Qianlang

This opening is really good. Usually when we watch time travel and rebirth, everyone has a task at the beginning, explaining who the protagonist is, how he wears it, what he was before wearing it, and what he is after wearing it. When most people write, they just explain the setting and it is difficult to get into the characters. A better thing is to add a long paragraph of psychological description. If the text itself is really good, then this paragraph is good. But it is indeed rare to see an author handle it this way. In fact, it should be handled this way. After time travel, a person will have to respond to the mutated environment, and he will eventually accept this change. So the question is, through what? Walking, feeling the body, brushing teeth, washing face, and sorting clothes are the most daily actions. However, isn't it through these daily actions that people "prepare themselves"? In fact, this is also a common technique. We see in many classic stories that when the protagonist has experienced a major setback or is preparing to make a major decision, he will perform similar actions such as combing his hair, looking at himself in the mirror, or putting on decent clothes. The significance is to release a "preparing" signal and make the "ready" result more convincing. The author's arrangements for brushing his teeth are particularly good. First, there is perception, the body has sensation, then we see, see the environment and books, and we have a specific guess about the person's identity, and then there are actions that symbolize the characteristics of the character. As a hungover student, it is natural to wash up now that he wakes up. Finally, in the process of behavior, the emotion finally slowly surges up, reaches a certain intensity, and solidifies into a solid state of mind, oh, I have traveled through time, and I want to live well. The whole arrangement is very appropriate. This is rare.

Author, don't try to criticize those literary youths who have some things but don't have them! Most people are not interested in appreciating a perverted psychological process, nor are they interested in his inner transformation. We just want to watch the story of a romantic talent, rather than appreciate the perverted heart of a perverted freak. Get back on track as soon as possible, otherwise the results will speak for themselves, believe me.

There are too many women, and I often see a name and don't know who it refers to 😢

Lao Dao writes that China Entertainment is called a chicken thief. They directly create a parallel time and space, and the stars are all edited. However, some people can still match their personalities in this time and space, so they have a sense of immersion, which is very important! Lao Dao has nothing to say about the power of writing. The main character is clear and the main plot is clear. People who watch it have nothing to criticize. The other best thing is the creation of the female protagonist. Hey, one or more female protagonists. Second, experienced drivers have a driving experience. Third, Lao Dao has a mature woman plot just like me. The only thing I don't understand is whether Lao Dao is a certain point's biological son? Let alone driving, other people will have their accounts banned if there are too many female protagonists. How can Lao Dao be so good at it? I don't understand, but this novel is good, so I followed it!

I just read dozens of chapters, it's very well written! The pacing is also very good, and I can't stand it in this comment section. Why does it have to be completed in one chapter, becoming a god, two chapters and promoting a girl? ? If you can't stand it, watch it elsewhere, brothers. 🤫

According to the current pace of writing, as long as the protagonist is not written as a god in the later stage, there will definitely be more people watching it.

I tried reading a few chapters, but I always felt like I was copying the outline directly, and there was too little character interaction. It was not the characters that drove the plot, but the plot that drove the plot. More suitable for readers who have a relatively long reading time. I'll watch it again when I have time.

Water revenue has started again. Author, how obsessed are you with these numbers?

Now that you're done, it's time to start writing songs. Forget about the TV series, it's too bad to support.

Haha, I knew I would come back in the end. You have a wife and children, do you think life outside is easy? Dai is pretending to be a literary youth in the comfort zone of Internet literature, but in fact you don't have the capital at all. The last book also said we would never meet again. Tsk tsk, the slap in the face came so quickly. I thought you could last at least a year.

Many people say that the protagonist is a scumbag, but in fact he is indeed a scumbag. But what is different from ordinary novice entertainment novels is that Gengda, who is a little bit literary, clearly writes the reasons why the protagonist is a scumbag. The protagonist in the previous life was a patient with ALS who had been lying in bed for many years. He could not do anything. The only thing he could do was to wait for death. So he is extremely possessive and eager for women's bodies, and he will not refuse beautiful women. Another point that is different from ordinary entertainment articles is that I think the description of women in the entertainment industry is quite objective. In order to get the upper hand, sleeping with someone is not sleeping with anyone. To paraphrase Deng Chao's words: This is a group of young people who work hard. After all, if you don't work hard, there are many people who are willing to "work hard". As long as you are popular, you will be the "goddess" in the eyes of the public. As for what it looks like in private, who cares? Another difference from general entertainment literature is that the author does not sell his works to this one and that one like selling cabbage. Each of his works has played its due role and received the benefits it deserves. If others want my works, they can exchange them for something, either profits or people. This is a novel for adults. You will know that in the adult world, there is no right or wrong, only pros and cons. If you want to gain, you must first pay. As long as you get enough, there is nothing unacceptable.

After two reincarnations, I was still so uneasy when I met a girl, so I was convinced. A pure girl, no matter how beautiful she is, can only make people feel happy. Li Jiaxin is so beautiful, but she has never seen those male celebrities lose their composure in public. It just feels so low and I can't stand it anymore. To be honest, I might as well live a perfect life. Although I feel boring after the perfect life. In addition, why does the opening have to be related to the Three Kingdoms? Can there be any new ideas if this is really related? For example, if you use songs from the anime version of Three Kingdoms as interludes, at least make some changes. In order to prevent being sprayed, I posted the fan rating of Perfect Life.

