Great Zhou Tianwen Si

After reading books for more than ten years, this is one of the few that I can read slowly. Come on, author 🌹🌹🌹

I hope the author will make it clear that the Holy Dynasty you wrote about is the most powerful country, but some small countries are showing off every day, competing in front of the emperor, and just cheating on themselves and carrying out sneak attacks. After losing, the envoys of this small country still dare to cheat. Is the IQ of the small country you wrote so low? Can this inconsistent description be changed?

Let me talk about what I personally think is good: the book has a lot of dialogue, but it is not too verbose. It makes people read it. It has a sense of the atmosphere of an antique fantasy world. The various forces in the book are beginning to emerge and the layout is sophisticated. The exercises have a Taoist atmosphere, not the common simple five-element exercises like Ruijin Jue. The style of the book is very unique, and there are many charming things. It does not abuse the Lord or the Holy Mother. It is really worth reading as written. I just personally think that the description of fighting in the book is too rough. I feel that it is enough to just give it a very awesome name. The skills and magical powers are not systematic. When the cultivation level is low, it is easy to say. Even if you are a pentagon warrior, you have to know which skills are in which direction. If you don't have the potential, you should give up. In addition, I don't know if it was a problem during editing or the author didn't handle it well. The plot is incoherent in many places.

It was so low-key, and the previous article foreshadowed that Wentiansi was awesome and could destroy a thousand-year-old family, but it turned out that he couldn't even defeat a big demon. Pig's Foot was the top director of the Tianming Department, and there was only one subordinate named Li who came back and forth, and he was extremely poisonous.

One sentence, pretending to be profound, makes the preface and the follower irrelevant, and the cause and effect cannot be explained clearly. It's incomprehensible, the words are delicate and artificial, just a pile of rhetoric, and the words are polished and chirping, like a woman taking one step at a time.

You're actually lazy, changing every day, what's wrong with you 😡

In a novel about cultivating immortals, the best one you wrote is actually about the harem, and it is about a mother and her daughter. It simply ruins the outlook on life...

How should I put it? The content is incomprehensible and too taken for granted. He seems to be a stallion, and there is a bit of a minotaur plot. After reading a few pictures, the name of the protagonist changed three times. Keep using love to generate electricity.

It's not very clear. There seems to be a lot of settings, but I won't explain them clearly to you even if I just give you a brief taste of them. I don't want to talk about the settings dryly and follow the plot. But I've read ten chapters and still don't fully understand the settings of this book. Tianwensi is awesome, why is he so awesome? There are a lot of similar questions. The background of the protagonist is also vague. He seems to have some powerful subordinates. He has several concubines in a brothel, and there seems to be a scene where he forces a good girl into prostitution. I don't understand it very well. He takes someone else's young mistress to his own house to have an affair with him, but I don't understand it very well either.

Xiao Du, can the main character act more cheerfully? He is coy and speechless. He does not have any fairy tales or martial arts. The front part is okay, but the more you look at the back part, the more uncomfortable he becomes. What I want to see is the three-foot sword in my heart that can level the world. Ordinary things, or riding a sword and cultivating immortals to live freely in the world, but if you really can't do it, you can wake up and take over the world, get drunk and lie on the lap of a beautiful woman, or be more cliché, holding the sun and moon in your hands and picking stars. There is no one like me in the world. In summary, I am not happy at all watching it.

It's in the clouds, and the preface doesn't match the postscript. The details are not good, but it is readable but tiring. And there are bugs.

It feels like the protagonist has never practiced cultivation after becoming a master, and has been going through a bunch of messy plots.

Could you please write some backstory? It was a complete mess. I had no idea who the emperor was, whether there was an emperor or not, whether the world was full of sects or clans fighting for hegemony, what kinds of cultivation methods there were, and what the realms were. I just wanted to promote the plot, and the writing was very ingenious.

The preface does not match the postscript, which is inexplicable. Where is the centipede at the end of Chapter 41? It ends up in the county town for no reason? When I read Chapter 42, I thought it was the incarnation branch line, but I didn't expect it to disappear directly? I have one thing to say, the writing is okay. It would be better if it could be more simple, but the plot you wrote has no beginning and no end, which is really hard to watch.

Too few updates and often unstable timing are the main reasons for the poor performance of this book.

They plot and plot every day. These people practice just to plot and plot? The writing is very messy, you should rely on love to generate electricity, I can't stand it anymore

This book has some flavor, but unfortunately there are problems with the plot. It has a skeleton, but no skin or flesh. It is equivalent to a detailed outline, which is not enjoyable to read.

It looks so messy. It feels like there is a prequel that I haven't read yet.

I obviously read it bit by bit, but why do I always feel like I missed a lot of content when I was reading it?

It's okay, but there are too many jumps between chapters. Just make hay, it's tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I can make a blind guess. The subscription ratio is not very high 🙂 and it is possible that it will be hacked.

What a mess, I'm speechless😒

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