bloody plot. In the end, the protagonist discovers that during this period of time when he merged with the weird obsession, the weird obsession has been affecting the protagonist. In the words of the protagonist's sister, the protagonist has been eroded by the weird. The protagonist has always proved that he has not been eroded, but later the protagonist finally discovers that he is no longer. He is a human being and has completely merged with the weird. The protagonist finds that his personality and behavior are completely different from his previous self. He has changed too much. In the end, the protagonist begs his sister to kill him, and then it becomes an obsession and his sister absorbs it. If he absorbs the obsession, he will accept everything about the obsession. Memory, so my sister also knows that the protagonist is not from this world (the protagonist is transborn) and the protagonist's obsession is to change this dark and corrupt world, and what is left is that the protagonist's sister has been running for it. In the end, the dynasty fell and most of the family was wiped out, because the sister got After a few hundred years, the world gradually changed into a world where weird obsessions and technology merged. Only then did the obsession of the protagonist's sister dissipate (in this world, if you practice martial arts to the end, even if you eat genius treasures, your life span will be increased by two hundred years at most)