Extradimensional Game

I started reading it before the copy of Xuanyueyue, and I finished reading it in one go today. @ Final Eternity The latest volume is indeed a very novel reading experience compared to the common Shuangwenliu online articles. About Human Sacrifice I was indeed moved when I read it. Although I may have been a little distracted while reading it and read it a bit fast, I was moved but not very much. . It may also have something to do with the protagonist himself. Human sacrifice is not the sacrifice of the protagonist. The protagonist is not a human being. It doesn't make much sense to bring the protagonist into the emotional anchor. After all, it is just a game for the protagonist, and human sacrifice becomes a bit of a joke in comparison. This is the fragmentation caused by the character setting. As for the scene, the most impressive thing is that the earth exploded again This time there was no residue left. And Eternal's writing is really thoughtful. The leaders finally stopped banging on the table when they were anxious. Of course, the logic is clear, and all the foreshadowings are laid out and then taken back. These are the eternal signs.

The first few dungeons of Salvation are well written, and the writing of the subsequent world of cultivating immortals is also good, but it is inevitable that the combat power will collapse in the world of cultivating immortals. After the completion, the protagonist becomes invincible and starts to have fun, and the earth has also begun the era of cultivating immortals. There is no sense of danger like the modern weird recovery.

I started reading it before the new copy, and I finished reading it in one go today. @ Final Eternity The latest volume is indeed a very novel reading experience compared to the common Shuangwenliu online articles. About Human Sacrifice I was indeed moved when I read it. Although I may have been a little distracted while reading it and read it a bit fast, I was moved but not very much. . It may also have something to do with the protagonist himself. Human sacrifice is not the sacrifice of the protagonist. The protagonist is not a human being. It doesn't make much sense to bring the protagonist into the emotional anchor. After all, it is just a game for the protagonist, and human sacrifice becomes a bit of a joke in comparison. This is the fragmentation caused by the character setting. The most impressive thing about the scene is that the earth exploded again This time there was no residue left. And Eternal's writing is really thoughtful. The leaders finally stopped banging on the table when they were anxious. Of course, the logic is clear, and all the foreshadowings are laid out and then taken back. These are the eternal signs.

I suspect that the author is overestimating the number of words and is preparing to finish the book. The previous volume 2 of Blood Demon Blue Moon was quite good, but now it feels like it's going to be unfinished.

Simple opinions The characters' emotions are well portrayed. At least so far, the emotions between the characters are not inconsistent. However, it is recommended that characters such as demons be personified with as little psychological description as possible, which would be out of style The overall worldview is grand and the explanation is reasonable, but it is recommended to refer to some more magic objects, increase the storage and types of the magic objects of various forces, and integrate them into their logic. For example, there are more than just stairs to heaven, technology and other means to go to the moon, such as doll-shaped magic objects, wish-making magic objects, space exploration magic objects, etc. In terms of script distribution, I feel that the role of China can be appropriately reduced, because if China is strengthened too much, other countries will become decorations, which is not conducive to the shaping of human beings as a whole In terms of the overall plot, it is not recommended to let humans always go smoothly (it can reduce the benefits of humans and increase losses and risks), otherwise the human aspect is likely to be continuously strengthened by the protagonist. If humans can easily defeat the devil in the later stage, the plot tension will be reduced. When opening a new dungeon, humans may not panic at all, and the sense of despair cannot be created.

The global setting is actually very good, but it lacks a force system and cannot enter the royal path, only the evil path. The author is indeed suitable for writing about the idealistic world, and the writing of Latitude is very good, but there is a problem. Personally, I feel that the group and the younger sister are a failure. At first glance, they are all demons. It feels like a big boss from the world playing a horror game. The sense of oppression is less. I feel that the protagonist is more effective if he is not invincible from the beginning.

I really like the setting of this novel, it happens to be my favorite type of mystery + horror (not equal to Cthulhu). Currently on the shelves, the logic is average (a good level in the starting point). I like the adventure and decryption plot of the game copy, but the detailed logic of the real plot needs to be improved. This is the first novel in which games influence real settings that I can read since "Small World is Fun". However, Small World is mainly about decryption + reversal, while this one is mainly about decryption and adventure. (The logic of the small world is sometimes high and sometimes low, but generally speaking, excluding the later stages, it can be considered a medium-to-high level of logic). This novel is highly recommended for those who like this setting and those who like mysterious elements. The logic begins to collapse in Chapter 70...

After reading more than 200 chapters, I thought the author's writing was superb. I really liked the killer writing style of the script.

