A Common Man Marches East Across the River with His Sword in Hand

The title and introduction of the book are attractive Excuse me, Shen Nong... Is there any romance about a novice picking up girls? If not, prepare to fall into the pit, there will be a book shortage during the Spring Festival.

Not only is the update slow, but the pace is also difficult, so I just put it in the book area.

It is no longer clear whether the protagonist is cultivating immortality or working as a civil servant.

The protagonist's IQ is online, the supporting characters have their own characteristics, it's great👍Come on💪

This style makes people feel comfortable to read, and I look forward to the follow-up development.

The setting of the novel is a framework, and whether it is perfect or not depends on how it is filled in later. Judging from the existing text, the plot setting is macroscopically combined with "trends", but there are many shining points in the details, which makes it feel wonderful and wonderful. Now it seems that it is a good novel with skillful and reliable writing and novel plot arrangement. I look forward to more updates, but I also hope to ensure the quality. It is difficult to grasp this contradiction.

I've already watched it and it's okay. I'll give you a monthly pass and keep it to watch again.

After reading the first four chapters, Guangyao Li's surname was revealed to be Zhou. I then read the first chapter and found out that his surname was Zhou. I don't know if I can continue reading.

Come and support me, Lao Dao's new book.

Lao Dao, I have read every one of your books. Although this new book only has a few chapters, it is written very delicately and carefully, making it very comfortable to read. You have to work hard, I have invested 100RMB in your new book, and I am waiting for you to become as popular as your first book! ! ! In addition, the gods have been released. With such a good setting, it would be a pity not to finish it... Anyway, I wish Lao Dao's new book a great success.

Is this how the monster is sold? If you have never eaten pork or seen a pig running, you don't even know its value.

The author's writing style is actually quite good. This may be because the results of his first book "Perfect" were too good. Later, he had too high expectations for "Motosuri" and did not continue to persevere before achieving the desired results. In fact, "Motosuri" started well. I will continue to read this book, hoping that it will not disappoint me. People who give negative reviews should not read it if they don't want to read it, and don't say nonsense in the comments!

This book is good-looking. It is very comfortable to listen to it on the reading system. The writing is smooth and has a strong sense of immersion. I also hope that the heroine of this book will not deliberately write it. The world of this book is very real. Of course, it is a novel. It only relies on the development of skills and supernatural powers. The exploration of the world is a big selling point, and the protagonist's mirror gold finger can be sharpened. This makes me feel less involved. The author can also play a cultivation simulator game. There are many cultivation elements in it. I hope the author can keep this state. Please review this novel. The heroine should not force herself or lick her. The story should not revolve around women. There is still a lot of vitality in this novel. These are just my thoughts, just take a look, just take a look, don't be affected.

What I want to say is that a good book is not afraid that no one will read it, and the author must never forget his original intention. Come on＾0＾~

I have been reading books for 10 years, and I feel that it is not suitable for me to read. Every word is full of imagination. Of course, I don't mind if someone complains about my account. After all, it is just a software and an account.

Excellent book There are three reasons 1. Real and credible social form, lifelike and full of life. 2. The protagonist does not need all kinds of clumsy ways to cover up. In fact, a strong man must have wisdom, and those golden fingers, no matter how wasteful they are, are just a few gangsters in the alley. 3. Regardless of the ancient culture and wording and sentences, they are remarkable and non-toxic. The author is a great talent!

This book! Less than 40,000 words! They have all become sacrifices! ! Too cruel! ! !

The followers of the evil god came to watch the sacrifices being sacrificed~

Lao Dao, the gods have been released but you have opened a new book....😭😭

The author's literary youth problem was cured as soon as possible, and the writing was so good that he stopped updating it. In fact, the story is quite well written and has a very visual feel. If it can be made into a TV series, it will not be much better than those hormone-injected "youth idol dramas"

Abandoning books and changing from fairy tales to urban superpowers (alternative history), I want to read fairy tales. Instead of the whining detective Di Renjie and the four famous arrests.