I gave up on VIP. To be honest, I was very surprised after reading dozens of chapters at the beginning. Whether it is the storyline or character creation, I can see the full skill of the author. Later, I took down Aunt An, then Liu Mi, and finally Jiang Qianqian, then Qi Yuan, and then Sun Xiaoyan. The frequent physical entanglements with women actually didn't make me feel happy as a reader, because this is not a pornographic novel, and you can't write the big scale I want to see, so why do you keep worrying about what to write about in bed? Moreover, seeing the protagonist extending his evil claws to one cute girl after another, he became inexplicably more and more angry. Wu Bing, Zhou Shunqing, one after another ignorant girls were harmed by him, and they could not accept it emotionally. If you like two people at the same time, you might say that person is passionate, but if you like ten or eight people at the same time, you can only call him a scumbag. From another perspective, if one of the female protagonists finds another partner because the male protagonist does not have enough companionship, the protagonist will definitely not be able to let go, right? If you can't share your woman with anyone else, how can other women share you with many other women? In addition, the plot is also written unreasonably. One song "Dream Chaser" became so popular that everyone kneeled down and licked it. Luo Dayou wrote so many songs and he was not so popular, right? What's more, Dream Chaser is not Luo Dayou's masterpiece. In the blink of an eye, two or three songs become popular and the annual income is over 100 million. It's incredible. Exaggerated. It's a pity, it's like eating a plate of delicious sweet and sour fish and finding out halfway through that you don't have enough intestines in your stomach, so you gave up the book. Fortunately, I didn't recommend this book to my book friends, otherwise it would really lower my taste.

The writing is okay, but in Chapter 164. One person rushed directly to the podium and asked him to compose lyrics and music on the spot. This was unreasonable and difficult. Then the protagonist should not agree to make things difficult, even if he is capable, but the protagonist agrees. In my opinion, this is not pretentious, but a sign of cowardice and waste. It's like a robber blocking you at the door and asking you to hand it over. It's the same as 100,000 yuan. You tell the robber that not only do I have to pay 100,000 yuan, but I also have to pay you an additional 1 million yuan because I want to show off.

Nai Qi Nai is holding your book, be careful.

The most disgusting pseudo-literary among literary youth writers. It can be said that his spine was broken by life. It is not easy.

The aesthetic of this author's song really makes people vomit. The time anchor of this novel is 2016. It turns out that they are all old songs from the 80s and 90s, and they are all huge hits. It really makes people laugh. Good old songs are indeed classics, but they cannot become popular without the background of the times. Modern songs The arrangements and compositions are all remixes. The simple 3-section melody of the past is simply inaudible. What's more, the main consumer group of music is young people. Do you see any middle-aged people buying albums online every day and unable to let go of the past authors who were famous in the past? I am over 30 years old, but I am very accepting of new things.

I feel a bit like appendix, please comment if you agree.

I feel that the author really has some problems and is a bit procrastinating. Moreover, he writes the protagonist in a pretentious and twisted manner, and excessively pursues human feelings and sophistication, which makes people feel suffocated and panicked from time to time.

Lao Dao is really not worthy of watching the original version because he is the king of bad movies.

From the beginning of his endorsement of women's clothing, the protagonist has been sexually emasculated by Western stereotypes! Like those Japanese and Korean male celebrities, he has been reduced to a delicate duck, a tool to please women, but has lost his basic male characteristics. What's even more ridiculous is that the protagonist did this on his own initiative for money, and he took the initiative to label himself an "actor". Some things can be ridiculed, but the protagonist is obsessed with money. On the surface, it is conducive to cashing out traffic, but it makes him a person with no bottom line in the eyes of the people.

There is a fanfic called "The Waves Are Also Waves", which feels more realistic and touching than the original work. The darkness and filth of the entertainment industry, the helplessness and compromise of men and women, the degradation and destruction are all written in a profound way. Emotional betrayal and deception, interest exchange and entanglement make people deeply question the existence of love.

Although the author does not admit it, he is actually a eunuch.

Welcome back, Lao Dao. Don't put too much pressure on yourself. I'll read whatever you write. If you don't have any ideas, I'll just wait.

It's good enough... I just read it yesterday, and then I ordered it all overnight. When I saw the latest, you just finished the book for me. The same thing happened to the previous book, but it suddenly stopped writing. It's really... It's good enough. I can't say bad words, I can only wish you peace in the future. I will not read your book again, thank you.

A classic harem novel, written better than the previous one. I guess it ended a bit suddenly because of the mentality of being sprayed by the trolls. It's okay, author. I will vote for you if I have a monthly ticket. I will give you a monthly ticket when I finish the book. I am not your die-hard book fan. I only gave you a vote for harem novels, which really not many people can write. Your book is good.

To be honest, I feel really uncomfortable watching it. The most toxic thing is writing songs on the spot. It's okay to write once or twice. How many times has this been yours? No matter how talented you are, there is a limit, and live songwriting is an old routine from several years ago. You said that in the past, when people wanted songs and they were not in a hurry, you would write slowly for them. Now you suddenly have to write songs. Can you understand it? You have used one thing several times. Do you have nothing to write?

The plot is okay, but I just checked the songs according to the playlist and didn't find a few good songs. As a result, Parallel World copied one song and became a hit. It's very dramatic.

When I wrote about the outburst at the award ceremony, it was too poisonous. It's already 2022, and there is still this kind of plot set up just to show off. The author is not only lazy but also cliched. Readers are always growing, don't always use this idiotic method that is like poisoning.

The songs selected in this book are all like shit, niche, and not very popular.