Not a Swordsman

Daoyi Geng is an old author. The first time I read the urban rebirth article, I read him. I sincerely hope that the author I am familiar with will become better and better, and there will be more interesting online articles for me to read! This book has changed its style, turning to the background of the Song Dynasty with literary refinement. The core remains the same as the wonderful, passionate and passionate description and portrayal of the heroine~ —— I wish the new book a great sale and a continuous increase in fans!

Let's not talk about anything else. Xiaochi and Jingyesi are at the same level? ? ? Just ask others and see how many people agree? In addition, the depiction of the main character smiling and laughing at all times not only makes people laugh, but is also very disgusting. Did you know?

I'm curious, if you are so literary, will it bring about the humiliation of Jingkang? If the border officials just send a bunch of green worms to talk nonsense, can they push the border directly to Russia, where the great writers of both sides sit on the city walls and chant poems to each other, chanting incomprehensible words to each other in the sky on the battlefield?

I really can't stand it anymore. Smile, smile, smile, smile. Can you change the word? Also, when you take your sister to dinner and make dirty jokes in the hall, other people don't think about it, so why doesn't your sister think about it? The protagonist doesn't have any good impression at all except for giving people a playful and smiling face.

I want to see a common man march across the Yangtze River with a sword!

The author is obviously good at writing about urban entertainment, but he insists on writing fantasy as if he is possessed by an evil spirit, and then he becomes a eunuch as if he is possessed by an evil spirit. When he reaches middle age, has a wife and children, how long are you going to write it?

Perfect Life Although the setting of concubinage is not pleasing, it is generally good, maybe because of the age of the song?

There is a problem with the settings. Can the copied poems be regarded as literate? Wouldn't the porter be self-aware? If copied poems can also increase one's strength, then high-ranking officials and dignitaries hire gunmen to write poems for them. They don't need to be very good poems, as long as they can increase their strength. If they increase their strength a little bit at a time, how will their strength be after ten years if they copy 100 poems a day?

Let's not talk about the old routines. It's obviously the beginning of the Song Dynasty, Li Sao, The Book of Songs of the Tang Dynasty, and Song lyrics are all out, but the first blood is actually Li Bai's Jingye Si of the Tang Dynasty? ? ? Come on, (Personal opinion: The author's poems before the Tang and Song Dynasties all used NPCs to express their words. I mainly focus on the Ming and Qing Dynasties and the Republic of China. The interweaving of the two sides is more innovative than your straightforward copying!)

When you copy something, you should at least read the background. How can a student like you, who has never traveled far, write Jingye Si Lai?

No, the fun part of an article like this is to appear holy in front of people. The protagonist writes three-star or above poems in front of everyone, which arouses everyone's admiration. However, in this book, the protagonist secretly wrote it behind people's backs. I was really convinced. All the chapters were mediocre. I really don't know how those who invested in it read it.

I predict that the book Xiaodao will never be finished. When the time comes, Xiaodao will not wield the knife, but I will.

To say something unpleasant about this mentality, why don't you write a crappy book? Go home and hold your child! Either he is a eunuch or he is a loser, he insists but does not insist, he wants character but does not have character! Be banned or banned forever!

Has the author been tricked by someone? If the transformation is too big, it is easy to get involved. How many of the original readers will buy it? The urban writing is so good. Instead of continuing to accumulate and expand the results and attract fans, what is the way to open a new pit and start over? ? The key is that this genre has been around a few years ago. It should be regarded as a niche setting in the genre of cultivating immortals. How do you ask readers to substitute for ancient poems about cultivating immortals? . .

The two brothers from the Guo family are plotting against you when they invest in you and give you money and a house. The little widow uses you to block an arrow and causes your father to be beaten. This is not a trick on you. In ancient times, men traveled around the world. The two brothers from the Guo family have talent, experience and connections in business. In ancient times, famous prostitutes had to have proper etiquette. Is that girl who fell into your arms really from a good family? Where is the popularity of literary people? Before leaving the county, I want to accept everything that falls in love with you?

The ancients valued reputation and integrity, and already had the label of disrespecting teachers. They wanted to accept a widow before marrying a wife, and they lost their future? Knowing that the ancients were harsh on women, they still teased women in public and took their money. Are all people who have traveled through time so out of tune?

Writing a book is so pretentious and tangled that it cannot withstand any blow, has no endurance, and is always a eunuch. Is it worthy of the readers who follow your book and the readers who pay for subscriptions? Just change the vest? Regarding the issue of character, your understanding of the word eunuch is the literal meaning. The two words eunuch are light and airy. These two words will be engraved in your bones as time goes by, making you weak and withdrawn until you are in eunuch. There are not so many do-overs in life. As soon as you have hope and the hope is great, kill it yourself. Your eunuch is not just a book, but a lifetime. Having said all this, good medicine tastes bitter, but words are always offensive to the ears. (I hope the author will delete this chapter and continue writing)

First of all, this kind of setting is prone to big bugs. Secondly, the protagonist is not very good at shaping it, and he always smiles. Also, the routine is too old and even a bit smelly. The last point is that it is too watery. A poem in a primary school textbook is watery for more than ten or twenty chapters. In the future, wouldn't it take hundreds of chapters to produce such masterpieces as "The Water Melody Song Headed to the East of the Yangtze River", "Spring River Flowers on a Moonlit Night", and "Sapphire Case" on New Year's Eve?