A person's character is innate. You can write a book based on your character. You can't change it even if you want to. Even if you imitate others and pretend to be others, how long can you pretend? Write down hundreds of thousands or millions of words. You will definitely not be able to stand that feeling. If you continue, you will collapse. Just like those green writers, he couldn't help it. He could pretend to be a normal person at first for the sake of grades, but after he wrote for a while, he would be exposed. Even if his grades plummet, he still wants to be a cuckold, because he has that kind of character, and people can't deceive themselves. You want to write a heroic and mysterious story, which is difficult, because you are an urban romance writer, and writing about the bourgeoisie life in the context of spiritual recovery is already the limit. If you want to change, it means you are fed up with the stupidity of the petty bourgeoisie. At this time, what you need to read is not those passionate novels or history books; it is the Selected Works of Mao and Das Kapital. What you need is a tool, a tool to interpret the world from a new perspective. A change in perspective will fundamentally change your story

A book with 630,000 words, how do you get the daily guide? What do you think of the location editor? Can you tell us about your journey? What are the standards for daily guides?

A copy of the scripture costs 50 copies, and the fox sold it for 1,250 copies. Is it worth it? If the fox sells it, the Hu family won't be able to find you anymore? Easier to find. Aren't you afraid of hurting your family?

Although the book is a eunuch for the time being, there are a few words that I can't say without feeling happy! I have read The Perfect Life and was shocked by the book. The type of book is entertainment. I have always dismissed this type of book. It is nothing more than plagiarizing ideas and breeding people everywhere! As a result, Lao Dao took this cliched plot to a new level. Where is the height? The writing style, plot, plot structure design, etc. Are higher than similar works. This is because the author's level is higher than others, so it is not worth it. What makes Perfect different from other books? The character descriptions are extremely vivid, and the emotional descriptions are delicate and true. There are not many online articles that can write to this level, which is why Perfect is so successful. This also shows that Lao Dao's strengths are characterization and emotional description. Forgive me, the king of phenomenal works. I have read more than 100 chapters and I really can't stand it. Why, it's funny for the sake of being funny. The characters are dull and symbolic, and the emotional descriptions are there. It's just a joke. This is actually a common problem with most online articles. I recently watched Nine Stars. The plot, creativity and structure are quite good. The overall level is higher than that of Dawang. I have caught up with the update. However, the biggest problem in it is the description of girls. I don't think it is that I dare not write or promote it, but I simply cannot control it and can't write anything. In my opinion, online novels, except for some historical novels and special types, cannot avoid the heroine and emotional description in the book. And if it is missing or dealt with perfunctorily, it is like a dish without salt. No matter how high-end and rich the ingredients are, and how well you fry them, the result will be bland and unpalatable. I hope that writing so much can touch Lao Dao. Continue to work in your area of ​​expertise.

They are all eunuchs, so I still push the starting point. . . 🤮

Does the author have a habit of writing multiple female protagonists? If not, I'll chase you

At the beginning, the three eunuch books felt like they were masterpieces. Then I apologized, saying that I either failed in writing or had poor grades. I was confused. My plot hadn't been developed yet. Do I have to compare myself with the top masterpieces? Pretentious!

. . Is this cultivation system collapsed? I kept the automatic subscription turned on. I just read about 30 chapters, and suddenly I saw that the powerful practitioners can move mountains and fill seas, and they can only live to be 100 years old. This is a bit confusing, this is not a Japanese comic

The Moon Rabbit was sick. Chang'e took the Moon Rabbit to Yuelao for treatment. After seeing the doctor, Yuelao sighed: "It's hopeless. Let's prepare for the funeral!". Chang'e was very sad: "Say what wish you have, and I will help you realize it." Moon Rabbit was very moved: "I hope I can eat a carrot without fishy smell before I die."