I don't know what's going on now. Now I see that kind of thing where the protagonist is obviously very powerful but the protagonist just doesn't know it. I don't want to watch this type of thing.

Something seems to have happened to the brothers, and their behavior in real life seems to be roughly the same as that of the protagonist in this book. I may have thought about it before I discovered it today, but I didn't think about it again. I have been playing at the beach during my vacation in the past few days, and the protagonist and others are also playing at the beach. But I made this decision a few days before writing this plot. I will type some other things that come to mind below. Can you guys help me think of possible reasons for this?

Sow today, reap tomorrow! Don't post anything too harsh, otherwise only you will see it!

High Demon God - Unsatisfied Gluttony (Floating) Ability: Devour, plunder Anchor point: Human (reincarnation, host is also food) Rules: Any part of the body can be the mouth, and anything it touches will be devoured by it. After devouring and digesting, the body will become larger (devour) Be able to use the digested Demon God/inferior/weird rules, low rules cannot act on high rules (plunder) Digested (Data virus type demon): It is easier to make people become anchors (agree to become an anchor - invitation?) Differentiate themselves with intelligence (main god? System?), And distribute their own abilities to the anchor (other devoured demon god abilities - rewards?) Digested (space type demon): can create a transfer station space that connects various worlds, and can use the transfer station to transfer things belonging to itself to designated locations that have been marked. (Main God Space?) Can weaken a world into countless identical parallel worlds and then gradually devour them (mission location?) Digested countless lesser demons/alien abilities (already divided into anchor points) Disadvantages: Huge size (slowness: slow movement, the larger the body, the slower the speed) Swallowing too many demon gods conflicts with some rules in the body (poisoning: conflicts between the same rules lead to indigestion or indigestion) Body attack The attack method is single (it can only be swallowed at close range. Due to the high-level rules of the body, it cannot be used on itself. It can only divide the ability into the anchor point and let the anchor point attack) Note: Gluttony has an external mouth to swallow everything (it can eat attacks against him, including long-range attacks issued by itself. The outside has no effect on Gluttony). The defense in the body is also nearly invincible (internal attacks are effective, but do not break the defense and have no effect), and there is gastric juice that even the devil can digest. Note: Because Gluttony has a cooperative relationship with the demon god Envy (the space-time demon) of the same position (the digested space demon was severely injured by jealousy and fed to Gluttony), so a small number of anchor points will have the power of two high-ranking demons (Jealousy: Reborn) , time traveler), so when the protagonist uses the game to load the game, the jealous anchor will find that the world has changed (when the protagonist loads the game, they will know that it has restarted and have different actions to deal with it, so the plot will not be repeated) Note: Some powerful demons who have been swallowed are still alive. Undigested; some awake humans are looking for loopholes in the space and system of the Lord God; although the external power of gluttony has no effect, the power of gluttony can be used internally (escape?) Note: When there is nothing in the gluttonous stomach to digest, the gastric juice will be concentrated and strengthened It hurts itself, causing gluttony to weaken it, so when the anchor point contributes too little food, he will let his anchor point issue more difficult tasks (obliterate) and fight each other (team battle) in order to devour (powerful anchor points can digest longer) so that there is always something in the stomach to digest.

I have read a few chapters of this book before, but the blood-burning ginseng part didn't hit my mark, so I deleted it. If there was no book to read, I just jumped from the catalog to the village and started to develop. I found that it was actually pretty good. I personally recommend that you don't need to read the blood ginseng part. The overall quality is very high. A large number of demons and derivatives are invading. Dimensional planes. Below level five are humans, and level six The level of the game is expected to be around level 7, secondary demon gods at level 7, and demon gods at level 8 and 9. (Eighth-level characters can be discovered and beaten passively, while blood demons at level 7 are basically crushed.) The main character is expected to be around level 10. (This is not hinted at, but made explicit. It feels like he has been in a restricted area for many years, but he is a human. Acting around the protagonist, and this is the devil acting around the protagonist) The upper limit of the dungeon should be up to level eight. I am afraid that I will not be able to withstand the pressure when the game goes up. I personally suggest that the author should honestly write below level eight, and don't write it before it is ready to be completed. After level eight, it is obvious that the game cannot withstand it, and it has to rely on the strength of the protagonist, and the protagonist If you wake up, it's obviously going to end. If you run this type of plot, no one will see it. You have to eat the book and set it up so that readers won't buy it. And if the level is too high, it will basically break away from the main human line. It's quite interesting to honestly write the ghost story copy, save the parallel world under the threat of the secondary demon, and develop the local human level at the same time.