I feel like the protagonist of this kind of article should be more serious. Always look at me smiling, these few words are very funny. The last time I often saw the word "laughing" was in the last book. The protagonist traveled to DC and was trapped in the clown's body, becoming the clown's second personality. The whole person was equivalent to being polluted. After running out of the clown's body, he ran to Marvel... In that article, the protagonist's various smiles and laughter are closer to the character. This book is really exciting!

If the author still logs into this account, check out the book club. First of all, the subject matter of this book is really good, but the writing is really not good. Don't blame someone for scolding you. Even if you read it, you will find something wrong. I read it from beginning to end. In my opinion, there are only two shining points in this book, but they are just two sentences, and I marked them both. I know you just want to write a cool article that doesn't make sense, but the brain is also the reader's brain, not the author's brain. If you want to make money, you have to worry about it. Of course, if the book is good, some people are willing to spend money. Secondly, think more about the audience of each book. It's impossible for everyone to like every book. For example, I don't like Mao Niu's books very much. But if it doesn't prevent others from becoming popular, it will have its own audience. This is not a book like Sword Immortal or Wenzhao Gong. Everyone likes it, but most of us have gone to school to read poetry. Just write the poem and describe the scene in the poem. Baidu Encyclopedia can translate it better than this book. Plus, it is far-fetched. Isn't this a waste of things? When you read the life of a poet, a poem is a branch line, and a masterpiece that has been handed down from ancient times can be used as the main line to run through a book. You'd better write it and put it all in a basket at the end. Is this what people who love poetry can do? Can we readers be happy? Again, not to mention that this book has so many flaws... Stallion writing is no longer popular now, and your stallion at least has a stallion process. There are two women in this book. One gave the protagonist a sachet because of unrequited love. The other met three or four times. Are you going to do both? ? The protagonist is encouraged to run forward before the character's image has even been established. What do you think? You look like Peng Yuyan and all the women are sticking to you, right? Isn't this an insult to women? And the supporting characters, to be honest, none of them are vivid, just like a group of robots. They are bloodless. According to your description, the five stars are the first at the time. Good guy, for a bunch of garbage, you directly take out the most naughty things in your setting. I was still saying that the early stage should be obscene and developed. Be low-key, ordinary people who have no power to fight back at all. Five stars, six stars, and four stars appear one after another. Isn't it illogical? You blame others for scolding you for not writing well... Can't you be more modest? If you don't want to make hard money, don't write. Make trouble for yourself, or go and watch dancing. If you are good at dancing, he will do it again and strike again. But the writing is good and the plot setting is strong, and readers still post it in large numbers Finally, in a nutshell, it's okay for a newcomer to write this book. Just treat it as yy, smile, give a bad review and leave, but if you have a good time before you read this book, it's really disappointing. I collected this book because of the name "Sword and Plow", and the subject matter requires careful writing. I think you can do it. I just read it all the way, but I was really disappointed. Keep up the good work, it's a terrible Chinese New Year.

This book is very well written, and there are no flaws at all throughout the whole process! Why eunuch? ? ?

Eunuch, what a bad character. If it doesn't work, then write about Huayu

What happened to slash farming? This book has been out for 3 months and no new books have been published. What happened? I can't help but imagine some scary scenes 😂

The author explained that because the protagonist's threats of violence were officially considered a sideline, he was warned. The outline of the book was already written, but he could not continue writing because of this. It's like a chapter in Feng Xiao's novel where the protagonist kills a scum in the official force. A few hours after this chapter was released, Feng Xiao didn't explain it in a single chapter. It's really difficult to write a book now. This eunuch is a force majeure book.

To be honest, I am an lsp! That's right, I came here because of the author's previous driving skills. You can tell from my book list that my favorite is so vulgar! It can be seen that the author has a goal. This book uses literature and spirit as a way of cultivation. The background setting gradually unfolds. In addition to the yamen, a family of literati and poets who cultivate immortals, there is also an exclusive organization for eliminating demons, and warriors who practice martial arts... Most importantly, the prime minister's family The granddaughter, the widow who is willing to be an extramarital wife, and the deserted curtain heroine, suck~ Generally speaking, the writing style tends to be relaxed, and the veteran author's writing is good. The protagonist's three views are positive and occasionally show off, and I'm really happy about that postscript! —— I hope the author will update it quickly, so that more and more people will read the book, sparking and lightning along the way! Young ladies don't need too much, more than one slap is enough🐶

Pick up the common people and write about them. What you write about this rubbish is worse than others.

Raise it up and starve you to death, then dig it out when it becomes popular or unfinished 😃

Have you changed your vest? Does anyone know?

The author's writing style is quite good, but I can't continue to write online novels. If the writing is not clear or white, you can refer to the most holy chapters of Confucianism and Taoism to continue writing. . . I suggest the author write fictional historical novels, which are probably much better.

This introduction can dissuade many people.