I still like the Age of Mythology the most👍

I opened a new dungeon, and the reading volume plummeted from 3K to 1k5. Is this okay? This is not good.

Eternity, Flowers before the Buddha and The Wolf of the History Department are both written by great writers. Think carefully about what you should do.

You'd better py it out for Eternity. Every time a new book is published, readers have to find it themselves.

I feel that the author may lack a complete world view, so the new stories have little connection with the old stories. Let me just give you an idea of ​​the worldview. If the author doesn't have any good ideas, you can refer to it. You can set a final boss, idealistic level 10, a cosmic catastrophe, which represents destruction itself (let's call it [Final] first). [Endgame] has stirred up chaos in the world, spawning a bunch of chaotic level 78s, a handful of level 9 weirdos, and countless even lower level ones. These things want to unplug the anchor of order (destroy all low-entropy bodies or the existence of "I"). Then a group of advanced civilizations formed the [Pan-Star Sea Defense Alliance] to fight against [Endgame]. They targeted all level 9 beings and most of the level 8 beings. In order to prevent fish from slipping through the net, they also created a barrier in the etheric abyss, which weakened most of the idealistic power through the barrier (both directions). Because it had existed for so long, the new civilizations believed that this stratification was natural. [Pan-Star Sea Defense Alliance] is at a disadvantage in the confrontation, so more and more level 78 demon gods have begun to infiltrate the low-level world. To this end, the [Alliance] has come up with a series of methods, [Game] is one of them, so the game fights against the demon gods to save the world. What the protagonist gets is a terminal of [Game], which is a level 8 person but only has a size of level 2 (otherwise it cannot float up). The authority is based on time and space. To do some tricks, you need to rely on external forces (such as drastically changing history and borrowing the energy of the earth's consciousness). Correspondingly, there are some advanced rules that already exist in the universe, generally belonging to the neutral camp (acting according to the rules). The consciousness of Planet Gaia belongs to a relatively special existence in this category. Its status depends on the level of civilization above it, and its size depends on the number of lives. Therefore, the situation is exactly the opposite of the [Game] terminal. The protagonist should also fall into this category, and his authority is biased towards probability or cause and effect. So the current story is that different civilizations within a certain range are threatened by [Delusion], and the advanced civilization sends [Game] to help break the situation, but for some reason it is picked up by the protagonist. The world where the protagonist lives has been invaded by the [Blood Demon], so there is no [Fantasy]. After the [Blood Demon] is taken care of, the [Fantasy] will gradually invade (for example, brought here by the elevator). There can be many parallel worlds of similar levels being invaded at the same time, so don't worry about not having to write anything. Also, it is impossible for the protagonist's operations in the game to have no impact on the reality where he is, and the protagonist is not a fool, so it is inevitable that the truth of the world will be discovered, so don't delay it for too long. For example, Ms. Xiandou gets a task to study spiritual beans, and then something unexpected happens in the laboratory. Then [the game] gives clues according to its own rules, and then comes contact and understanding. This is all I have sorted out in my mind for now, I will add more later if I think of anything else.

It has been abandoned since Chapter 208. Let's talk about the advantages first. It is very novel, the plot design is interesting, compact and coherent, the characters' abilities grow smoothly, and the story logic and power system show no signs of collapse when the world view is large enough. Then there are the parts that I think look more uncomfortable, and that's why I gave up. 1. According to the setting, the demon can invade the world at will, and even cause annihilation through anchoring. All humans and even the protagonist can do is to kill the anchor, treating the symptoms but not the root cause. Moreover, the punishment of the demon is not commensurate with the damage to the world, which makes me feel a little aggrieved even if the protagonist succeeds. 2. The protagonist can use so many plot characters that he already has to form interesting interactions, but he just grabs a sheep and drags it to death, and only uses that body to incarnate through the plot. It's like there are many professions in the game's promotional video, but I can only choose the initial one, which is very exciting. 3. As a supporting character, the game helmet has a strong sense of plotting against the protagonist and the protagonist's cousin, but the two are helpless. Overall, it was a good book, but I didn't like it, so I dropped it.

I admire you very much, and I would like to comment on the shortcomings of this book 1. There is typically no outline. I just write whatever I think of. The unlimited flow setting in the early stage is okay, but later the plot is messy and has no sense of coherence 2. It is told in a straight and direct manner, a little boring 3. The plot is trivial and complicated: many of the foreshadowing settings are not used, so why are you doing so much foreshadowing? To improve the word count? There are not many characters in the game, the human missions are not written after being mentioned, and the dragons that were promised to reshape their bodies in the world of mountains and seas are not seen, which easily makes readers lose interest. There is no response to the plot, and the foreshadowing is really just foreshadowing, a foreshadowing that will always lie underground 4. The character characteristics are not clear: Generally speaking, the description of the characters is not enough, I can't tell what the feeling is, and it feels like there is no distinctiveness, and I can't summarize the characteristics of each character I originally thought you would use the writing method of the small world, but the shortcomings of the small world are also high and low. The purpose of the "game" in the small world is unclear, the source is unknown, and the characters of the protagonist group collapsed in the later period. Although you gave the "game" enough sources and purposes, the plot fell apart badly in the middle and later stages. In the wish chapter, the output value was completely ruined. Please🙏, if I want to read philosophy, we can read philosophical prose. That kind of specialized prose writing is much better. People who read online articles only come to read the storyline.

What the hell, I can still read what I wrote before, but when it comes to the mountains and seas, it completely changes its flavor. Inexplicably, it turns into a story about infrastructure farming. The author starts to crazily export his own values, criticizing others for criticizing politics online, but actually criticizes politics in the novel. How funny is that? Originally, according to the previous routine, the protagonist could still participate in an immersive adventure dungeon and experience the feeling of thrills and decryption. However, when it comes to mountains and seas, it becomes a word game without any sense of substitution. The protagonist becomes a pure tool man. The more I watch, the more boring I am. I don't know what the author wants to do. The original weird and doomsday survival has inexplicably turned into the development of scientific and technological infrastructure for farming. It is completely unwatchable.

In fact, I think we can gradually build our own novel universe in eternity.

Let's just write science fiction honestly. This track is the best for you as the actual author. Look at what kind of garbage these science fiction books are now. They are either about cultivating immortality and spiritual cultivation in the guise of science fiction, or they are boring chronicles that always use plug-ins and have no fun. In fact, science fiction is the best if it is written honestly, without any appearance of material being transformed out of thin air, without any cost or side effects. This kind of science fiction is pretending to be science fiction. After watching it too much, it gradually becomes unsightly. I also hope that there will be no psychic powers or magic. This kind of thing is the most likely to ruin the plot and combat effectiveness.

I seriously suggest that the author don't describe female characters if he doesn't know how to describe them. The otaku flavor is too strong, and Shuiwen can describe it. Other books like Laishui insist on describing female characters, but they can't do it well. You can always use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. This has become the biggest poisonous point of the author's books, and it's getting more and more serious. What attracts readers is not the plot or the setting. The author thinks these plots are more likely to make people speechless or like them.

The disadvantage is that the protagonist is too strong. I still prefer an ordinary protagonist who can upgrade step by step, rather than lose his mind and pretend to be a pig at full level.

There are several novels similar to this one. "I am the only one in the world who doesn't know that I am an expert" by Lao Mo Tong should be the earliest type of this type Tingri's "Small World is Fun" behind-the-scenes game flow Cang Yue's "Blue and White Society" Contained Object Abnormality "The Information Omniscient" sci-fi version of Shan Hai Jing Qing Shi's "My Players Are All Actors" Fourth Natural Disaster Players travel through various tampered historical fragments "I am God" written by Chuifeng does not need to be said much. It is the top level of behind-the-scenes creation flow Then there is also "Lux's Magic Penetration Rod" which is also a behind-the-scenes flow. Recommended for those who like League of Legends "The Conquest Manual of Another World" written by Angler is really good, but it was reported by jealousy and closed the book 😭 I will update some later

Classmate Han Xiaoyue

Weird or Oddity Building! If you have any ideas, feel free to speak out. The author is going to directly copy the book review. Two points are required: Weirdness must have its own rules, the more detailed the better. The more powerful the magical object, the greater the risk of its use.

To be honest, I won't start reading the dungeon until the dungeon is completed, but I think the main plot is quite interesting. I went to the main world for help and I feel that this development will be very interesting if it is written well. I hope it is not an ordinary process and result of finding a black guard to defeat the weird together and then adding a different world to the sphere of influence, or the black guard becomes a reincarnator, etc. I want something unexpected, just like the guard in black didn't expect that the bean branch would fall. After all, in addition to ordinary people, there are also a group of weirdos behind the scenes. After all, as weirdos, although the purpose of the game is very clear, it is difficult to be guessed. What I want is to give a little surprise when "you think this is it", I'm sorry, "you can't show off my operation", and the protagonist is a player. Before, the Black Guard was quite good. Except for guessing the game, it made people feel the protagonist's character in every aspect. It's cool to get. It's good to write it like this. I'm just curious about whether there will be any interesting new ways to play. Come on, come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ The coolness of the mini-game in the early stage is mainly the reaction of people to the game in reality. The second one is the advantage that the protagonist has over NPCs as a player. Of course, it also includes the harem, the protagonist's real self-pretending, etc. I didn't watch it to make any comments later. This book is mainly about the realistic changes in the protagonist's game, and then the secondary one is about the protagonist's identity in the face of weirdness, and the occasional pretentiousness in the game, such as the scene with Lao Pan. There are many differences between the two. For example, the protagonist of the mini-game knew that the game would become a reality, so he deceived a "fairy palace". However, the protagonist here was unaware of it. As an ordinary player who knows nothing, it is normal to find a guide or a bug. It can be said that the game was teased by the protagonist, or it could be because the protagonist used his power to explain the bugs in the game without knowing it. For another example, the game can actually be a little more skinny, with some showy operations. In addition to exploiting visitors, provoking demons, etc., It can also add some more. For example, since it is a game that "plays" everything, it is the one who makes the rules of the game. Let alone becoming a space similar to the Lord God, it is okay to make the rules so that the various weird paradises under its command can fight with each other. Think about the weirdness of these different abilities that are fully improving the functions and materials of the game. Not to mention playing with the world struggle, not to mention the creation of an all-powerful main god space, they are just making it easy for a group of people to raise Gu.

I had a nightmare the night before yesterday, and when I woke up, I thought of suitable material for writing. Of course, the writing is limited and cannot describe the terrifying feeling The world has suffered a devastating blow. The last place for the remaining humans to survive is a circular corridor with no end in sight. The corridor is not a friendly place for people. There are all kinds of weird things in it, and they are extremely malicious to humans. They also hunt each other, forming a strange and harmonious ecological environment. The road in the corridor is rugged and bumpy. There are also some vigorous and simple giant trees in the corridor, connected together by vines. There is an invisible and unspeakable darkness on the right side of the corridor. There are some huge portals on the left side of the corridor. These portals are the living habitats of some ethnic groups, including of course the living habitats of humans. The portal is guarded by a golden light curtain. The protection method of light curtains is somewhat special. Take humans as an example: the protection method of light curtains is to simulate human behavior patterns. Of course, this protection method naturally has human shortcomings. What are the shortcomings of people, what are the shortcomings of this kind of protection. The formation of the light curtain is also related to a strange creature in front of the portal. This creature looks a bit like a dragon, but it looks a little inexplicably scary. Describe some details. The appearance of its body is composed of fine scales, which looks like a smooth layer of skin. It has no horns and no beards. The mouth is somewhat long, and the last third of the mouth is like a rattlesnake's mouth, and there are two fangs. The first two-thirds of the mouth looks like a crocodile and also has two fangs, so the description is a bit inaccurate. (Anyway, it still feels scary when I dream about it) This weird creature specializes in hunting creatures that come out of the portal. Of course, it won't hunt when it's full. The special thing about it is that when it devours a certain cub in a certain group. The thought of protecting this group will form a light curtain in the body of the strange snake to protect the cub. When the strange snake feels this strange thing in its body, it will choose to go to an empty portal where no other group survives, and spit out the cub and the guardian thoughts on the portal. In this way, the light curtain is formed. At this time, the cub is not out of danger yet, because only the light curtain and another light curtain behind form a mezzanine space. The living area behind the light curtain has not yet been formed. The living area needs the sacrifice of a group of people to be formed. This strange snake also knows the weakness of the light curtain. It will use its tail to reach in from the weak spot and hunt down the pup. At this time, the cub needs to be smarter and know how to hide in a relatively safe place. There are many trigger conditions for this event, so the probability of it happening is not high. Therefore, it is difficult for the ethnic group to expand its living area. The living area behind the light curtain is a simulation of the blue sky and the earth, but the actual living area is limited. There are also special expansion methods in the living area. The expansion of the living area requires the evil thoughts after the death of individuals of this group. After the evil thoughts gather together, they simulate human behavior patterns and carry out evil deeds against living people. Then the living people have to rack their brains to prevent the implementation of this evil idea. Finally, let the aggregate disappear. Of course it is not easy to eliminate this evil thought. Because you don't know what kind of combination of evil thoughts he will form.                                                                                                                                  Gonggan shrimps criminal, you not only have to stop his bows, but also stop his shrimps. There are other aspects of behavior that are not easily stopped. For example, with some bows, you just need to scare them away, while with others, you have to destroy them to solve the problem.